Manan ss - Our story ardent yet painful Last Part pg 16 - Page 3

Nice update

When I read that part manik kissing a gir I felt so bad it seemed a needle pricked my heart!
Then what will be nandu's condition! Omg!
Maya is so cute
hope Manik will get back his memory soon

I was in tears.. Reading ur update..

Wow chotu ta bt cute update ta...I had a doubt abt his condition related to partial memory loss coz u didn't mention him even meeting Maya ...so manik remembers past how he was b4 islie he is nt ready to accept when nyonika tried to explain him abt nandini ...hope to see manik nd Maya's lovely bonding ahead ...nxt time lamba part ha vo b jaldi... Vaise i hated tht part when manik kissed nd chewed some unknown girls lips yucckkiieee thu thu thu ...nandini should give him a tight slap jab akal tikane aa jae uskii ...slap kya nandu k hath me hammer dena chaiye aur fir usse zor zor se thokna chaiye uske kopdi me...😛..thnks for PM'ng me In every work of urs ...I love it ...keep writing :) nd keep smiling ...

Originally posted by: ProttashaPriya

Nice update...cont. soon

thanks dear. Next part by Monday. Hope u r okay with it.

Originally posted by: sunset17

I was in tears.. Reading ur update..

Plzzz update soon

aww don't cry dear. I hope u wil like next part much.

Originally posted by: amrutha.shetty

Wow chotu ta bt cute update ta...I had a doubt abt his condition related to partial memory loss coz u didn't mention him even meeting Maya ...so manik remembers past how he was b4 islie he is nt ready to accept when nyonika tried to explain him abt nandini ...hope to see manik nd Maya's lovely bonding ahead ...nxt time lamba part ha vo b jaldi... Vaise i hated tht part when manik kissed nd chewed some unknown girls lips yucckkiieee thu thu thu ...nandini should give him a tight slap jab akal tikane aa jae uskii ...slap kya nandu k hath me hammer dena chaiye aur fir usse zor zor se thokna chaiye uske kopdi me...😛..thnks for PM'ng me In every work of urs ...I love it ...keep writing :) nd keep smiling ...

Lots of love❤️

~ isha

thank u so much isha. I guess this is the biggest comment I received in this forum. Thank u so much love. Will pm u surely.

Originally posted by: Divzonly

Awesome Cont Soon

thank u dear. Wil update next part by monday

Originally posted by: suraiya77

When I read that part manik kissing a gir I felt so bad it seemed a needle pricked my heart!
Then what will be nandu's condition! Omg!
Maya is so cute
hope Manik will get back his memory soon

yup poor nandu. She wil feel very very bad witnessing it.

Originally posted by: mananonrocks

Nice update

He cn feel hr daugtr

Bt nandu is hrt

Update fast

yes dear that's because he is seeing nandini throu Maya. Though he don't remember nandini, he could relate those eyes and smile.