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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...sorry last update ko cmmnt nhn kar payi
He is so caring and nandu and her mood swings haha

Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing...
...manan having twins...
...nandu's mood swings...😆
thank you so much for PM 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">amazing...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">...manan having twins...
...nandu's mood swings...😆
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">thank you so much for PM </font>😊

thanx..
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Posted: 9 years ago



Thanks for pm..dear

Amazing update.

Very beautiful surprise

For manan.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
Please update the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome superb update

Manan are very happy because they are going to have twins

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alind713

Please update the next part


I will post after sometime
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyy
Thanks for pm
Sorry for late reply
Nice update
Wow twins!! Manan se jyada excited to mai hu
Anyways the update was amazing
Good to read pregnancy phase!!
Waiting for next

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Posted: 9 years ago

TUM HI HO

Part : 71

They reaches home

Nandini : manik I m feeling hungry

Manik : nandini u sit here..
I bring something to eat

Nandini sit on couch n manik go to kitchen n bring some food for her

Manik put food on table n say
"Food is here "

Nandini : manik ab mere kuch khane ka mn nhi hai

Manik : abhi just 5 min before u was saying that u r feeling hungry

Nandini make faces n say "manik ab mere bilkul mn nhi hai "

Manik sit on couch with her take one spoon of soup n say "nandini plz take little bit vrna u will become weak and our babies remain hungry "

Nandini : okay

Manik start feeding her n than nandini start coughing very badly n manik start rubbing her back n say r u okay na n nandini coughing is not stopping n manik call the servant n order him to bring water n than nandini drink water than she feel better

Manik moving hand on head say "ab okay na "

Nandini : hmm...

Manik : CHLO take some rest

Nandini start getting up n manik say "wait "

Manik hold nandini his arm n nandini say "manik I m okay"

Manik say " no u r not "

Manik holding nandini reaches to room
Nandini hold manik face n say "manik I m f9 don't worry "

Manik kiss on nandini hand n cover her with blanket switch of the light n sit with her n than nandini holding manik hand sleep n after that manik also sleep for while n than nandini get up n see manik also sleeping so cutely n nandini smiles n kiss on his forehead n than manik also get up n say "tum kB uthi "

Nandini "just abhi"

N than cabir comes in the room

Cabir : manik nandini jldi niche hum SB niche tumhara wait kr rhai hai

Manik : we r coming in 5 min.

N than the come downstairs

N nandini sits with mukti

Mukti : are nandini how'z sonography

She didn't say anything

Mukti : nandini tum kuch bol kyo nhi rhi
Manik SB thik hai na

Manik : voh mukti ...

Alai : guyz u r scaring us say na wht happened

Cabir : haan manik bol na

Nandini looks toward manik n smiles n than she looks toward everyone n say guyz Now we have to decide two name for our babies N nandini look down n blushes

Mukti : really..

Alai : wao that's great

N cabir standing with manik hug him n say congrats bro.
N druv also

N everybody hug them

Nandini : n alai how'z yr sonography

Alai : it's so amazing we see our baby for the first time

Nandini : yeah..
It's a great experience

Navya : ab hum tin nhi 4 bacho ki massi banugi
I m so happy for u nandini

Nandini smiles

Cabir : acha guyz wht's the plan of holi tomorrow

Manik : holi party at our house

Mukti : kl ke liye bhut excited hn

Navya : mukti tum holi ke liye excited ho ya fir abhi do din ke bd kl ane wla hai

Mukti shys n say "navya..."

They talked n than all gone home
N manik n nandini sitting in whole

Nandini : manik.. Kl humhri phli holi hogi with our babies

Manik : hmm...

Nandini : i m waiting for tomorrow

Manik : main bhi

Next day

Nandini get up n see manik is sleeping n he didn't disturb manik n get ready for holi function wears white dress n stands in front of mirror combing her hair n manik also get up n say nandini...
Gud mrng

Nandini : gud mrng manik

Nandini take the colour from the plate n rub it manik face n say happy holi manik...

