Manan ff -Tum hi ho (part :73&74pg -139) thread 2 pg-1 - Page 61

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i am sorry for commenting late!. the update was awesome. wow alya and nandini pregnant. thanks for the pm and continue soon!
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Sorry for commenting late! Was out of station!😛
Coming to the update! Finally everything seems to be positive for Manan😃
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Tum Hi Ho

PART: 68

Manik comes upstair holding nandini n put down her on bed
Manik sit beside nandini

Manik : nandini u know that
Ki tumhne mujhe kitni badhi kushi di hai
I m so so happy

(Nandini having tear in eyes n smiling seeing manik )

Manik : wht happen nandini why u having tear

Nandini : manik...
Yeh toh kushi ke ashu hai

Nandini holding manik hand say" manik...
baby ki ek alg kushi hai
Aur ushai jada kush main tumhai dekh kr hn "

Manik take her into his arm n hold her tightly n nandini too hold him tightly

Manik break the hug n say

Manik : nandini..
I want baby doll like u
Chotu nandu

Nandini : no manik i want chotu manik like u
Naughty like u

Manik : u r trying to say that i m naughty na (start coming closure to her )

Nandini : manik..

Manik kiss on nandini chicks

Manik : i want baby doll like u only
Jo mujhe bole deda i love u

Nandini : manik..
Jo bhi ho
Yeh baby humhre pyaar ki nishani banega

Manik : yeah..
Right

Fab 5 n navya n abhi comes there n they shout suprise

Cabir : congrats manik
Nandini

They all wishes manik n nandini

Nandini : i m so happy to see u all here

Cabir : n nandini we r all happy to see u both happy
Vaise ek badhi party toh bnti hai na guyz
Nandini itne time bd ghr ae hai aur humhri family main 3 nye mehmn ane

Navya : tum bilkul shi bol rhai ho cabir

Manik : yeah that's an good idea

Mukti : so done party
Mere ghr pr

Next mrng

Manik is sleeping n nandini come out from the washroom after taking bath n she is wearing pink jumpsuit n her hair are wet. She go to manik n start moving her hair around manik face n manik get up n hold nandini arm

Nandini : gud mrng manik..

Manik get up n kiss on nandini tummy n say gud mrng baby n nandini smiles n than he kiss nandini forehead n say now gud mrng nandini

Manik : now i daily wish gud mrng to my baby also like i wish u i want to start my day with both of u my very imp. Part of my life

Nandini smiles n she get up n say

Nandini : manik get ready
I m waiting for u at breakfast

After sometime at breakfast table

Manik : i want to tll u something

Nandini : haan bolo na

Manik : mujhe sb pta chl gya hai ki tum 2 sal kya hua tha

Nandini : btao na fir manik main hr time bs yhi sochti rhti hn ki akhir hua kya tha

Manik : kl main hospital gya tha mere bhut puchne ke badh ushne voh khola aur btaya ki tum vha ghb ho gye thi
Aur fir unhai ne apne hospital ki reputation btachne ke kisi aur ki deadbody rakh di thi

Nandini : manik...
Koe hospital wle aise kaise kr skte
Lekin manik main vha se gyb kaise hoe

Manik : mujhe pta hai
Voh karan tha
Main ushai bhi kl jail main milne gya tha ushe pta chla ki

Nandini : karan
Toh jail main hai na toh fir

Manik : nandini jb humhai lga ki voh deadbody tumhari toh karan ne humhai kuch nhi btaya aur kisi ne hospital main chodh aya yeh keh kr ki tum uski patni ho

Nandini having tear in eyes

Manik : r u okay na
(Put his hand on her hand)

Nandini : manik i m feeling better main kbse yeh soch kr preshn ho rhi thi ki mere sth kya hua tha
Manik... i want to forgot all this voh karan ab jail main ab voh kuch nhi kr skta

Manik : nandini.
Yha aur main humsha tumhre sth hun

Nandini : manik i know

Manik : nandini..
I have to go office
Main ghr jldi ajaunge fir we will go together for party

Nandini : okay

Manik kiss on nandini head n say" muma baby ka achai se kyl rkhna aur baby muma ka achai kyl rkhna "

Nandini smiles

After sometime nandini reaches to kapoor mension

Payal sees nandini n comes to here

Payal : tum yha

Nandini : i want to talk to u all

Payal : come na

Nandini : mujhe iss bt ka bhut dukh hota hai ki aap logo ne mujhe kuch sach nhi btaya aur fir yeh ek parae ladhki aap lgone itna pyaar diya

Payal : beta humne tumhai kabhi aapni beti se alg nhi smja
Ho ske toh humhai maaf kr dena

Nandini : mom u don't need to

Payal : i m so happy u call me mom

Nandini : main aapko apni mom hi mnti hun
Aur main aapko kuch btana chti ho
I m pregnant

