2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 115

Originally posted by: Shubhijaiswal

yeeehhh kya hua kese hua kyu hua kab hua...
hiii...i m commenting for the first time plz i need ur intro can u give me a pm plzz...now on the point kyaa ff likhe ho apne like really hatred ki yoh book shop h yaarrr plz unki hatred ko thoda sa kam krdona humare manan love ke sign h...plz but story ki toh koi baat hi nhi baap re par kaha se kaha pahocha diye story...amazing...love ur story alot...waiting for ur pm...thnkx for always pming me...

SHUBHI

hy dear i tried for the pm but they showed some errror i am aashna you know me as the writer of devil's bride i m 20 yrs old i m from rajasthan doing bsc from pcm or glad u luv my writting or i like u r cmnt i guess u r my silent reader or hatered ki book shop nh h whole package hai comedy luv romance sb tha hatered to ab aya story me

Originally posted by: sshaikh

Ur update was emotional n heart touching n I just luv ur ff I hav no complains but now a days u hav cut short the length of d chapters y so? Plz try to giv long updates as I love ur ff n Pl zada din manan ko alag mat karna already serial me b manan alag Ho Gaye he Pl yaha to Mila do manan ko lol I know emotional Ho Gaya but koi nai I luv ur updates keep writing

arey actually it depends on the part if i have so many scenes in one part than updates are long but agar is hatered wale part ko jyda long rkha hota to readers bash kar dete muje lol wese next part is long or dark zone is quite long and glad u love my writting

Originally posted by: Princess90998

This was so sad..
Why always because of mens impulsive behaviour.. Girls have to suffer.. Can't watch Nandani suffer more.. She too deserves happiness.. Manik should be taught a lesson.. but not by killing Nandani let her live..
I don't have problem with the twist u bring in story..
But Nandani is the one who is giving everything from the starting of this relationship..
It's ur story.. Ur baby.. Write well I trust u.. But keep In mind that Nandani deserves happiness.. Every girl who sacrificed deserves happiness.. Sorry got a bit emotional.. but I love this story... To bas jada ho gaya.. Lots of love.. keep writing..

grl u actually caught my story line or dont worry i m gonna punish manik but the thing is she has to suffer aftr all its devil's bride its about nandini and his husband story line is how a devil turn into a human told you dark part is a extreme part manik ko punishment jarur milegi i promise and she will get what she deserves but she has to fight for all this

Rula dia pagle ... ;)
itna dat toh meri amma vhi nahi deta... But must say u r sach a drama queen... Kya drama likha amezing

Option no 4... Qa yaar..lyk seriously aapko sach me chain hi nhi milta na bina nandu ko rulaye nd manan k beech me fight nd argument karwaye bina..i seriously doubt Ki aap manan fan ho bhi ya nhi. Nw this tym plz do some kripa on us nd nxt update me kuch lite content rkhna otherwise we won't be forgiving u..plz no roona dhona 🤬

Hi...ur story it's really different...but ya it's tooo good...I read ur story but was confused btw present and past but I have to read it again but it was really awesome to read tis story again and again...trust m...u r too good and yes here he is really a monster manik malthotra

Nice...beautifully potrayed the emotions..nxt prt soon...waitinggg... 😊

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