Manik : nandini...
Wait (holding her hand )

Nandini : manik i win first i put color on u

N nandini goes out of room saying manik i going downstair for doing preparation n get ready fast
After sometime

Nandini is doing preparation for holi standing at pool
Nandini scolding servant that "why u put colours here
Maine kha tha na colours ko pool se dur lakhna "

Manik comes to her n hold her hand say " nandini why u taking so much of stress i m here na i will do everything come here"
manik make here sit on chair

Nandini : pr manik itna sara km hai

Manik : sh...
Maine kha na u sit here
Main sb krta u will see everything from here okay

Nandini make faces n say "okay"

Manik take some color n put on nandini face n say " happy holi nandini "

N manik bend down n put some colour on nandini tummy happy holi my babies from papa n muma
Nandini hold manik face n manik get up n kiss on nandini forehead

Manik : nandini..
Now u sit here
N don't try to get up
I will do everything

N manik start doing preparation n nandini is looking at manik n smiling

N after sometime fab 5 n navya reaches accept mukti n they put color on eachother n wish happy holi

Alai : mukti nhi ae ab tk

Navya : hum ushai call krte hai

Mukti also come but not abhi
N eveybody wish her holi

N abhi comes towards mukti while singing song

(Do me a favour lets play holi
Rango me hai pyar ki boli) - (2))

N mukti get away from him n sing

(Ho mere pichhe pichhe pichhe kyon aaye
Mera jiya jiya kyon dhadkaye
Ja re ja dont touch my choli
Uff ye holi hai ye holi - 2)

N abhi put rang on mukti face n every body throw colour on abhi n than standing n manik comes to her n from back he puts color on nandini face

( Hey do me a favour lets play holi
Uff ye holi hai ye holi
Rango me hai pyar ki boli
Uff ye holi hai ye holi - 2)

N manik touch nandini hand from downward n comes up to shoulder n put color n everybody putting color

(Do me a favour lets play holi
Neela peela lal gulal
Uspe tere gore gal
Kali kali aankho wali
Mast mast hai teri chal
Hai bahana holi ka

(N nandini turns n manik agian try to put color on her face n nandini sing )

Paas aana chahe tu
Chand se mere chehre pe
Rang lagana chahe tu

(N than nandini go forward n alai n mukti n navya comes to her n they start dancing with singing song)

Oh holi hai aani jaani
Tere dil me hai beimani
Mai nahi hu itni bholi
Uff ye holi hai ye holi
(Uff ye holi hai ye holi
Do me a favour lets play holi - (2)
Uff ye holi hai ye holi - 2)

N their partner comes n they start dancing with them n sing song

(Do me a favour lets play holi
Tu mili jabse mujhko
Holi hi kuch aur lage
Teri payal ke ghunghru
Meri har dhadkan pe baje)

N than girls push their patner n sing
(Yu hi baato baato me
Dil churana jane tu
Mane na kehna koi
Tu kare jo thane tu)

N they all come close to their partner n throws color of them n ran
(Ho tujhpe mai diwane hari
Tere pyar ki mai hu diwani
Holi me tere sang mai boli
Uff ye holi hai ye holi - 2)

the boyz ran towards them n every put color on eachother
(Do me a favour lets play holi
Uff ye holi hai ye holi
Rangon mein hai pyar ki boli
Uff ye holi hai ye holi) - (2)
(Do me a favour lets play holi
Rangon mein hai pyar ki boli) - (2))

N in last manik n nandini comes to corner n nandini come close to manik face n put color on manik lips from her lips n than both look into eachother eyes n than manik fuses her lips with his lips holding his waist n nandini put hand on manik chest

( Lahu munh lag gaya
Lahu munh lag gaya
Soya tha nas nas mein
Ab ye jag gaya
Aye lahu munh lag gaya
Labon ke chhoone se
Khwabon ke kone se
Labon ke chhoone se
Khwabon ke kone se
Bachke sab se lab se lab
Ye rag se rag gaya

Aye.. lahu munh lag gaya
Aye.. lahu munh lag gaya)


Part : 72


Holi party is over n all guest are gone n manik n nandini setting at pool site

Manik : nandini..
U r wet go n change yr cloth vrna tumhai fever ho jaega

Nandini : okay ..
But i want to play holi more
(Nandini take the color n throws on manik )
Holi is not over manik

Manik hold nandini n shouts" nandini...
I said na no more holi "

Nandini : why r u scolding me
(Nandini start crying like baby)
Maine bs yhi toh bola hai i want to play holi

