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Sooo sry 4 late reply I hope u can understand bt I really lyked nandu n manik's thought n eagerly waiting 4 their so called frndshp relation

Plzz update soon... Luving ur story

Originally posted by: littlesnow

Nice update... U wonderfully penned the maniks frustration...
Poor manik ..he really get pissed off with those two beautiful ladies of his life...
N that past connection of manik with dogs ...ufff it was painful and hilarious at a time...
OK now mukti is trying to b cupid for these two...
Nicely penned... I loved it...waiting fo next...

yeah mukti will be a cupid for both them next update is suprise for you all but i need may be day or two days but i will update soon

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

wow what an amazing superb hilarious update...

starting with the song...

uff perfect song for the situation..

manik watching mukti and nandini dancing crazily..

ufff... beating each other on butt...

aiyappa ranting was awesome...hahah...

manik and shopping... again impossible...hahahah...

his searches on net for how to pass time while gals shopping... hahahah...

manik dream.. lipstick nail paint running after him.. hahahah...

dinner time... and the hilarous talk...haha...

dog bit manik on his bumps... hahahah...

nandini imagining the mark.. lol...

and then their friendship...

their conditions.. hahahha...

amazing update...

read karke maza a gaya...👏

u were so correct saying that abhi to aur maza ayega..😊

thank u so much or yes abhi bhot sara mja baki two three update me kafi new scenes hai thn hum sidhe romance pr chlenge next update is also a suprise for you all it will be more funny for you i promise

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Aashu... (Hope I can call u that)

What an update dear... M still laughing.

Its again damn hilarious

That song, that really really really suits Manik's situation

And then Nandini and Mukti's awkward positions🤣

And and, Emotional Blackmail is the inborn talent of every women in this world...

Later on in the mall, his google search for What Can A Man Do In A Shopping Mall... Each and every website visited by him... This is my favorite part in the whole chapter... Damn funny

How can I forget his dream?? Those Kajals and Nailpaints laughing at him evilly... Superb dear

Manik-the-always-right Malhotra praying to God for 1st time to get out of this situation... Hehe...

Then in the hotel, Manik's theory that girls can't stop Aww-ing in their life...👏 👏I wonder from where do u get such ideas from...

And then Manik's dog phobia's reason...😆

Waiter got 1000 Rs. treat... Lucky he...

Then Mukti's plan to make them spend some time together... Smart girl...

Then it started raining... And listening to thunder she hugged him...

So by the end of this chapter, I know that Manik feels for Nandini.

Cant wait for his realization...

Awesome update Aashu. I mean this is a great story. Every time I read a new update I really fall for this story more and more. CONTINUE SOON

yes u cn call me aashu or thank you for this beautifull comment or manik ke realiasation me wese ab kuc hi updates baki hai may be 9 10 as i have so many new scenes to show you all so next update me b suprise hai or i will update may be tommorrow or day after tommorrow

Originally posted by: anglechotti

Hiii dear...

Wt an amazing update I'm a veryyy veryyy big fan of your ff but this one is really very close to my heart . ..

I thought you will the advantage of the situation in which they have landed...

But bel

well thank you so much it seems like you read my another stories too well about the cottage scene i create this only for their friendship jha wo calm hokr bat kr ske nothing much or advantage wali bht situations ayegi dont worry

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

thank u so much or yes abhi bhot sara mja baki two three update me kafi new scenes hai thn hum sidhe romance pr chlenge next update is also a suprise for you all it will be more funny for you i promise

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Waiting for it aashna...

maza a gaya read karke...

and you are aur maza...

my wild funny thinking going wild.. as kya hoyega...

awesome..😊

trust me bhot mja ayega all are fresh scenes you will love it

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

trust me bhot mja ayega all are fresh scenes you will love it