Manan ss - Our story ardent yet painful Last Part pg 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks dear. Wil post the next part by today
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apps33

interesting and again an emotional stry...

please continue soon

i would love to read more
and do pm me please

thanks dear.
Wil deftly pm u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: suraiya77

Wow!
It's a bit painful
i think it will be a emotional story..
I'm really eager to read the next part
update soon

yup dear. Little emotional only.
And u wil know tjevreason why manik is like this in the upcoming updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bans8597

The concept is just awesome but please atleat chnge the name from madhu to nandini!
You are an awesome writer. Believe me

sorry for the confusion dear. Wil change it now. Thanks a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome start...

loving this concept...
wondering who the girl in the photo was...
can't wait to find out the reason for manan's separation...
loving the track between nandu and nyonika...
like the fact that nandu wants to be independent...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

thanks dear. Am glad u liked it. Nyonika is completely diff here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divzonly

Nyc concept Cont Soon

thanks dear. Wil post next part by today
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful SS ...bt what happened suddenly tht situations changed nd now nandini preffered to stay alone with her daughter not jst away from mansion bt all facilities even if nyonika wanted to provide ...nd manik if he knows abt his daughter y didn't he try to meet her ...answers will b cleared by ur SS so jaldi se post karo ...nd ohh god tht OS u posted previously I cried yaa ..I couldn't wrote anything over der ...anyways jaldi jaldi post karo dis 1 ...its worth reading ...diff ..nd i hope u end dis 1 on a good note ...jst like u made me laugh on ur OS on tikku-pikku-chikku if am nt wrong 😆waiting ...
Lots of love ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone,

Thank u so much for the likes and comments, here am posting the second part.

Before that i need to clear it, the girl manik was holding was some random girl, and not anyone in specific, and reg the confusion with the name madhu and nandini, am really sorry, i forgot to edit the name.

She was deep in her thoughts of what happened at the past, they were getting ready for the release of his new album, after so much of convincing Manik was sent first, as maya was stil in her sleepy mode, so Nyonika and Nandini decided to stay some more time and then join later with him when maya get back from her sleep. And then the disaster happened, there was a bomb blast, the bomb was set in the car in which Manik was travelling, and luckily the bomb blasted, when he just stepped out of the car, and he was thrown away with the blast, and he was taken to the hospital immediately, where he was treated for nearly a month, after which he regained consciousness, but unluckily, he remembered everything before Nandini entered his life, he forgot what has happened after that. And even after continuous pleading from Nyonika, he didn't want to see Nandini or talk to her. He was back to his rude form.

The party was goin on full swing, she insturcted everything from being in her room, but then she heard his voice, and with anxiety she slightly poked her head out of the door, and saw the dreadful sight of her Manik wildly kissing a girl and chewing her lips, she shut herself again in the room,and quickly left the place in the name of sickness. After she was parted from her Manik, she has seen many such articles about him, and heard many rumors about him, but had not witnessed anything,so she was sure that he would do any such cheap things, but today after witnessing what he had done with another girl, she felt disgusting being loved by him and kissed by him in the same way. She meant that kiss,and that passion was only for her, but seeing him doing it in the same way for another girl, killed her heart.

She shut herself inside her room,and maya was sent to school in her school bus, and Nandini took off from her work for few days, and after few days, maya missed her school bus in the evening, and she being a smart child decided to go back home alone seeing the busy streets. And on her way, she found a car approaching her crossing the speed limit, and then she found the car to be her dadi's, she wondered why dadi was driving too fast, and then when the car was about to hit her, it stopped,and the person driving the car, came down near her, and found her crying by closing her face within her palms, it strike him, that someone close to him, used to cry like that.

He felt his head spinning a little and he held his head for a moment,and then the girl's cry brought him back to senses, he just took her hands from his eyes forcefully, and maya got scared and stepped backwards.He felt that he has seen this fear, this eyes, he felt that he know this little girl, but he has no clues.He kneeled down to her height, and he brought her close to him, wiped her tears, as her tears cause pain to his heart, he offered her a drive with him, and bought her toys, chocolates,and gave autograph to her,and dropped her home, and he left.

Nandini was tensed and she was roaming here and theresearching for her daughter, since maya was not back, she would have reached half an hour before, she was calling her school, and was about to cry, when maya came in with loads of toys and chocolates,and seeing Nandini crying,she dropped everything,and went and hugged her, since maya doesn't know the name of the person who dropped her, she didn't mention it to Nandini, just informed her that,one uncle dropped her and gifted her with toys and chocolates and Nandini didn't mind to ask about it, since she was happy that her daughter is back.

And at night, Manik remembered the time he spent with the small girl, he forgot to ask her name, he felt very happy and lively being with her, he seems to knew her before, but when he started to think about it, again he got his head ache, and he went to drink further.Days passed by. Later one day, when Manik was in a mall with a girl, he was surrounded by his fans, he felt suffocated and want to get out of that place, when he felt someone pulling his hand, he lowered his head to find the same girl standing there.He picked her up in his arms and asked "Hey princess, how come you are here,came with ur mama or papa?" She replied that she came with her friend and her mom, since her mama was not feeling well. He asked "So what u can come here with ur papa na?" the smile on her face was wiped away and she told "My papa don't have time to spend with me. He never loves me." and with that she came down on her feet and ran away.


Short na, sorry, but this is how i have planned previously, liking maya, wil give her more space in upcoming updates. Time for like and comment.

If u want pm, just mention in the comment, i will add u to my pm list.
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Uma dear happy to see and read your story in ky2 forum !! Dear i love manan too so do pm me the story whatever u write on them !! awesome SS must say loved the update !! hope we get manan happy ending in this ss as we didnt get that in show u must be knowing that !! Thanks for writing on manan too buddy as i love your stories dear sis !! keep updating writing and pming !! love you !! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...now its time fr the confrontation

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