Manan ss - Our story ardent yet painful Last Part pg 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: san_ika

Awesome update
But short bt its okkk
N tynxx for d pm do it next tym too
Sorry can't write more as I hv written comment 2 tyms bt ildue to net connection... Forget it
Its awesome

Aww no prob dear, this net connection always ditches us, no issues.
Wil pm u surely
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Shahnazzie101

Pleasee pm me the the part soon

Sure dear, wil update next part shortly and wil pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

it was heart breaking to watch nandu witness manik...
make manan meet soon and manik to remember his nandu again...
loved maya...
continue soon...keep up the good work

Manan wil meet soon, but before that there is a lot to happen, and in this update u can see father daughter duo part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nroy195

lovely story pls update soon😊 waiting for manan meet

Thanks dear, wil update the next part in a while.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey everyone,
Thank u so much for the likes and comments,I have replied to all ur comments in the prev pages, u can check it if u like to do, here goes the next part of the story.

Part 3

He wondered how could any father ignore a child like this girl, he went out to his car, and drove back to his home, he forgot to pick up the girl who came with him.He entered his home to find Nyonika talking in phone, he just climbed the stairs, while a name got his attention "Nandini" . He rested on his bed remembering how he avoided that one girl called Nandini, as he didn't remember one such girl.But something within him tels that there was something he felt on hearing that name, he discarded that thought and went to sleep.

Later a day, Manik came out of the studio, since he felt frustrated, as the producer asked him not to come to studio when he was fully drunk, so he left the studio in his anger, and he crossed the school where maya was studying, and seeing small children wearing the same uniform, he came out of the car and searched for her, but didn't find her, so he came on the next day and waited for her, and luckily he got her, once she saw her, she came running towards him and waved him "Hi" with a bright smile, he felt so better seeing her, his mood became normal, he wondered how this small girl can have a control over his mood swings and temper.

Then it became a practice for him to come and meet her regularly, and to drop her home, and clever maya use to get down on the street before her house, as she knows very well, that her mom would never allow her to wander around with strangers, and also she has seen her mom crying with the photo of the person with whom she is with? So she hid this whole thing from her mama. And then Nandini started going to her work, as she doesn't want to cry over the spilled milk.

Manik and Maya started to like each other's company and felt they were bonded to each other, and he slowly stopped with his excessive drinking, atleast when he is with little maya, and he use to accompany her all the time when she is on the way to her school and to her home back, and finally one day, on maya's compulsion Manik went to maya's home, since Nandini was not there at home, they had their own time, he did chocolate milk shake for her and they both had icecream from near by shop, and played and slept well.And continued for the whole month since Nandini had loads of work in office, since she took off for few weeks.

Luckily one day Nyonika dropped in to see her grandchild, and that is when she heard a known voice along with Maya, and she silently entered the bedroom and found her son playing with his daughter, she had happy tears, she was at the verge of getting all the happiness, that is when it struck her, that her son is playing with his own daughter without knowing the truth, and she pledged herself that she will re-unite her little family of her son at any cost.

So she decided to speak to Nandini first, and as expected, after long arguments, Nandini was firm with her decision, that she doesn't want to be in Manik's life,after hearing such disgusting words from him, she never wanted to return into the life which might have more happiness. Then Nyonika placed the questions which was unanswerable by Nandini, she insisted Nandini that she may not need a partner in her life, but what about Maya, can she have a happy life without a father,which she was longing for ,and this question shooked Nandini completely,and she started to think a lot about it and finally agreed realising that her Mani will not speak a word against her and will not let anyone speak against her, but its Manik Malhotra who spoke those disgusting words, who was not in his own senses, and has forgot whom Nandini was in his life, never a moment, her Mani would hurt her,as it would hurt him thousand times more. And she readily agrees for Nyonika's plan.


I could see more number of ppl viewing my story, but there is no like or comment from them, i don't know whether they didn't like my story or feeling lazy to press like button. Anyhow am continuing for those sweetheart who were waiting for my updates.

PS U can scrap/pm me for any doubts or confusion regarding the story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
It was awesome update...good bonding b/w father n daughter...ab nandini apni beti ki khushi ke liye try kregi...lovd it...continue soon
Edited by dhillon90 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
I love it and thanks for the pm update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
awesome part...try to give the long update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
its good manik n maya share a bound😊 without knowing the relation
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Wow great update pls make manik remember everything n they live together but nandini should not forgive him so easily n then manik use manaega it will be fun to read how manik is going to pacify his nandu

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