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CHAPTER 7

Manik comes back home. He has an enchanting smile on his face which doesn't get unnoticed by his just returned parents. He was lost in his own world and walking upstairs to his room when his mother calls him.

He turns towards them and he then notices that his parents are back.

He goes towards them and hugs both of them which they appreciates.

Manik- dad!! Mom!! App kab aaye??!! Aur apne mujhe phone kyu nahi kiya!!?? I would have came to pick u up

All the while talking to his parents he smit had the smile on his face. His parents looked t wards each other and smiled understanding ki unke son ke dil ko"kuch toh hua hai"

Mr. malhotra- niyo don't u think manik aaj kuch zaaada hi smile kar raha hai. I mean just look at his face it's glowing

Manik shyly looks away understanding what his parents mesan.

Niyo- omg!! Sirf who hi nahi raj(manik's father) yeh kuch zadda hi blush kar raha hai...lagta hai college mei kuch SPECIAL hua hai

She focus on "special" intntioly. Manik smiles .

...

Nandini reaches her home and sees her parents sitting on the sofa. She goes near them and hugs her mom from back.

Nandini- mom!!!!!!!! I love uuu sooo much!!!

Her parents r surprised but smiles. Her mother puts her hand on her face affectionly and says

Radha(nandini's mother)- I love u too beta!! Par aaj itna pyaar kyu aa raha hai ! kuch special hua hai kya!!

Nandini on hearing special remembers something and blushes which doesn't get unnoticed be her father, kishore.

Kishore- special toh zarrur hua hai dekho toh yeh kitna blush kar rahi hai!!

Nandini smiles and comes in front and lies her head in her mother's lap

Nandini- aaj kuch hua toh hai..

Radha&kishre- kya!!

She smiles.

...

Manik s parents r sitting on the bed and manik's head is in his mothers lap and she is ruffling her hair

Niyo- toh bataiye kya hua

Manik smiles.

>>>>>>>>>>>FLASHBACK(2 HOURS AGO)<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Both manan reach the college and as soon as they enter in the class, they see there frnds sitting on the table and the class is empty. There frnds r having a smile on there faces. Cabir gets up from his place

Cabir- (coming between manan and putting hands on tere shoulders)- gys see who is back.. ek min ka kaam bol ke pure do ghante gayab rane wale wapas aa gaye

Mukti- right cabir!! Who choro aur yeh batao ki kya hua...

Manan look at each other and smile

Cabir(surprised face)-omg!!!!!!!! Dude don't tell me u still didn't do it!

Manik smiles at cabir and gives a "u-r -right" face

Cabir- kya yaar mujhe laga ki fireworks honge aur yaha toh diwali bhi nahi mani..

Nandini who gets confused on listening this ask

Nandini- cabir what diwali -fireworks u r talking about...mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha

All look at Nandini with a aww... expression while manik goes full lattooo on her innocence

Cabir- yaar nandu u r really..like really-really good ...hamari baato pe dhyan mat do hum toh yuhi kuch bhi bolte rahte hai...

Nandini makes a cute pout while cabir pulls her cheek making others laugh and manik wanting to eat Nandini alive for her cuteness

Cabir0 accha yaar!! Firework nahi hua toh koui nahi par akhir hua kya who toh bata

Manik looks at Nandini who nods her head in assurance but suddenly her phone rings . she exvuses herself and takes the call while manik narrates the caf incident to his frnds, skipping the "not so kiss scene" part.

Cabir- waah mera sher..teri stry ekdam track par ga rahi hai..pehle dosti hui

Mukti- uske baad pyaar hoga

Alya- phir propose hoga

Aryaman- phir shad hogi(winking at him)

Navya- aur phir HONEYMOONNN peee...

She deliberatle stretches the word "honeymoon" while manik looks at her with wide eyes

Manik- yaar! Tumlogo ne toh mera pure future ki planning kar rakhi hai... thora stop maro...aur don't tell this in front of Nandini...

And before he could tell something ,Nandini comes back after attending her call and says that she needs to go home as her parents r back.

Manik gets sad on hearing this , but this time his frnds becomes his savior

Navya- haan theek hai tum jao par..

Looking at manik

Navya- par tumhara yeh new "friend" hai nay eh tumhe drop kar dega and no"no" this time coz I sam aaj tum car se nahi aayi ho

All seconds her while manik's heart is doing salsa, bhangra, kuchupudi, kathak and all kinds of dances.

Nandini looks at manik and then nods.

Manik grins and murmurs a sweet thank u to his frnds .who shows him thumbs up.

