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aishubangia thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Rula diya yarr.. seriously.. soo emotional it ws.. poor nandu.. bt hua kya h aisa? ? Jo manik is behaving lyk dis? ?? Suspense is killing me.. plz jo bhi h uske misunderstanding ko dur kardoo.. want manan...
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohhh god sooo touching...nandinii s sooo mch painnn...plzz manik koo jaldi realize karbao...he s wrong...plzzz make happy happy mode...manik NT devil he s lvmg monster...'' ur update mke me cry feelng bad of Nandu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hooo manik did not try even for once to know the truth about her abortion...he just jumped to the conclusion...now i m damn sure that he must got misunderstood nandini about dhruv n he would not have tried to know the truth...oh god how can someone pass such lame n disgust comments to his wife wether they are going to saperate or not...yaaar in yr story manik is really devil...i pity for nandu...seriously his lame comments pierced my heart...n i think manik is gonna be drunk in their makeout...nhiii yaaarr pllzzz i want both of them in their senses 😉...n i guess we will not get their confession...it will be direct their makeout that's why there will be missunderstandings between them coz they will not confesss their feelings...oh my god i don't know where my thoughts are going 😆 i need to have some patience but seriously this thought is not leaving me that what would have happened between them that manik hates nandu to the core ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was amazing dear😊
but why isn't nandu telling him the truth?/...why isn't she clearing it out??
plzzz update soon dear...eager to know the whole truth😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is the best update till the date dear...
I m crying dear...
I mean why all this is happening with nandini whyyy...
But I know this twist is going to give us such an amazing drama in the story...
Jub manik ko pata chalega na tab tak bahot der ho chuki hogi I know but aisa hi hona chahiye...
Ur awesomeee dear this turning point is definitely making me crazy I just wanted to know wt is going to happen next...
And ofcourse I m veryyy muchhh excited for their first encounter...
Waiting eagerly...
Please please please continue soon Can't wait further for next update Please continue asap..
Love you a lottt for this amazing update dear...
Keep smiling and rocking as always...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey...m a new reader...nd just nw read all ur chapters...these r so amazing...and story really is heart touching..but u always leaves it in very suspicious conditions 😃😆 nyways u write so amazingly...so plz continue and soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manan ki definition change ki tumne stop karo writing tumko manan pasand nahi tho ...kisiko itana nicha mat dikhao manik character kharab kiya tumne pure story mai aur aaj to manik aise dikhake subko hurt kiya hai ... ESE acha stop this crap dud ...girl ho na tum aide dikhakhe fir she wahi sory sort out wale chapter laugi aur upar she hasari emotion k sath khel k fan s k ... Ur amazing writer yaar but manik aur nandini character ko to atlest achese dikhati ... Tum hate karti ho manan thats y u ...chuck ...thanks ho sake stop this crap ...bcoz manan means kya hota hai other story or ky2 2 dekho ... Block karna karo idc but think about it emotion she read kare hai wait karate story ka kuch acha higa but 30parts mai sirf haters dikhaya ...kya yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago

I trust u
U will make everything fine again

Dying to see a caring shattered Manik Asap.


Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Present track

Nandini was in her room getting ready

"Nandu"when someone called her
She turned her face
"Di when did you came back "she said

" morning see i came here so early i could'nt wait to meet you
Or how are you or your chotu monster"alya said she chuckled

"We both are fine apki shooting kesi chal rhi hai"she said

"Bahot achi wese how is your devil i mean manik wo bahot care karta hoga na tumhari"alya said her face went pale

"Haa he cares about me so much"she said and looks away from her couldnt make eye contact from her

"Wese nandu i m happy for u or i m really thank ful towards manik and u agar tum appa ko convience nh karte toh may be i wont be able my dream thank you nandu"alya said and hugged her she hugged her back

She broke the hug when her phone started buzzing
It was manik

"Nandini i wont be able to come hospital with you i have to attend a urgent meeting "he said

"Its ok manik i will manage it to myself"she said he nodded and hung the call

"Kya hua nandu"alya asked

"Nothing di bas muje hospital jana hai to or manik nh aa payega sath me "she was about to complete but alya jumped in between

"Arey toh me hu na hum dono chaltey hai comeon lets go"alya said she smiled and both walked out

********

"Doctor everything is ok na"she asked she was worried after seeing frowns on doctor's forehead

"Nandini actually there is so many complications in pregnancy mene jo bhi test karwaye the un sab result negative aya hai so according to me you should abort this child because this child can be cause of your death "doctor said she was shocked wid this sudden news
Her blood dried in her veins

"But doctor sudden ye sab there is no chance left in my case"she asked her tears were about to fall but she held them back

"Chances to hai par bhot kam or ussey tumhari jaan ko khatra hai because your womb is not strong for the child so according to me you should abort this child i cant allow you to carry this child "doctor said

She wasnt in state to answer
Alya understood her innerturmoil she held her hands and she jumped in between

"Doctor we need time"alya said

"Sure take your time but you dont have much time ek bar agar do mahine pure ho gye toh abortion me problame aa sakti hai so you have one week take your decision wisely "doctor said

She was silent alya held her hand and drag her outside

********

Her eyes were not blinking, not a
single tear she had shed her
soul died, she was sitting like a
living dead body, not even
moving she was in a devastated state.

