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Posted: 9 years ago
This was so sad..
Why always because of mens impulsive behaviour.. Girls have to suffer.. Can't watch Nandani suffer more.. She too deserves happiness.. Manik should be taught a lesson.. but not by killing Nandani let her live..
I don't have problem with the twist u bring in story..
But Nandani is the one who is giving everything from the starting of this relationship..
It's ur story.. Ur baby.. Write well I trust u.. But keep In mind that Nandani deserves happiness.. Every girl who sacrificed deserves happiness.. Sorry got a bit emotional.. but I love this story... To bas jada ho gaya.. Lots of love.. keep writing..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear...wow what a amazing update.
Nandni ne apni destiny main kya likhwiya hai.
She is in so much pain.
And now she has complications in pregnancy.
Manik kya kam tha ose dukh de ne ke liye.
Very very emotional conditions are.
He is thinking so cheap about their blissful night.
He is a devil. .today he define his name truly.
But you are a amazing writer..pata hi nahi chala
Kab chapter khatam ho gya...I want to read more. ..
Please update soon.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful chapter.
Stay blessed dear.





Love. .
Jyoti.









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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing.. i m literally speechless.. hw everytime i felt thr cant be anymore pain than this in her life..but u prove me wrong n yet stabbing another nail in her heart..how amazingly u pen it down..it was heart wrenching to c the amount of pain shez gng thru alone...i hp all goes well..can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Updt soon Plz Manik ko jaldi pata chale
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey what have you done yaar..again devil mode on.. Yaa but overall update is nice..this dose is needed because everytime we can't take sweet things from life..stones are also needed so as per your story this present track is needed... But please update next part soon...now we also wanted to know what happened that night which changed their whole life... 😊 so please update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc update yr...waiting fr next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yar manik aur nandini k beech sab theek ho gaya tha na? Last part main tmne likha tha na k they both realise that they love each other???
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just think ki itne dhamakedaar ideas ate Kahan se hai???
Har update mein ek Naya blast !!!!!!!
Aiyooo!!!!!!!
Ek baari bas ek baari Manik KO realise karao ke Nandu ki jaan khtre mei hai..
Ek no. Ka gadha hai ye ldka!!!
BT I so wanna knw k ye Dhruv Ka chakkr kya hai???
Coming to the Update it was MINDBLASTING!!!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was so emotional yr !!!
aap ne apne note mein jojo comments mention kiye they i m really feeling same except few like u will leave the forums..!!
u r an awesome writer..!! bt sach mein pehle hi itne saare problems they ar ab to solve hone ki jagah its increasing!!!
plz yr solve all these misunderstandings!!!
manik itna impulsive kyun hai!!!
ab nandu ne abortion nahi kiya toh her life will be in danger...
manik needs to realize his mistakes vry soon before its too late. !!

nd yes i hve not buddied u ..cause i dont require pm its really troublesome to.manage pm fr me!! nd even u dont hve to take trouble bt i will make sure to comment in every updates!!!
plz update soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god !! Such a depressing update. .
You have portrayed nandini and manik emotions so brilliantly. Loved it. .

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