2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 98

Aww.. That was a cute update.. and I was really smiling through the whole update... I loved it.. Update soon.. :)

Originally posted by: shindesweety

u know what

I love uastory

bahut bahut jyaada

everynight I wait for the update

so so amazing

keep writing

ua awesome

😊😊😊

thanks for the update

takecare

Thank u so much dear for loving my story so much and next update is present track i hope u will stick with me in the dark part of the story anyways i will update soon

Originally posted by: RidzKhambhati

Hey it's awesome update..The convo between this two is so bliss..& so nice...Their cute nok-jok is so nice...& song is also suitable..Yaar finally both realise that they are in love..woww...Now eagerly waiting for confession...& you are right this is the first update without drama but it's nice & simple...Now eagerly waiting for next update...Yaar you always increase our wish to read your ff...Please update soon...waiting for next part.. 😊

Thank u so much ya whole update without any drama yesterday i thought let them be in peace atleast for one update but devils se drama jyda din tak dur nh rh skta ye toofan ke phle ki shanti hai 😉

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hiii...pataaka
I know I'm super late.. But sorry I was stuck in something very annoying
Hehe... Is this really DEVIL'S only or I'm landed in some other platform...I'm in trauma plss someone help me to recover from this
God how on the earth today our drama queen gave such a sweet and peace update
Pataaka kahi aiSe toh nahi soch rahe ki bomb explode kar kar ke thak gaye ho toh seedha rocket se hi kyun naa udhaa jaaye...like woh kehte hai na Ki naa rehegi baas, naa bajegi baansuri... Like seriously itnaa shaant update kuch toh garbar hai
Oh Aashu i really loving your effort baby... You're giving everything in your update
Itss superb their care for each other... Their hubby wifey nok jhok its mind blowing
Phir that TLC part...hayee rabba maar daala
Then terrace moments... Under Starry night, glowing moon, cool breeze these yet to be realize love birds sitting together on swing and enjoying each other proximity and talking about love... Its really a treat to imagine
Love is beautifully described... That song again from rockstar it created magic those lyrics were there reality
Haa buddhu manik kitna questions... Such a bechain aatma he is
Again nandu's description about mohabbat... In your words its awesome
That blushy nandu tomatoes KO nahi laal mirch KO bhi takkar de sakthi hai
Its again super se upar waala update

Now enough of my chatterbox
Take care pataaka

Hy sweety and aj mene apne andar ki drama queen ko chuti pr bheja hai i thought let them be in peace or u all also atleast for one update or yes u guessed a right thing ye toofan ke phle ki shanti hai storm is on the way next is present update or rocket mene agle update ke liye bacha ke rkha hai
Bhot jldi chod dungi or u know na devils is all in one ab simple or peace wale update ki kami thi toh here u go wid this or koi na der aye pr durusat aye i m talking about u r comment no need for this sorry

Originally posted by: DWJensenackles

Finally! Both of them realised that they love eachother!

I hope they confess it before its too late!

Loved Manik's care under his gussa! So cute he is!

And he sang for her! Awww

This update made me smile so much!

Awesome update!

Continue soon!

Thanks for the PM :)

Love, Pari :)

Wohoo this time i didnt got this kinda comment like i made them cry wese u r smile was my main agenda coz aansu to aage bhot ane wale pta nh smile aye ya nahi coz there are only two more happy update are remain than the dark part is going to be enter atleast in this two parts no more drama only love peace and romance and thnk u fr u r cmnt

keep it up...

Originally posted by: mini_manan

Update was seriously calm and soothing..
Nandini ko actually love guru ban jana chahiya 😆
Finally nandini make manik realise that he madly love her..actually is process me uski khudki dimag ke batte bhi jal gye 😆
End was fab..directly or indirectly both take each other name widout their knowledge..
Loved it..
Cont soon..jaldi please.
Love,
Mini

Yeah i guess dono ne mentos khai hogi terrace pr jane se pehle to jal gyi batti lol
I know bad comedian i am any ways der aye durust aye confession na sahi realiasation to hua or yesterday i thought let thm be in peace atleast for one update kyuki ye toofan se phle ki shanti hai there are hardly two update are remain of happiness than separation is on the way so no more drama atleast for two updates mere andar ki drama queen past track do update ke liye chutti pr hai so enjoy romance and sily fights

yaar kab bolenge yeh dono?
Again jhooth bol rahe dono

kuch climax to hoga hi

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Thank u so much ya whole update without any drama yesterday i thought let them be in peace atleast for one update but devils se drama jyda din tak dur nh rh skta ye toofan ke phle ki shanti hai 😉

Hey first of all thank u for reply & I know I m asking u such silly question that when will u update but what to do u always give us the schedule of ur update na that on which day u will update so that's why...my curiosity is so high for your update...so please tell when will u write & update..& sorry if I said something wrong... 😊

awesome...
it was a heart touching one...
a peaceful update
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