"Nandu"alya said and cupped her face

nandini slowly looks at alya
watching her like this in a
devastated state made alya burst
into tears . but she didnt
cry or react. she again turned her
head to otherside

"Nandu please say something na i know it difficult for you but you have to be strong na for manik how he will react on this usko kon smbhalega "alya said after hearing his name she crashed into her arms. till
now alya had been controlling
herself but now she also burst out
into tears.again nandini was sobbing like a child in her arms alya patted her back

"Nandu shh dont worry me manik se bat krungi he will understand we cant take risk on your life we will wait for it everything will be alright baby"alya consoled her

"Di phle jesa kuch nahi hai na me na manik na hmara rishta everything is over di my child was my last hope di i cant lost my baby di manik only loves his baby di he hates me he hates me"she said between her sobs alya broke the hug

"Nandu what are you saying tum dono me toh sab kuc thik ho gya tha u love him na when i left you were happy with him now what happend suddenly "alya said in worried tone

"Di it was lie he hates me he hates so much we are together because of this child we already signed our divorce paper"she said while stoping herself from crying

"What par ye sab kese hua "alya asked she was shocked and worried at the same time

Nandini told her everything

"What are you gone nuts listen dont think about him how can he just do this with you
Listen you are gonna abort this child i cant take risk on your life "she shouted

"Di i cant its not possible for me "she said and tears brimmed in her eyes

"Why not nandu tum btao kya hoga is baby ka jab tum dono ka divorce ho jyega how your baby will survive a child needs both nandu please understand"alya was trying to convience her

"Di plz you try to understand na plz di"she pleaded to her

"No nandu i cant you have to abort this child "she said in a bit dimanded voice

But there was some one who were listening to there conversation

"Nooo"he shouted

"Manik"i was horrified did he heard everything

I had never seen him so angry in

WHAT THE HELL DOES YOU
MEAN BY ABORTING MY CHILD

He screamed that means he didnt listen everything

He suddenly held my arm and
started dragging me away from
there
Di tried to protest but his grip was tight and i was
sobbing but he didn't hear or
give a damn about anything at the
moment..
*
I gasped when i was
pinned against the wall by him
after he dragged me to our room.
His eyes clouded with such mix of
emotions as if there was a
tornado in them, he was
breathless and just looking at me
as if he wanted to kill me

"Why alya said this to you ha tell me "he asked

I cant tell him the truth

"Because of our relation after this divorce what we are going to do with this child so she suggest me to abort the child"i said between my sobs

I was silenced as he held
My chin tightly.
"Tell me one thing today
why didn't you stop me that night?
you should have stop me i was drunk that night hai na but you were in your senses if you dont wants to be with me why you didnt stop me."

Coz i dont want to
I wanted to say this, but
words were stuck in my throat.
I scrunched my eyes before he
held my wrist, yanking me
towards him and looking at me
from head to toe
His jaw clenched,
He held me more tightly from my shoulders

"Come on i want an explanation why you didnt stop me that night answer me dammit "he said and pressed me more tightly

"Coz i do'nt want to"i manage to said those words

"Why dhurv was'nt enough for fullfill your desires oh how could i forgot you were virgin u did it for your physical needs hai na you were enjoying when i was fu**ing you "he said in a bit loud voice i was feeling pathetic how could he think so low about me

"Manik how could you"i pushed him he held me more tightly

"You are hurting me leave me"i was furious on him how could he just think like that

"What about me "he said and dig his fingers in my shoulders

" you always wants to abort this child hai na coz this baby belongs to me hai na tell me"he said


"You were my mistake nandini but this child is mine my blood i started loving my child since so long u r not going to abort my child can you hear me loud and clear you are going to abort this child"he shouted loudly i wanted to cry but i just could'nt cry infront of him


"Manik muje itna bhi hurt mat karo ke tum chaho tab bhi un wounds ko heal na kar pao"i said
He rolled his eyes at my statements, stepping away from me

"Who said you that i will ever try to heal you no way i wont never ever i just want to break you into pieces"he said i can see unbearable hatered in his eyes

"But why "i wanted to know the answer

"Because i hate you more than anything"he said his words stabbed into my heart i was hurt by words more than the wounds which he left on my arms he jerk me and left from there