Manik and Nandini leaves from the college.

Navya- yaar yeh dono kitne cute lagte hai na ek saath ... kash yeh jaldi se ek ho gaye

Cabir puts his hands on her waist and says

Cabir- jaisa hum dono hai

And winks at her while navya bcomes crimson an hugs him.

Mukti- yaar ab yahi mat shuru ho gao tum dono

Aryaman comes near her and puts his hand around he shouler

Aryaman- don't listen to her cabir tu continue kar mai abhi shuru karta hu

Getting a punch from mukti

Dhruv- arre tum log toh yahi shuru ho gaye toh mai akela kyu rahu mai bhi start karta hu

He pulls alya toward himself and takes her in a back hug putting his chin on her shoulder.

Cabir- jisko jo karna hai karo mai toh apni wali ke sath ja raha hut tum logo ka bhi jo man jo who karo so bye bye

And leaves with navya who somehow murmurs a bye to there frnds

And MukYa and DhruvLya too leaves saying not so good bye;)

...

Manik's car

Manik is driving the car and talking with Nandini about her experience and everything in these 10 years.

Manik- so did u had any bf?

Though he knew it would be a no but still he wanted to hear from her mouth.

Nandini- of couse not!! They were all soo cheap means nobody loved each other mera kuch frnds toh roz breakup aur new bf-gf banate rahte the

Manik smiles on getting the answer he expexted. When suddenly something hit his mind.

Manik- so nanny... what kind of boy do u want

Nandini looks at manik for a second

(murmuring)tumhara jaisa

Thiugh manik does't hear anything clearly but asks

Manik- kuch kaha tumne...

Nandini- no !! kyu kuch sunna cahte ho

Manik looks here and there while Nandini not able to control herself on seeing his condition laughs loud, manik smiles on this and stopps the car suddenly, when an evil idea strikes his mind

He looks at Nandini, who had stopped laughing till now and looking at him assumed

Manik starts leaning towarda Nandini who leans back

Manik- haan suna cahta hu(leaning closer)

Nandini(in trance)- kya

Manik- yeh..yeh ki

Nandini- ki

Manik puts his gaze on her ips and looks at nandini and lean closer towards her who closes her eyes

Manik looks at her and smirks and moves closer toward her ear except her lips

Manik- yehi ki tumhe..tumhe kaisa larka cahiye

He slightly brushes his lips with her ear and comes back. Anndini takes a moment to register his words and opens her eyes with a jerk

Nandini- WHAT!!

Manik what what!!kyu tum kuch aur expect kar rahi thi

Nandini blushes and replies stammeringly

Nandini- na..anahi..woh..woh..mai...haan..i m..ean..no ..

Manik smiles on her condition and accelerates the car

Manik- who choro aur batao ki tumhe kaisa larka cahiye!!
Nandini thinks for sometime and says

Nandini- he should be tall like really tall

Manik's thought- who toh mai bilkul hu

Nandini- braoad shoulders . handsome. Cute, aur most important cahe yeh sab ho ya na he should have a good heart

Manik looks at her and says- waisa what do u think do I have a good heart

Nandini- arre not good...u have the world's best heart really!!
manik smiles on hearing compliment from his love

Manik- thank you

Nandini- mention not!!

Suddenly something comes in nandini's head

Nandini- waisa tumhe kaisi larki cahiye

Manik- mujhe...mujhe ek sweet, innocent, super cute, and golden heart larki cahiya ..

Looks at her for a moment

Manik- maybe just like u

Nandini shys and says- manik mera ghar aa gaya hai so stop

Manik too notices that he was so engrossed in talking to her that he didn't notice that , they reached her home . he unwillingly stopps the car.

Nandini-bye manik

Manik holds her hand

Maik- aisa rukha sukha bye nahi chalega

Nandini- toh kaisa

Manik in a second kisses her cheek and says- this is a bye

Nandini looks at him surprised and and blushes and leaves the car saying bye to him.she runs to her home and manik ruffles his hair looking at her direction and then goes home.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>FLASHBACK END<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Manan tells their parents all this skipping the car part.

...

Manik's home

Raj- wah beta bahut ache bilkul sshi gar aha hai tu proud of u ki tune use abhi nahi bataya

Niyo- haan par I m just waiting ki Nandini kab hamara ghar ki bahu banegi

Manik smiles and then murmuring bye they leave to there room leaving manik who sleeps thinking about his princess.

...

