MaNan FF- me and u(chapter 15-pg 91)(abhi toh journey suru hui hai) - Page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wah kya dream tha ..
god pov was superb ..

amazing ...

cont soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
waw kitna hot dream tha
superb😊
i think manik ne nandu ka
chehra dekha tha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a cute update.
Manik was dreaming about her.
Hahahah.
The dream was crazy.
Also the conversation with god.
Hell funny.
He has become typical love sick foe.
He must have seen Nandini between the stars.
I'm sure he must have gone to her place to at least to have a glance of her.
So cute he is.
Thanks for update & pm.
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow that was beautiful awesome chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 8B

Manik was sitting in his car driving towards the destination. He halted in front of the mansion. He came down of his car and looked at his watch it was 4:30 am still time for sunrise, he knew she would be awake by now. He picked up his phone and was going to call her when he saw her coming towards the window with wide eyes. He smiled at her reaction.

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Nandini woke up at 4 am for her riaz, she changed and was going to open the door of her room to do the riaz when she felt as if manik near her. She looked around and then slapped her head saying"srsly...nandini tu na manik ke liye puriii pagal ho gayi hai" she was going to go down again when her eyes fell on the open window cursing her maid with not so deadly curses she went to close her window when she saw manik there. She widened her eyes and then rubbed them to confirm that he was really there.she went down .

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Manik was driving the car . both were silent and just stealing glances . nandini finally broke the silence.

Nandini- so tum itni jaldi mera ghar ke samne kya kar rahe the aur hum jaa kaha rahe hai

Manik smiled at the question as it was the 100th time she had asked the question in the whole route.

Manik- nanny kitni baar ek question puchogi chup no words warna u will regret

He pointed naughtily towards her lips and nandini instantly put her fingers on lips making him smirk.

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Like finally after half an hour drive manik finally stopped the car. He looked at his watch it was 4:58 am . befre nandini could ask something he instantly took her hand and dragged her.

Nandini- manik ab batao bhi kya hai

He didn't answered her questions and say the watch

Manik- just 15 secnds left.

He instantly brought her in front and closed her eyes with his hand

Manik- ab kuch mat pucho bas 5 secs left...5...4..3...2...1...open ur eyes

Nandini opened her eyes the view was breath taking it was the rising sun making a beautiful horizon.

Wow was the word that she could utter. Mmanik smiled at her reaction.

Manik- so u liked it

Except of answering she hoped in his arms taking him aback for a sec

Nandini- srsly manik like...I jud=st loved it sooo much

Manik felt contend that he could make her happy.

Manan looked the view for sometime .

Nandini suggested that since the came to the beach then why don't have a short walk.

Both started walking. Nandini was feeling the fresh breeze and enjoying the surrounding .while manik's fully engrossed in admiring her..

Suddenly, something hit her mind..

Nandini- waisa manik tum itni jaldi mera ghar ke samne kya kar rahe the

Manik looked at her and remembered his dream how could he tell her about it.

Manik- who.. arre..main..tumhe yaha lana cahta tha isiliye..haan..Tumhe surprise dena cahta tha ...haan..yahi reason hai..

Nandini looked at him sus[iciously

Nandini= really!!! Par jaha tak mujhe pata hai tum toh 7 baje se phle uthte bhi nahi ho toh yeh kaisa hua.

Manik looked here and there but suddenly something striked his mind

Manik- k min..tumhe kaisa pata mai 7 baje uthta hu maine toh tumhe nahi bataya

Now. It was nandini's term to search for an excuse.

Nandini- who..mujhe..haan..aunty ne bataya..ay..u kw..jaisa..jaisw tumhe ma ne baataya waisa mujhe aunty ne bola..

Manik - acha !!!

Manik raises his eyebrow and nandini nods.

And before he could ask anything further she said"offo yaar sab detective maat bano chalo ghar janna hai chalo"

Saying she dragged him with her and making him smile on her"haq jatana"on him

SO THE BEST GUESS WAS OF SHARON BABU

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow manan watching sunrise together...

Peaceful morning...
I was sure ki nandu k paas he jaayega...
Bt bas manan confession ho jana chahiye jldi...
Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice
Loved it
Manan r too cute
Please make them confess soon
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm... nd thanks for pm..
Update ch 9 soon waiting eagerly..;-)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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kintu ki karu
jana kiman digdar asae kaibal net khulib karne
tur lai mai kene o coment ksari asu
sporrry
janu mai superrr late
kintu mur prob tai jaana na
sorry again
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the updates
from chapter 1 to 8
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