I collapsed on the floor tears brimmed in my eyes
I wanted to stop him i wanted to tell him the truth but i cant

"Why you didnt stopped me that night"his words echoed in my ear
I released a heavy breath,
THAT NIGHT
THOSE FEW DAYS!
when my life changed completely
by the sudden turn of events and
the next moment i found myself
In his arms
I was so happy
So content
But after some days my whole happiness crash down
A man, who was no where closed to my heart become my everything in just couple of days

I hadnt asked for a prince, or a
rich guy.
All i wanted and always desired
for, was a man,who can keep me
happy despite the circumstances
who can wipe out my tears n hold
Me closed to his chest when i
needs him the most
one who can kiss away all my
worries and fears,
one,who can laugh whole heartedly
at my silly antics,and one who will make me laugh,
one,who can accept me the way she
I am
All i got in return was
Manik malhotra
As my husband
Whom i love the most
The only person of my life who hates me so much
But why
What i did with him
Why he hates me so much ...????

No matter, how happy and oh-so-
much-in-love couple we are
infront of the world,but the truth
was confined within the four walls
of our bedroom.
where we are nothing less than
strangers.
There are numerous times, when
I cried silently,remembering our moments which we spent together

Those happy moments which means nothing to him
But for me it was most beautiful time of my life
But it was lie
Was it a dream
I was waiting for him to hold me
and soothe me
but he never came .
There were times when i was so
desperately want to hold
His hand while sleeping
cuz of my fear of darkness,
but his hand never came for
support.
There were times when i was in
pain, that i just wanted
someone to sit closely with me, to
whispered sweet nothings to me or
anything to distract me from pain,
but that support was never there.
Every day, i wanted to share the
minutest details of my day with him
But life wasnt just fair to me,while
distributing happiness.
But i knew i cant blame him
or anybody else for that matter.
I was aware of this at the time of
My marriage itself and still i had
entered in it, but what else i
could have done.

I hadnt thought this merriage, it would be so
difficult at times.
Every day,after taking bath, i
wore a mask along with my attires
A mask to go along with the day.
A mask for the world to know how
happy i am
But i think i am not deserving person
Probably i wont ever get what i want in my life
HIS LOVE
HIS SUPPORT
HIS TRUST

Was it too much to ask but still i know
I know i wont get i want

"Why dhurv wasnt enough to fullfill your desire "his words again rang in my mind

I was feeling pathetic
How could he think so low so sick about me

"You always wanted to kill my child right because this child belongs to me "his words broke my heart into milion pieces
I know i wont be able to gather them again if i will spend my whole my whole life still its not possible

I wanted to tell him
I love his child
I dont want to kill his child
The child is mine also it belongs me too

I wanted to shout

MANIK I HAVE A REASON
CAN YOU HEAR ME I HAVE A REASON

i know you cant hear me because you already left me

Our first night those happy moment of my life flashed infront of my eyes
The most beautiful night of my life
Now the most dreadful night of my life i regret all those moments which i have spent in his arms

THAT NIGHT...!!!!
THE NIGHT OF OUR LOVE MAKING ...!!!!



Ohk ohk kill me if you want chlo me khudi guess kar leti hu is bar jo comments aane wale

1 such a evil writer u r
U cant let them be in peace

2 phle hi problames kam thi jo or badha di phle chain nh mila kya jo ab or rulane ka irada

3 ekta kappor of if most dramatic writer
Of this fourms
Drama queen you are huh ...!!

4 oh god girl kabhi to dono ko sath rhne do dont u like them together are you not manan fan
Phir kyu bar bar unko alg karte ho tumse ache to cvs hai atleast thoda time to sath rhne dete hai


Lol jo bolna bol skte hai ho chappal tamatar ande are heartly welcome if u want i can leave forums forever but forgive me for this big diasaster
Gaaliyan hi de do but i want comments
And yes some silent readers are blocked if u r friends are not able to read my ff then its not my falut
And yes some new readers are added in my buddy list schi dhmki ka acha asr hua hai sab par
Or u r my silent reader and left u than a second chance for u next target is you so dont be happy

And my regular readers really love u all in last update i couldnt reply to you i am sorry there were 20 pages of comments i tried to quote u all but at last i was failed for pardon me for this and yes thank you for this response i m on cloud nine now yippeee let me shout
Chlo ab meri bak bak khtam or comments shuru make out tab hi milega jab comment milenge give and take policy u know so do it fast acha tell me one thing are you exicted for devil's make out ha

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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh such an emotional update. But it's ok married life itni bhi easy nhi huti.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bad
How can make Manik just judge her without even listening to her
That soo bad I don't like it
Nandini is in sooo much pain 😭
Make them together please

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