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Dhingli44

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: mini_manan
Really beautiful..
Completely adorable..
They r cute and know after reading this i was missing parth more and more yaar..
Story was awesome..
Cont soon.
Love...mini

Parth said he is aware of what he is gonna lose...and still his choice was to leave.No doubt he will be missed but now it's time to just go with the flow nd forget about it all.. 😊

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: khadupam
Cute n beautiful story

Tq 😊

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Ashmita18
Eee...loved it shooo much...awww it was sooo damn cute... how adorable they are... I just couldn't stop smiling... the smile is still persistent on my lips... I sooo sooo sooo loved it... their story is just sooo magical, soo perfect just like a dream...

Im so glad u are enjoying reading it 😊

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arshuaar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

thank you for the wonderful N beautiful update...
beautifully written...
Manan ... adorable...
Mukbir... mischevious

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: arshuaar
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">thank you for the wonderful N beautiful update...
beautifully written...
Manan ... adorable...
Mukbir... mischevious</font>

Thank you dear.. 😊

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Hey guys..many of my readers wanted me to continue and make this an SS along with my friend Kavya..so PLS TELL ME WHETHER YOU WANT IT OR NOT so that I can write further..

Part 3-

We reached next day early morning. None of us wished to go to college because everyone was tired...but we had to as we had submissions and our dear Principal had banned proxys. We were literally falling on each other on the way to college..I could see she had become pale..she looked tired more than the others..hardly able to open her eyes.As soon as we reached college we met our Principal..gave our submissions and took permission to leave but he asked us to stay for the seminar on some stupid "Disciplinary importance in Music"..out of no interest too we had to attend it...My concern was something else..she was really not looking well.Her cheeks had turned red..she was feeling cold.. and she was finding it very difficult not to sleep. 'Nandu are you okay' asked Mukti..'No Mukti..I don't feel well' and that was it for me...I went to her and kept my hand on her face and she was burning with fever.'Oh shit!! Nandini ur burning'..I immediately removed my jacket and Mukti made her wear it properly.

The seminar had already started n we were the back benchers...so obviously we would seem tiny from the front in that huge room...I sat beside her and took her in a side hug to reduce her cold and also so that she could sleep properly...I was so..so helpless.I didn't know what to do. I was no doctor... neither I knew anything basic about medicine...all I could do was be with her..beside her..awaiting for this stupid seminar to end.

Once it neared it's end I rushed out carrying her to the sick room..the doctor said might be she ate something she is allergic to or else it is viral.I didn't know what she was allergic to...and she was sound asleep I couldn't wake her..but I had to. 'Nandini' I caressed her cheeks gently.She was not able to open her eyes...the doctor told me that happens in fever so it kinda managed to stop me freaking out. I called her 2 to 3 times n that's when she woke up. I helped her to sit...'Nandini!! The doctor was saying it might be allergy. Are you allergic to something!?'...but before she could answer the doctor spoke 'No she isn't. I mean she might be allergic to something.But right now its viral'..'Anything serious doc!! I mean she's burning like fire' asked Kabir.. 'I'm prescribing some medicines..make sure she has them 3 times a day after every meal. And young girl you have to eat properly. Okay!!' he said.. 'Thank you doc..and we will see to it that she haves properly' I said looking at her..we left for her home and she again dozed off in the car.I carried her to her home and we entered.I placed her on her bed and covered her with the thickest quilt Mukti could find in her home. I sat beside her on the bed and held her hand...Cabir sat with me and Mukti went to her Mom to ask her to make soup. 'You love her right'..asked Cabir..'Is it so obvious'..'Of course it is!! You should have seen ur face when she was in college...that care and concern when she was asleep and also yesterday...you were taking glances of her.Am I right or am I right!?'...
'You're right..you know I was attracted to her the time I saw her. She gives those strong magnetic pull..she gives positive vibes...she's so calm and composed..it gives me a soothing feeling whenever I am with her'..'Does she know!?' he asked and I was in a jiffy to Cabir's this question.

I mean I told her I like her.But I hadn't told her..officially. Before Cabir could ask me again...Mukti came with soup. I woke her up and fed her. Trust me on this..she had lost all her energy in this stupid fever..'You okay na'..I asked her taking her in a side hug...she nodded her head in a 'No' tears formed in her eyes.I was..an unknown feeling of "Oh my Godd!! What's wrong"...'Aree kya hogaya!! Tell me.' I said wiping her tears. She didn't utter a word..but clinged to me tightly and again due to the high dose of medicine she was feeling drowsy...'Manik I think she has slept enough for the day..Hume use sone nai dena chahiye.Aunty bhi abhi aate honge..we have informed her' said Mukti. I nodded and me and Cabir got to our jobs of distracting her..not once did I leave her side...not once did she leave her grip on me..Her mom came and I had to move aside. We all left..me too..unwantedly..but not before giving her a forehead kiss and ensuring her I was just a call away..

That night I got a call from her..I panicked hearing her sobs.. 'Hello Manikk..*sniff*'..'Nandini!! What happened Sweetie..why are you crying. Are you okay'..'Manik...are.. you..aw..awakee..e!!'..'Don't worry Nandini...just open ur balcony door. I'll be there in a minute okay'.. 'O..ok..!!' I reached there and the same time she opened her door and just hugged me tight..I too held her and caressed her hair..' shhuu..What happened dear!?'..'Wo..I..wa..was.. not ..fee...feeling..well.Mom...was..also ..tired na...*sniff* so..I..didn't...wa.. wake..her..up!!Are you..al..also.. tired!?'She asked raising her head abit..'No Nandini..I can never be tired to meet you.Acha now wipe these tears n tell me..kyu ro rahi ho hmm..!! Kya ho raha hai tumhe?'..'Manik can you be with me !?' she asked...'You just have to say sweetheart' I smiled at her. ' Now come..let's try to sleep'.. 'Mujhe neend nai aarahi..' 'Ohh!! Isiliye rona aaraha hai aapko hmm..!?' She pouted..'Toh..wadda u wanna do!?' 'Patanai'..'Hmm...Okay let's see' he said rubbing his hands. 'Let's playy...cards!?' 'No UNO!!'..'Okay..!! I laughed at her. We played and after a while we started to watch a movie in her Ipad.. but due to fever her eyes started burning and she slept.I carefully made her sleep properly and I admired her pale face holding a smile and after a while I left.

Donee!! I was overwhelmed with the response my lovable readers..Thank you so much..This time I have sent PMs to only those who have commented.I don't wanna be bothering you ppl na..Comment and Like Dil Khol ke..

Edited by Dhingli44 - 10 years ago

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sunset17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Such a cute and adorable update...loved it

Please continue to write this...such a sweet story...

Plz pm me next tym.. :)

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Aarti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

superbbb...loved it to the core...beautifully written.

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

ittsss so damm nice.. I just love it to the core.. how much I wanted to tell u.. itss just a beautiful story... manik's care is cherry on the cake... n nandu is so innocent ...lovee it.. n their bond is so pure...n soo loving.. I just love it very much.. we r very much thankful to u..that u give us such a beautiful story.. update soon.. keep updating like that.. waiting for next update eagerly impatiently .. update soonn.. thanks for this update n thanks for pm too... lotsss of luv to u.. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-)