Payal : wao that's great
Jo tumhne khoya voh tumhai milega

Nandini : so humhne party rkhi toh main chti hun ki aap aur dad aur bhai iss party main ae

Payal : beti bulaegi aur maa.. nhi aegi hum jarur aege

Nandini : chlo ab mujhe chlna chiye

Nandini comes out n sit in car n msg. Someone to reach at city restaurant

Nandini reaches there

N there adi waiting for her

Nandini : hi

Adi : ab tumhne mujhe yha kyo bulaya hai

Nandini : i sorry ki main marraige bina kuch btae chli gye

Adi : mujhe pta hai uncle aunty ne sb batya
Aur main tumhai ek bt btana chta hn main niti se bhut pyaar krta tha

Nandini : dekho tum mere bhut achai dost thai

Adi : but main tumse bhi bhut pyaar krta hn (holding her hand)

Nandini : adi wht r u doing just leave my hand

Adi : i really love u

Nandini : wht r u saying
Just leave my hand
It's hurting

Nandini leaves away her hand from him
N say" i m going u will understand but u.."

Adi thinks" tum aise nhi kr skti mere sth"

At evening nandini is getting ready for party n she is wearing black gown n manik comes n hold her say "looking so.. beautiful "he sides her hair n kiss on her back n nandini closes her eyes

Nandini turn n say "manik...
Main aaj soch rhi thi ki "

Manik come close to her lips n say "kya soch rhi thi "

Nandini : i m thinking that
Ki

Manik : wht ?

Nandini slightly pull her n take up the comb n say "ki aaj main kya hairstyle banu "

Manik : nandini..
U already looking so beautifull not need to do anything

Nandini smiles n say k baba.. now.. let go..

They both reaches to mukti house

All guest are also arrived

Cabir comes with singing song toward nandini

(Main daalun taal pe Bhangra
Tu bhi gidda paa le
Chal aisa rang jamaa de hum
Ke bane sabhi matwaale)

Mukti comes to manik n singing

(Mann kahe ki main le aaun
Chaand aur taare saare
Inn haathon par main chaand rakhun
Iss maang mein bhar doon taare)

druv hold manik hand n make them to dance n he singing

(Hello! Hello! tu floor pe kab hai aayi
Ye lo, ye lo, badi solid masti chaayi
Hello! Hello! too much hai tumne lagayi
Ye lo, ye lo, control karo mere bhai

N they all dance n also singing song

(Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole Amritsari choodiyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
koi dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyan (x2))

Manik sing song by singing song by holding nandini hand

(Ye nain matakka tera mujhe bada tadpaave
Tu dekhe to ajj vi dilbar kudiye
teer sa ek chal jaave
Aahaa.. Aahaa..
Kar de bin piye sharabi, chehra tera gulaabi
Koi kyun na yamla ban jaave jo itni ho betaabi)

Cabir comes n sing

(Hello! Hello! dil dil se connect karna
Ye lo, ye lo, ye baatein direct karna)

They all dancing n enjoying alot

(Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhadke ye dil
Chhan chhan bole Amritsari choodiyan
Raat badi hai mastaani
toh dilbar jaani kar le gallan goodiyan

Oye.. oye marjana oye..)

In last nandini hug manik

Manik drag nandini to corner n start coming closure to her

Nandini : manik kya kr rhai ho

Manik : kya kar rha hun mtlb

Cabir sees them n say


Cabir : kuch toh shrm karo
Ab tum dono mummy papa bane vle ho

Manik leave nandini

Manik :tu yha kya kr rha hai

Cabir : main toh yha se ja rha
Lekin manik main bta doon party idr nhi vha hai
Jb time mile toh aajana

Cabir goes

manik turn to see nandini but nandini is also gone from there

Manik thinks n say "ab yeh kha chli gye"


Part : 69

Manik sees that nandini is meeting with payal n ram n akash

Manik comes n say "nandini yeh log yha kya kr rhai hai "

Nandini : i called them

Manik :but why nandini tun janti toh wht they do with u

Nandini : manik..
I know but main unhai apni family mtnti hn

Akash : dekho manik hum yha kaisi ka mood spoil nhi krna chte if u want than we can go from here

Nandini : no bhai it's okay

Manik : agr nandini ko koe problem nhi
Toh thik hai

Akash : we r sorry manik

Payal : main janti hn ki tum logo ke sth bhut glt hua hai
Lekin humhne nandini ko beti mna aur manta bhi hai

Manik : Okay...

After party is over they reaches home

Nandini : manik...
Tum mujhe naraj toh nhi ho na

Manik : baby.. Ka dada baby ki mom se naraj ho skta hai kya

Nandini : manik i m serious

Manik : i m also serious i don't have any problem ki tum kya chti ho
Jisme tum kush ushmain main main kush
My life is in yr happiness

Nandini hug him n say n my happiness in u n manik also hold her

Nandini break the hug n she feels vomiting immediately go to washroom n do the vomiting n manik bang the door n say r u okay nandini

Nandini come n see manik is calling doc. For that n nandini stops manik

Nandini : manik why r u calling doc.