Nandini's home

Nandini tells her parents all the story

Radha- I m so happy beta sach me manik bahut hi aacha larka hai

Kishore- who toh theek kaha tumne ..achabeta ab um kal baat karenge abhi bahut raat ho gayi hai tum so jao

After the"good night wishing session" they leave to there room.

Nandini too sleeps after thinking about her prince

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CHAPTER 5

Next morning

As per the same schedule, manik got up at 6 and went behind nandini only to be teased by his parents and then to college.

College

Manik enters the canteen finding his frnds and find them sitting and chilling out. He goes near them and takes a seat smiling. But, his full attention is on the gate (bolo kyu??!! ;)

When suddenly someone enters the canteen bringing smile on manik's face and a smug on the face of cabir, who had been noticing manik from quite a while. (Obio the person can be only ...who???Guess karo ;)

Cabir look back and finds the most expected face...nandini ;)

Nandini had just entered the canteen, without noticing fab 5 and was busy on her phone when suddenly cabir called her

She looks at him and smiles at whole fab 5 whose attention had turned to her bcoz of cabir's shout, they call her to sit with them which she accepts with a sweet smile. And her eyes look at manik but then shyly she removes her gaze thinking about last night.

She goes near them and sits beside mukti and in front of manik but doesn't look at him even for once, but has a blushing smile on her face. While majnu is smiling like an idiot looking at nandu.

And how can the evil frnds miss a chance to tease these two.

Cabir- yaar mukti tujhe nahi lagta ki yaha ka atmosphere bahut LOVELYYY ho gaya hai

He delibratly strechtes the word lovely looking at manan, which makes nandu scarnett and manik roll jis eyes..

Mukti- kya bol raha hai tu?? Tujhe lovely lag raha hai??!! Mujhe toh bahut smily smily lag raha hai... dekh na manik kaisa smile kiye ja raha hai..

Manik smiles sarcastically

Manik- accha!! Toh tujhe kya problem hai...don't u knw smiling is good for health...

Alya- really!! Ok!! Par nandu tum kyu smile kar rahi ho aur tumhara gal ekdam tamatar ban chuke hai...

Nandu looks here and there and says stammering

Nandini- who... nahi mai..kaha...who...

All suppress there laugh but majnu is lost in her

Cabir- who... nahi mai..kaha...who...lagta hai tum bhi manik ki tarah believe karti ho ki smiling is good for health ,m I right or m I right??!!

All giggle on this while manik glare them and nandu turn more red.

She somehow comp[osing herself speakes

Nandini- guys it's time for the class.so we should leave

All nod when manik says

Manik- who guys u go ahead I have some work with nandini

All look at manik smilingly thinking he's gonna tell nandu what he feels and start coghing heritacally without reason..

Manik gets irritaded and nandu again blushes

Manik- kya!! Maine bolo ki mujhe ussse baat karni hai..jao..aur plz use a handkerchief when u cough..Manner nahi ha kya...abhi jao

All giggle and goes but not before passing manik and saying

Cabir- takes it slow!!

On which manik glares him

Mukti- keeps it safe

On which manik widens his eyes and looks at mukti surprisingly on which mukti winks

Aryaman- do it today

Manik smiles at him

Navya- matarani sab theek rakhengi..

Manik folds his hands in front of her..

Dhruv- all the best buddy

Manik mumbles a sweet thank u

Alya- tell her today

On which manik gives a uncertain look

All go and then manik look at nandini who was adoring him till now. And is still lost. Manik smirks and clicks his finger in front which brings her out of her trance and makes her blush

Manik- so nandini would u like to go out with me for some time I want to ask u something..

Nandini looks at him and then nods.

Both leave the canteen

SO DONE WITH CHAPTER AS PROMISED.

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Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

waiting fr the next part

IT IS UP
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Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

amazing update ..

intresting ..
yaar y u end fanaah it was superb ..

this one is amazing too cont plzzz...

nanny sound good cute ...

love it ..

waiting for update ..
see yah ..
stay bless..

SORRY BUT MY REASONS SO ENDED FANNAH
SORRY AGAIN
THANK U
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
And thanks for chapter 5
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Wowww cute n sweet update
Aawww cheek kiss...nandu bye bolna sikhliya na tumne...frnds ke saath saath ab toh parnts bhi tease kr rhe hai manik ko...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww so cute
love it can't wait for next update soon
love u so much
muuuhhhaaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing ..

superb ..

love it ..

fab4 n navya is best thy never leave any chance in leg pulling of manan ..

cont soon ...

stay bless...
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

glad they both shared with their friends and family...and they are supportive...

manan have the best parents...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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