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Mehaklovely thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

it was awesome update. Please post the next part soon. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Thank you so much to bring them closer to eachother. I hope everything will be normal soon. Thanks for the pm. Tack care of yourself.



Thanx dear 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks for om..dear.

Awesome awesome update.

Manik did try hard to memorize her. .

But shadi. What is going next.

Thanks for sharing this amazing update.

Stay blessed dear.




Love. .
Jyoti.





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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb
Signs of hope...
Uske parents usse sach kyun nahi bta rahe...
Niti is nandu that is confirmed
Wanna see her regaining her memory soon
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..
Jst hope an Nandu ko Sab yaad aa jaye...
Luved it..
Thnx for pm..
Date soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
I hope Nandini remembers everything.
They should be together.
Can't wait to read further.
Thanks for update & pm.
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a update it..was...fab..i must say..u r awsome..!!
Keep writing..!!
Loved it really...
Thanxxx fo pm..:)
N plz update nxt soon..plzzz..
Waiting fo it!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tum Hi Ho

Part : 64

Nandini fall in manik arm

Manik : nandini open yr eyes
N manik put nandini on car n throws water on her eyes n she open her eyes

Manik hug her n say thank god u r okay n than she break the hug

Manik : pta hai main kitna dr gya tha nandini
U okay na

Niti : yeah i m okay
N plz don't call me nandini
I m niti kapoor

Manik thought before that nandini remember but she didn't

Manik holding arm n say : abhi u said i love manik
Voh kya tha nandini

Niti get of car n push manik

Niti : dekho tum kya bol i don't understanding
Mujhe ghr jana n i m going

Niti sits in taxi n leaves n manik try to stop her n shouts wait nandini n than manik gets angry n say
Jb main janta hn tum nandini bhi i can't do anything becoz u don't want it to be happen n manik sits in car

Scene change

Niti reaches home

Payal : beta yeh kya

Niti : kuch nhi mom ek chota sa accident tha

Payal : u okay na

Niti : yeah mom just chill my f9 mom i m going take some rest i m feeling very teried

Payal : okay u take some rest than get ready for medhi aur sangeet function okay

Niti : okay

Manik also reaches home

Mukti : where is nandini
Ushai kuch yaad aya

Manik : nhi voh kuch yd hi nhi krna chati mukti

Cabir : manik dekhiyo agr voh nandini hai toh ushai sb yd ajaega

Manik : ab kuch nhi ho skta
Kl uski shaddhi

Mukti : wht ?

Manik : haan..
Main hr gya..

By saying this manik go upstair n reaches to his room
Manik says by seeing nandini pic why nandini u r doing this
Plz come back n main tumhari shaddhi hote nhi dekh skta
But tum agr in sbse kuch ho toh i m also happy
N now it is more easy to spend my life becoz i have hope of yr coming back before there is no hope
I will spend my whole life in hope of that one day u will come back

Scene change function get over n niti setting n seeing her mendhi n thinks why i m not feeling happy it my function i feel like i m lost
Wht happening to u niti
U should be happy jaise tum chti ho ushai tumhri shaddhi hai

They both can't able to sleep whole nite
Next mrng
Niti open her eyes n go out of her room n see all r busy in preparation of her marriage
N sb kitne kush hai pr main kyo nhi niti thinks

Payal come

Payal : niti tum uth gye

Niti : Mujhe sb bhut ajeeb lg rha hai mom

Payal : shaddhi se phle hr laddhki aisa hi feel krti hai

Niti thinks this was not like that this is something else

Payal : niti go n fresh n up than haldhi ki rasam hai

Niti : okay mom

Niti get ready for haldhi function n everybody haldhi on her

Payal :ab tumhari uthri hoe hldhi adi ke ghr bhij vani hai

At manik sitting in couch

Mukti comes

Mukti : manik...
Tu kha ja rhai cabir ne mujhe btaya

Manik : Dubai
main yha nhi rhai skta nandini ko kisko aur ke sth nhi dekh skta

Mukti : manik..

Manik : i know tu kya bolegi ki voh nandini nhi hai
Main nandini se bhut pyr krta hn i can feel that voh nandini hi hai i have seen in her eyes

Manik leaves

Mukti : agr tujhe lgta hai vo nandini toh mujhe hi kuch krna padhega

At evening niti is getting ready for marrige wearing red langha n she is looking so beautiful but looking very disturbed
Niti seeing in front of remembering that why i m feeling that main kuch piche chodh rhi hn n she is sitting alone
N mukti comes there

Niti turns n see

Mukti :i m mukti manik's friend

Niti : hi

Mukti : mujhe tumhse yeh bolna tha
Manik is not well becoz he thinks that u r his wife nandini tum janti ho niti manik ne 2 sal kaise spend kiya hai without her
Voh har ek sec. Nandini ko yd krta tha

Niti having tear in eyes n say main kya kr skti hn

Mukti : plz tum yeh shaddhi mt karo

Niti : but i m not nandini

Some girls comes n take niti down downstair..