Manik : nandini u r not well
Tumhai ulti hoe hai n u r saying why i m calling doc.

Nandini start laughing n pull chicks n say manik u r so cute


Manik : nandini tum betho tumhri tabyit thik nhi hai n why r u laughing

Nandini : manik...
Relax this is normal in pregnancy

Manik sit beside nandini

Nandini hold his arm n put head on his shoulder n say manik..

Manik : haan

Nandini : always be with me like this
N manik kiss on her hair

For sometime they sit like this

N than nandini go to washroom to change her cloth
N come out n ly on bed in manik arm n kiss on his chicks n say gud nite manik

Manik kiss on forehead n on belly too n say gud nite mummy n baby

Next mrng

Nandini get up see manik is sitting on couch n manik see that nandini open her eyes n manik go to her

Nandini : gud mrng manik

Manik : gud mrng nandu

Manik : go n be fresh fast
I waiting for u in kitchen

Nandini : kitchen ??

Manik : haan baba kitchen
U come okay i m going

Nandini : okay

N after sometime nandini get out from the bathroom n after taking bath n she is looking so pretty in black capry n white crop top n she comb her hair quickly n go straight to the kitchen n see manik preparing something

Nandini : Wht r u doing

Manik : today i want to prepare food for u

Nandini : pr manik tumhai kuch bna nhi ata

Manik slightly hold nandini n put her on slap of kitchen

Manik : u sit here n just wait n watch

N than manik pick up the onion n he start cutting it after facing many difficulties n nandini laughing looking toward manik n manik look toward her n say
Dekha i know how to cut onion
N nandini smiles

N than manik take the egg n break it so hardly that egg droplets comes on his face n nandini laughs

Manik : nandini..
Tum dekhna main world ka best omelet banaunga

Nandini : okay okay let's see(n smiles)

After struggling manik makes the omelet
N put it on plate n say omelet is ready

Nandini : wao manik this omelet is looking very tasty

Manik : so taste it na
Wait

Than manik give her one bite of omelet

N waiting for nandini reaction

Manik : howz it is ?

Nandini : manik it's yummy

Manik : really ?

Nandini : haan
Taste it na

Manik take one bite of it n throws it immediately n nandini smiles

Manik : yeh kya hai
No taste at all
How u eat it nandini

Nandini : manik becoz yr love is hidden it

Manik : kha main bna rha hai world ka best omelet
Aur yeh ban ka gya world worst omelet

Nandini get down n hold manik n say

Nandini : manik i don't care ki tum world ka best omelet nhi bna skte
But u r always a world bestest hubby n in future u will be world best dad also
N for it is bestest omelet ever in the world

Manik bend down hold her waist n kiss on it n say yeah i will world bestest dad

Nandini : manik i feeling so hungry
U go to table n main kuch bna kr lekr ati hn

Manik : okay

after sometimes nandini comes with sandwich n put it on the table n they feed eachother n than manik take nandini n make her stand up n put her hand on his shoulder n n put his one hand on her waist n hold other n start dancing n with singing song

(Waaqif toh huey tere dil ki baat se
Chhupaya jise tune qaaynaat se
Waaqif toh huey tere uss khayal se
Chhupaya jise tune apne aap se
Kahin na kahin teri aankhein,
teri baatein padh rahe hain hum
Kahin na kahin tere dil mein,
dhadkano mein dhal rahe hain hum)

N while dancing manik lift her upward n nandini hold manik face n manik take the round

(Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..
Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa)

N than manik goes to office n comes late at home n nandini got upset with him n manik hold her face n sing song

(Uss din tu haan udaas rahe
tujhe jis din hum na dikhe na miley
Uss din tu chup-chaap rahe
tujhe jis din kuch na kahe na suney)

manik stand back of her n hold her n singing song n kiss on her back n than nandini turn n hold his face

(Main hoon bann chuka, jeene ki ik wajah
Iss baat ko khud se tu na chupaa..
Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..
Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa)

Next evening manik closes nandini eyes n make her enter in the room that decorated by him for their baby n nandini see that n smiles come her face n she hugged manik

(Lab se bhale tu kuch na kahe
Tere dil mein hum hi toh base yaa rahe
Saansein teri iqraar kare
Tera haath agar chhulein, pakde
Teri khwahishein kar bhi de tu bayaan
Yehi waqt hai inke izhaar ka..
Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..
Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa)


like this 2 month passed manik starts her day with kissing nandini forehead n tummy n ends day with in a same way
Manik take care of nandini so well n never leaves her alone..

So here is next update... hope u all like... n gugz.. plz.. leave yr...comment...


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