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prathiksha

@prathi3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#831

pagal hai kya 3 to 4 days??

i wud be dead by den

update kar dena

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

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Posted: 10 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: prathi3
pagal hai kya 3 to 4 days??
i wud be dead by den
update kar dena

Hey prathi
Aashu needs time to write na pls wait for her

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

ha ji Bola tha na jitna hasaya hai utna rulaungi toh devil's ke true colours show krne ka time aa gya but the thing is ke i want to fill this thread from romance manan luv next thread is going to be a bit dark or this time present wont be emotional one but a scary one and i know u wont like it anyways story is still on or chill i wont miss my meal or present ya past votes pr decide karte hai dekhtey hai sb kya boltey hai but next update is in the past coz nyt is still on

Oyee... Don't say it again ki i don't like this story and all 😡 😡
Otherwise ham kutty ho jaayenge 🥱
Haan thora emotional hai... That doesn't mind I won't like
Dubaara aiSe kuch kaha toh ham ro parenge 😭 😭

Aashu... how's Aqsa now??
I'm missing elevator bohat saara 😭 😭

Edited by Snehasn53 - 10 years ago

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#834

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Oyee... Don't say it again ki i don't like this story and all 😡 😡
Otherwise ham kutty ho jaayenge 🥱
Haan thora emotional hai... That doesn't mind I won't like
Dubaara aiSe kuch kaha toh ham ro parenge 😭 😭

Aashu... how's Aqsa now??
I'm missing elevator bohat saara 😭 😭

arey Wese nh yr but its just present is heart wrenching kuch bhi ho skta in this romance parts i got comments like i made them cry and i m little worried for the present ke kese sab deal krenge uske sath anyways abhi to past chal rha present me time hai
Or aqsa needs time yr yesterday we talked to each other she missed her exams bcz of this yr i m worried for her so update is still not possible

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Manancrazy_95

@Manancrazy_95

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Posted: 10 years ago

#835

Amazing update !!!! Too good
Cont soon

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

arey Wese nh yr but its just present is heart wrenching kuch bhi ho skta in this romance parts i got comments like i made them cry and i m little worried for the present ke kese sab deal krenge uske sath anyways abhi to past chal rha present me time hai
Or aqsa needs time yr yesterday we talked to each other she missed her exams bcz of this yr i m worried for her so update is still not possible

Oh no tell her to take complete rest
Vaise what's her qualification??

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Oh no tell her to take complete rest
Vaise what's her qualification??

secnd yr bcom

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aysha_rah

@aysha_rah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#838

Hey m bck... this update ws a super duper hit... waahhh full package... it had all frm missing to kissing to jeaolusy to argumnts nd den again kissing to finally der decision...
Yarr how do u manage so ryt in sch a beautiful way all d emotions n evry prt... amazinggg..
Strting frm mrning... manik ws missing nandu by his side...awww... nd den he went to search her... nd kitchn romance... wohooo..dat ws sooo hott... manik said u concentrate on ur wrk n let me do mine...wahhh ye acha h phle to distract krlo fr kaho dnt disturb me wowww...ye to sirf manik malhotra hi ho skta h d devil...
Den aata romance... heheee... dt ws fun really... nd widout saying 'i love u' he z asking fr spcl tonight... hawww vely bad...
Den cums d office prt us navys ki to mai aarti utar dungi.. kahase manik or alya perfect lgte h bhai.. mjhe v btana zara... nd den aagya ek or dhruv ..ufff... y does he hv to b bck wo v abi?? Pcca dis is nly going to create misundrstnding in future na i mean in d presnt track... m so eagr to knw abt d reasn of der fight.. wen will b dey bck tgthr...
Nd den aae hmare murthy ji..aree yr logo ko baat kehna ka mauka v ni dete bs apna decisn is final decisn...wahh .. but m glad ki manan sorted out evrythng... d way nandu shut manik..heheee lovely kissieee... finally dey r clear dt dey dnt want divorce... m nw very xcitd fr der love to grow... update soon na plzzz lagta h kitne dim ho hae padhr hue..heheee... plz plzzz post soon... 'l b waitinggg...bye byee c yaaa... tc.. keep smiling...

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aysha_rah

@aysha_rah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

As i told u time is much needed for my updates they are very long anyways thank u for this awesome comment and u should read this last part this part is full of romance or drama or it wasnt there first kiss remember that announce ment but ya it was there first luv kiss jiske bad manik ko thapad nh pda lol
Or read the next and i will wait for u r comment

Yes indeed dey wer long nd ya i hv read d last one...nd cmmntd too... nd i was talking abt first private nd ishq wala kiss...heheee... u write really beautifully... nd in d nxt one dose goonssch a morons dey wer kaash nandu ne v 4-5 punch lagaye hote...heheee... u r awesm writer really... nd updaye soonnn na plzzz m so excitd fr further prtsss i cnt jst wait...