Manik : nandini... nandini...
K f9 tum nhi mn rhi na

Manik hold nandini in his arm n comes bath room n put her down under the shower n on the shower n start cleaning her color he start rubbing her face n nandini looking into his eyes n than nandini put her hand on shoulder n make him come closure to her

(Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re)

Manik unpin her saree palu n kiss on her shoulder n nandini kiss on manik neck holding her face

(Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re)

Manik bend down n hold her waist n kiss on her belly n nandini move foreward n manik holding her palu come close to her n hold her from back n kiss on her back

(Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re)

N manik again hold nandini in his arm n come out from bath room n put her on bed n manik come closure to nandini n hold her face n start doing kiss on her lips n nandini also respond to her kiss n they lost in this n ly down on the bed

( Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re)

Manik unpin the blouse of nandini n kiss on it n nandini turn hold him n than he break the hug n cubbing his face fuses his lips her n in b/w the kiss manik hand travel to skirt note n open it than he get up remove his cloth also n her remaining cloth n covers themself with blanket than the whole room filled with their moans.. n after 1 hour intimacy manik enter inside her she screamed in pain but manik sucks her tear suppressed her scream by soft n than the pain of her turns to pleasure n after both of them exhausted they manik left her n taking in arm both drifted in sleep after confessing their love for eachother

(Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re)

Evening time

Manik n nandini resting on couch in their room holding each other arm n nandini say "manik... main coffee lekr ati hn"

Manik : okay but come fast

Nandini get feels light headache n sit down again holding her head n manik see her n hold nandini n say " wht happen r u okay na "

Nandini : hmmm..

Nandini again try to get up but again sit down

Manik : nandini...
Sit here
Ab btao kya hua

Nandini start sweating n say "ma..
Ma..nik i can't able to breath "

Manik : be relax nandini
Take long long breath

N manik call the doc.

Manik put nandini on bed n make her sit comfortably n give her water n nandini sweating very badly

Manik holding her hand n moving other hand on her forehead n saying again n again"be relax "

Nandini : manik..
Babies ko toh kuch nhi hoga na (tears in eyes )

Manik : sh...
Kisko kuch nhi hoga
Doc. Aa rhai hai

N doc. Arrives

Manik : doc. Dekhiye na nandini kya hogy

Doc. : wait let me check

Doc. Check nandini n give her injection n nandini goes in deep sleep n manik standing along her by holding her hand

Doc. N manik come out

Manik : nandini kaisi hai

Doc. : she is absolutely fine bs body main bhut weakness hai becoz she carrying two child

Manik : babies toh thik hai na

Doc. : haan babies are also f9
agr aisa fir se hota give this injection

Manik :okay
Thank u doc.

Doc. Gone

Manik comes in room n sit beside nandini n hold her hand n do kiss on it n move other hand on her hair
N say i love so much nandini
N after 1 hour nandini open her eyes n manik keep on stairing her n nandini try to get up but manik stop her n say no no nandini don't get up u need to take rest

Nandini : manik humhre babies toh thik hai na

Manik : they r absolutely f9

Nandini take a relaxation breath

Manik : lekin u r not okay
U r weak becoz u didn't take proper rest proper food nthng

Nandini holding her ear n say "sorry "

Manik smiles

Nandini : manik i m sorry maine tumhai aur humhre babies ko kitna preshn kiya

Manik : kk
Now u stay here i bring the food for u

Nandini : i don't want to eat anything

Manik : nandini..
Again u r doing same thing
Sun rhae ho na babies muma kitna juth bolti hai

Nandini : okay okay baba f9 i m taking the food

Manik smiles n say that's good

N manik go to bring food n nandini touch her belly n say papa n mumma love so much

N manik comes with food n put on table n make her nandini get up n put the pillow on her back n take the food n start feeding her n nandini say manik u also take na

Manik : okay but from yr hand

N nandini smiles n feed him

N than nandini hug manik n say i love so much manik
N manik also hold her tightly n say i love to my doll

First of all happy diwali to all... hope u guyz..enjoy the holi part... so leave yr.. comment.. n hit like n guyz.. 2 3 more parts r left without any twist after twist of this story will not stop... so get ready for them
Keep smiling 😊
Love Mehak





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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey nice update

N plzz ab don't separate them

N aur koi problem create mat karna

They suffer so much

Ab sab thik rakha

Loves the manik care for nandu

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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