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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy
Sorry for late rpl
Thanks for pm
And the update were superb!
Earlier it was damn emotional and full of drama and action!!
Bt still you have managed it well!!
Let's see what's niti secret!!
Manik finally he is happy!!
Let's see how he gets back his nandini!!
Waiting for next! !
Love you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocolava14

Amazing on...finalyy nandu ki wapis entry hogyi...ehehh😉

I lykd update...manik was very good in dis...d last scene ...determined manik to bring his nandu back...reallly excited fr this new journey😊😳
Always keep writing😊

Thanx.. dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shubhshash

Awesome update. ...too good...

Vry emotional. ..
But at the end I am happy that manik found nandini...but eagerly waiting fr the mystery to unfold. ..
Continue soon
Bye tc stay blessed. ..!😊

Thanx.. dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanikagokhale

Emotional update!

Loved the twist!
Hoping everything becomes good in Manik-Nandini's life!
Keep writing such beautiful pieces!😳
Continue soon..
Thanks for the pm dear..😃
Take care😃

Thanx.. dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RKDEWAANA

Amazing on...finalyy nandu ki wapis entry hogyi...ehehh

I
lovedd update...manik was very good ...dee last scene ...determined
manik to bring his nandu back...
Always keep writing😊👏

Thanx.. dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tum Hi Ho

Part : 62

Manik resting on bed half on bed n leg on floor he is lost in nandini thought fab5 come there

Mukti : manik kya hua
Why u call us so urgently

Cabir : sb thik toh hai na

Manik get up n he looking so happy

Manik : cabir...
Mukti..
Sb thik nhi
Bhut acha hai

Druv : mtlb

Manik : guyz... guyz...
Nandini is alive

Everybody get shocked to hear this

Mukti : wht ? Manik yeh tu kya bol rha hai

Manik : even i can't able to believe when i saw her first time
But today i m sure she is nandini

Cabir : manik tu janta hai bhi hai tu kya bol rha hai

Manik : cabir... cabir...
Main jo bol rha hn apne hosho awaj main bol rha hn
Main jb tumhai ushai milvaunga na than u all came to know

Mukti : manik tu pgl ho gya hai kya
Nandini kabhi vapis nhi aa skti voh mr chuki hai

Manik : bs mukti
Main bol rha hn na nandini jinda hai

Cabir : agr manik tujhe yhi lgta toh thik hai

Manik thinks abhi tumhai meri bato pr believe nhi ho rha but u will see yr self than u will come to know

Scene change

Niti is sleeping n she is dreaming that manik n her romance but can't able to see the face n she gets up n drinks water n says to her why every night this type of dreams comes n she again ly down on bed n sleep

Next mrng

Payal is waking up. niti but niti gets up n hug her n say gud mrng mom

Payal : gud mrng

Niti : 10 bje gye
Bhai aur dad office chle gye

Payal : haan

Niti : mom mujhe aaj se office join krna hai na
Aur phle din hi late

Payal : beta kuch nhi hota

Niti gets up n take out the cloth n immediately goes to wash room by saying mom i m getting ready plz mera break fast yhi le ao

Payal : okay

Scene change

Manik is in office n akash call comes

Akash : manik kya tum mere abhi office aa skte ho
Kuch discuss krna hai

Manik : yeah why not

Akash : k

Manik thinks yeh acha muka hai
Ho skta me be i come to know about nandini from his office

Manik immediately comes out n start the car n reaches his office n enter his cabin
Akash says come na manik sit n they start discussing n niti also come into his cabin

Niti (opening door ) : bhai
Suprise ...

Manik turns around n see her n she also see him n both look into each other eyes for some movement

Niti : may i disturbed ?

Akash : no no
Niti tum office main

Niti : voh bhai mujhe apko aur dad ko batna tha ki main aaj se office join kr rhi hn
But aaj bhut late nind khuli m

Akash : wao niti it's great decision
Ao betho
Pta hai manik niti hamesha se na km krna bilkul pasnd nhi but aaj pta nhi ise kya hua

Niti sits beside manik

Niti : bhai asi bt nhi h

Manik is not saying n he is lost in seeing her doll
Akash : Chalo acha hai tum aa gye ab tum dono iss project ko smbhalo
Mere thodha burden toh km ho

Servant came with water n give water n both manik n nandini move her hand to take it n put hand on each other than both drop the glass n it's broke

Servant : i m sorry

Akash : ab jao aur kisko clean krne ke liye bolo

Servant :k

Akask : i m so sorry manik

Manik : why u r saying sorry voh glass toh mujhe drop ho gya tha

Niti : nhi mujhe drop ho gya tha i m sorry

Akash : okay okay f9
K i m just coming jb tk u both discuss

Akash go out n both remain silence for one min.

Niti get up n say i m sorry i have to go n she put hand on broken glass n shouts aa...

Manik also get up n hold her hand n say nandini tum kabhi apni care nhi krti

N remove the glass piece from her hand n niti feels pains n looking at manik seeing how manik caring for her

Manik : first aid box kha hai

Niti tell the place n manik make her sit on chair n he bend down n roll pati on her hand n nandini looking into his eyes

Niti : manik..