Niti clear her tears

Niti : i m sorry but i can't do any help of u

Niti go with girls n niti coming down n start remembering that yeh it's her marriage with manik but she can't able to remember the face n than she remembering their romance n she reaches to mandap n sit there n pandit start the mantr n nandini remember manik face when manik hold her take the round n in all scene she remember her face n in b/w she standup n say i can't do this marriage
Yeh glt hai n she ran outside n everybody trys to stop her..but she don't stop n she see mukti going n she say mukti n mukti turns see her coming

Nandini : mukti mujhe sb yd aa gya
Mujhe manik se milna hai

Mukti hug her n say i m miss u so much nandini

Nandini : i m sorry maine tum abko itna preshn kiya aur sbse jada manik ko

Mukti : manik dubai ja rhai

Nandini : Dubai ?

Mukti : voh tumhri shaddhi kisi aur se hote hue nhi dekh skta
But u don't worry main abhi manik ko call krti hn

Nandini having tear in eyes n thinks i m sorry manik maine tumhai itna preshn kiya plz forgive me

Mukti : manik ka call nhi lf rha humhai airport jana hoga

They both sit in car n mukti driving the car n nandini is continuously trying the call n nandini say plz pic up the phn manik

They reaches airport n ran inside but airport security stop n they say without ticket u go inside n nandini start begging there plz main 2 min. Main ajaungi plz
N he allow nandini to go inside n on other hand manik is sitting n waiting for annoucement for his flight n nandini finding manik n saying manik everybody looking at her n manik get up n start going n nandini reaches n see manik n shouts manik n manik stop n he also see her n got suprised n both ran toward eachother n nandini having tear in her eyes n manik touch her face n nandini also touch his face n than manik hug her tightly n say nandini...
They both hold eachother so tighty n lost in eachother n manik break the hug n touch his face with nandini n both having tear in eyes n manik again hug her

Bg song

(Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho)


Part : 65

They both hold eachother so tighty n lost in eachother n manik break the hug n touch his face with nandini n both having tear in eyes n manik again hug her
Again manik break the hug n hold nandini face n looking into her eyes n having smile on his face n nandini having tear n say "manik i m sorry i give u so much pain na "

Manik clearing her tear say" no nandini
No more tears "

Manik hold her hand n smile n nandini too smile n than they come outside

Mukti : i m so so happy
I can't believe u r back nandini (hugging nandini )

Mukti break the hug n say nandini u know that hum sbko toh koe umeed hi nhi thi but manik ko pura yakeen tha u will come back

N both look at eachother n smile

Mukti : but nandini tum niti
I don't understand

Nandini : even i don't know mukti ki why
Ki iss family me mujhe itna pyaar diya main unki kuch lgti bhi nhi hn

Manik : nandini but tum yha ae kaise

Nandini : mujhe bs itna yd
1 sal phle
I forget everything n than doc. Came n said this is my family n than we all gone to london
Manik mujhe kuch yaad nhi ki 1 sal phle hospital main kaise ae
(Nandini got tense )

Manik : nandini be relax
We will go tomorrow

Nandini : but manik i want to know that ki mere sth kya hua tha

Manik: we r together
N jo bhi ab main tumhai khi nhi jane dunga
(Holding in her arm but nandini try to remembering wht ki voh yha kaise ae thi )

Mukti : nandini..
Iske bare main hum bd main pta lagae
Abhi tum 2 salo bd ae ho
U spend time with manik

After sometime manik n nandini reaches home
They entering in the house

Manik : u know that
Everything was same jaisa tum chodh kr gye thi
(Manik is looking so happy n nandini see him n thinks manik kitna kush lg rha hai aur main bs yhi soch rhi hn ki hum 2 sal ke liye alg kyo hue )

They reaches to their room

Manik comes to her n hold her n say "nandini now we r together
Na
Nandini tum yeh kyo soch rhi ho ki hum 2 sal alg rhai "

Nandini : yeah u rite manik

Manik : go n change yr cloth uske bd
Mujhe tumhse bhut sari bate karni hai

nandini go to washroom n after changing her cloth she stands in front of mirror n come outside n see manik is not there n she say manik...
Manik kha chla gya

Manik comes n say nandini there is suprise for u
Nandini tumhai kya lga hum itne time bd ek sth hai
Main iss day ko special nhi bnauga