N manik realise that niti don't know that she is nandini so he leave her hand n that time adi enters in cabin

N he comes to nandini n hold her hand say yeh sb kaise hua niti

Niti leaves away her hand from adi hand n say : bs choti se chot hai thik ho jaegi n again n again looking toward manik

Manik goes out from the room by saying to niti that take care of yr hand

Adi : who is he

Niti : bhai has signed one project so they r partner on in it

Adi : okay

Adi hug her n say oh baby i miss u so much

Niti thinks why feeling uncomfortable in adi arm n when manik hold my hand i feel like somebody touch my heart i didn't feel uncomfortable but when adi hold my hand in front him than i feel weird
Why n
Why manik call me nandini n cares for me
I m so confused

Manik comes out from office n sits in car n thinks nandini i know tum main kuch yd aa rha tabhi u didn't react on holding yr hand n when he holds u
U immediatly leaves away his hand
I have to do something

Manik call akash

Akash : tu office chele gye

Manik :haan kuch urgent km yd aa gya tha
I have thrown one party
Humhre patner bne pr toh main u come today at evening with yr whole family

Akash : yeah why not
Vaise manik ek bt bolu
Maine suna tha indai bhut mean log hote but u prove my thinking u r such a nice person

Manik : thank u but u too

Manik cuts the call n thinks nandini tum jb apne ghr aungi than u will remember

Evening

Fab 5 n navya r already at manik house

Mukti : tu aaj humhai kise milvane vla hai

Manik : mukti wait na voh ate hi honge dekho voh aa gye

Only akash comes to party

Akash comes to manik

Manik : hi where is family

Akash : they r coming

Niti reaches to manik house n she come out of car n stops n start remembering something

Payal : kya hua beta chlo

Niti : yeah mom

N nandini start entering in the n thinking why i m feeling that i m not coming 1st at this place
Main phle bhi yha aa chuki hn

Scene change

Manik : meet my friend mukti cabir alai druv n navya

Akash : hi

They all say hi to akash n that time nandini reaches to entrance door n manik sees her n go toward them n fab 5 n navya r shoched to see her

Niti lost in thought n manik came n welcome them n niti saw him n comes in the house

N than niti stand at the corner n looking at everything of house try to remember something

N manik n fab5 standing at another corner

Cabir : how can this be possible

Manik : i m sure yeh nandini hi hai

Mukti : manik lekin nandini toh
Manik : yeah i know mukti wht u trying to say but i m sure iske piche koe bhut bada reason hai just see how she is looking at whole house she is trying to remember

Navya : humhai toh apni akho pr ykin hi nhi ho rha

Cabir : iska mtlb manik nandini jinda hai

Manik : i just come

Niti standing with akash

Manik comes to her n give her hand to niti n say to niti may dance with the beautiful girl
Niti don't understanding wht to say akask say to her to go n niti put hand manik hand n manik make her come to dance floor

N they both r dancing n niti feeling uncomfortable n sometime looks down n sometime in manik eyes n manik only looking in her eyes
After sometime while dancing manik says

Manik : nandini..
Oh sorry i mean niti
Main tumhai kise milvna chta hn

Niti gives blank reaction

Manik : just come with me

Manik comes to his room n niti also comes to that room n manik says to close yr eyes

Manik : plz i will take yr little bit time

Niti close her eyes n manik makes her stand in front in front of mirror

Manik : main tumhai apni wife se milvna chta hn
Now u can open yr eyes

Niti slowly open her eyes n get shocked to see herself in the mirror n look towards manik shockingly

Manik : yes u r my wife

Niti : wht r u saying
Main toh tumhai janti bhi nhi hn

Manik shows nandini pic to niti n say see this

Manik : u know nandini main tumhara kbse itzaar kr rha hn
Nandini mujhe nhi pta tumhre sth kya hua hai

Niti : main tumhri wife nhi ho skti
I m going

Niti start to go down but manik hold her hand n come at her back n hold her waist so tightly n niti also lost in him

Manik : when i come close to u
Tumhai kuch yd nhi ata

He touches his face with her face n than kiss on his forehead.. n blews air at her shoulder Niti close her eyes n lost in him N remember when she fall in manik arm n when she hold manik hand n when manik hold her hand

Manik : plz nandini try to remember
Plz..(manik said like that in next movement he will ne start crying )

N than niti thinks about her family n pull manik away n say this can't be possible
N ran down n goes outside the house

So kya.. niti aka nandini ko sb yd aaega.. kya.. manik haar.. mn lega.. So here is next update n hope u all like it.. n plz.. guyz.. if like it than plz.. do comment n hope u like this track
Keep smiling
Love Mehak

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm
Looking forward tonwhat manik will do
Hopefully she remembers soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's amazing ... awesome ... fabulous
I love this track

Mujhay pta hai Nandini ko kabhi to yaad ae ga ... aur Manik hear manay walon mai se nahi hai

Thanks for the track
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc update. .. manik har nai manega ...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update

Looking forward for more

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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