Nandini hug her say manik i don't want anthing if u r with
I love u so much

Manik break the hug n kiss on head n say i love u
Manik close her eyes with hand n make her come to pull site n he decorated that so beautifully with lights n red roses

Nandini open her eyes n see that n smile come on her face

Nandini : wao manik it's so beautiful

Manik : not more beautiful than u

Manik hold nandini hand n make her sit on chair n than they talk for many hours nandini put her head on manik shoulder n hold his hand

after sometime rain starts manik get up n hold her hand n make her stand up looking inti her eyes by singing song

(Mujh mein safar tu karti rahe)

than he hold her waist n their front body collide with eachother n manik hold her face they r both looking into eachother eyes n manik singing song
(Har ik saans mein guzarti rahe)

Than he kiss on her neck again n nandini shiver from his touch n all the memory of before two flashes..
(Shaamo subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jismo jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda)

Manik hold her above from the ground n nandini put her head on manik head n hold manik face n manik

(Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Banke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani (x2))

Manik put nandini down n nandini hug him n manik also hold her tightly

(Dekho na kaisi ijaazat mili hai
Ek doosre mein hifaazat mili hai)

Nandini break the hug n kiss on her both cheeks than on forehead holding her face

(Jeene ki saari zaroorat mili hai
Ye jaam hi hai jaisa yunhi hamesha
Hamesha rahe jis tarah)

Than manik hold her face n kiss on her eyes chicks than forehead

(Shaamo subah tu mera
Tere bina kya mera
Do jismo jaan ek hai
Na hona kabhi tu juda)

Manik start coming close to her the both standing at the corner of pool nandini push manik in pool n manik snatch her hand n she also fall in pool n she hold manik

(Teri meri kahaani
Hai baarishon ka paani
Banke jo ishq barse
Teri meri kahaani (x2))

Manik come close to her n hold her tightly from arm n both looking to eachother eyes n manik fuses his lips wid her. N nandini also respond in same manner they chew bite eachother lips as they r deing from 2 yr.. they r kissing like a hungry animal.. n than they both stop the kiss indeed of oxygen..

(Mujh mein safar tu karti rahe
Har aM saans mein guzarti rahe)

Than he put her on bed n come on top of her.. "i misses u so much... u r my peace of heart.."he said pecking her lips.. " i love. U.. mankk.. " n by saying this nandini take his lips for a passionate kiss.. n in b/w manik hand travel down her shirt botton open it than he leave her.. lips.. come downward n give a wet kiss on her bare stomach n than in one go open her all the botton n by kissing reach toward her face n again take her lips.. for kiss n his hand squeezing the upper sentive part.. n nandini holding his face pulling him more n more.. closer to deepen the kiss n than he again comes down n slide down her lower.. n than give kisses on her thigh n nandini moves her hand on his hair.. than manik remove her lower..inner wear.. by his teeth.. than he rubbing his hand there n nandini.. moaning his.. name... than he give kisses there... n again come above n kiss on her forehead n peck her lips... "baby.. u... okay.. na.. " he said.. softy..
"Manik.. i m more.. than.. okay.. now... i love.. u.. manik... " she said "u know.. wht.. in this 1 yr.. i feel something missinng n it's like that.. everything is complete.. " nandini said.. again.. n than manik take her lips.. n than she come on top of her.. n kisses him n like this they made love for hours.. manik again after 2 yr.. make her own.. than after they hugging eachother sleeps...

Next mrng nandini lying in manik arm n see get up n thinks aaj itne time bd i sleep so well becoz u was with me n than manik put his hand on nandini n also hug hold him n rested in body for sometime
N than she get up n kiss on manik head n than manik also get up n say gud mrng nandini
Gud mrng n manik come close to nandini to kiss on lips n nandini shouts manik...
N she looking so disturbed

Manik : nandini kya hua

So here is next 2 parts... so now everthing is f9 with lots of drama.. n truth behind this reveal in next update.. n if u like than plz.. do more n more comment.. as love yr. Comments alot..
Keep smiling😊😛
Love Mehak


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Posted: 10 years ago
Glad ki finally nandu ko sab yaad aagya...
Pls. Ab sab thik kr do pls...
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks for pm dear.

This was very beautiful update.

Nandni remember everything.

So she runs and stop manik on time.

Both are so happy for to meet each other. .

But both forgot about their baby...😊.

Nandni as a pregnant woman ...😕

She remember manik but how she forgot her own child. 😲.???.

Maybe next update will be a answers.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful chapters.


Stay blessed dear.




Love. .
Jyoti.






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