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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing parts
superb work
love manan scenes
awsm
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Originally posted by: analji

Wow...awesome

Plz continue😊


Thanx... dear..
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Originally posted by: bhagupur

Dear awesome and very romantic update.

The song. .sangemarmar ke minare. .
is my favorite. .I just loved it.
The other songs are also very very beautiful.
The dress was very hot and beautiful.
Their romantic moments were awesome.
You penned amazingly beautiful.
Both are complete and very happy now.
Waiting for more. ..
Thanks for sharing this awesome awesome chapter.
Thanks for pm.😛😛.
Stay blessed dear.



Love. .
Jyoti.




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Read all parts in one go!
Beautifully penned!!😃
Awesome!!
Continue soon..
Take care😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyyoo dearrr,..thnx fr d pm...just got to knw abt ur ff today...😊😳
Will try to read it soon nd comment as soon as possible
Thankyouu😊
Always keep writing😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shanuqureshi

Hey dear...

Awesome update seriously mind blowing...
When nandini got fever and manik arrange 4 doc... so cute...
Manan romance was awesome... beautiful...😳
Songs are perfect...
Last part was amazing dear... their cute moments...
Beautiful dear...
Superbly describe this part...
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon... um waiting..
Keep smiling..
Keep it up..
stay bless
Lots of love.


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Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">awesome...
beautifully penned...
thank you for the wonderful writing...
thanx for PM</font>😊


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Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Both the part was so beautiful
manan romance is so passionate 😳😳
Also song is perfectly suet that scene
You writing very well dear
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for the twist in next part
Take care dear😊



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Originally posted by: sanikagokhale

Read all parts in one go!

Beautifully penned!!😃
Awesome!!
Continue soon..
Take care😃


Thanx.. dear
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Tum Hi Ho

Part : 54

Manik and nandini standing in parking

Man : sir gadhi glt kadhi kr di hai yha se gadhiyan ati jati hai

Manik : nandini tum yhi ruko
Main gadhi park krke ata hn

Nandini : okay ..

Manik sits in car n go for parking the car

Nandini standing alone in parking area one man came name karan he is drunk n he push nandini n go forward

Nandini : ruko
Yeh kya batameezi

Karan : oh apko lgi sorry
(Touching her hand )

Nandini (throwing away his hand ) : how dare u touch me

Karan again try to touch her face but manik hold his hand n stand in front of nandini

Manik : teri himmat kaise hue to touch my wife (holding his colar )

Karan : koe itni kubsurat ladhki ko touch karne ka moka kaise chodh skta hai

Manik become angry n punch karan n karan fall down

Nandini : manik..

Manik : age se kisi bhi ladhki ko touch krne se phle yeh yaad rkhna

Crowd gathered there n karan's wife also aisha came there

Manik again hold from collar n agin try to punch him
But Aisha come in b/w

Aisha : plz ushai kuch mt kaho
Unhone pi rkhi hai

Manik leave him by seeing his wife begging for him

Aisha go to nandini n say sorry to her n crowd is discussing about karan cheap work n karan become angry n aisha is embarrassed

Nandini go with manik in their room

Manik : agr uski wife na ae hoti main ushai chodhta nhi (angrily)

Nandini : manik leave na
Aise insaan ke bare main discusss kyo kr rhai hai

Manik : i can't believe ushne tumhai chune ki himmat kari

Nandini hold manik from back n kiss on his chicks

Nandini : manik...
Mujhe kisse koe farak nhi padhta becoz i know u r always with me

Manik turns n kiss on nandini forehead n say i love n nandini hug him n say i love u more than u

Nandini break the hug

Nandini take out the nite dress for her

Nandini : main change krke ati hn k
u also change it (giving him shorts)

Manik take the short n sit on couch n nandini go to washroom

Nandini comes out from washroom n see manik sleep on couch without changing his cloth n leg on floor
Nandini thinks manik tum bhi na kabhi apne health ki chinta nhi krte dekho kitne thak hue thai bina change kare hi so gye

Nandini remove his shoes n make him ly on couch properly n cover him with blanket n bend down n kiss on his forehead n she ly on bed looking towards manik n smiling n sleep after sometime


Next mrng

Nandini get up n see manik not get up he is sleeping n she go to wash room n take a shower n come out n manik tb uth chuka tha

Manik : gud mrng nandini

Nandini : gud mrng
Manik..
Come on fast get ready humhai we have to go for shopping

Manik : okay..
Okay..
I m going

After sometime they reaches to market of goa n start the shopping( nandini buying bangle for n she wear it n make the pose n manik take snap of her )

Bg song

Ek aawara nadi
Chalke woh khul ke sansanaati sanan sanan

Aur woh hai jheel sa
Khaamoshiyon ki ek tarang liye tarang

Rishta yeh kaisa jalti ret paaon ka
Rishta yeh kaisa chand din dhoop chaaon ka
Bolo wooo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhare
wooo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhare

(They start putting diffrent types of cap on their head n makes funny faces n manik clicks selfies of them )

Mutthiyon mein
Baadalon ko le ke woh nichod de
Woh raat ki
Chuppi mein shor natkhat chod de
Mutthiyon mein
Baadalon ko le ke woh nichod de
Woh raat ki
Chuppi mein shor natkhat chod de

(They entered in mall n manik selects dress for nandini n nandini select shirts for manik n both go in changing room n try dresses )

Bebaak hai, bindaas hai
Use zindagi ki pyaas hai

Paas hai, par dooriyaan
Makhmali majbooriyaan hain

Woo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhaare
Woo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhaare
Woo Woo~!~!~

(Garden of mall Gardner is giving water to plants n nandini come n take pipe on from him n start throwing water on manik n manik stopping her n manik snatch pipe from nandini n now manik start throwing water on nandini and nandini again snatch pipe from manik than manik hold nandini in arm above n now water is coming on both of them becoz pipe is with nandini hand n nandini throw the pipe n hold manik face)

Maan ke Kamron mein
Woh Khole Khuboon ki Shishiyan
Woh Sahilon Pe Dounndhta Hai
Ishq Wali Sipiyan
Pyaar hai Romance hai
Bas yehi sa < > hai
Do Dilon ke Darmiyan
Khawashiyon ki Kastiyan hai

Woo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhaare
Woo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhaare

(!Manik holding nandini reaches upto car n put nandini in car n also sit in car they both r sitting back sit n driver is driving the car both sleep in eachother arm in car so cutely)

Ek aawara nadi
Chalke woh khul ke sansanaati sanan sanan

Aur woh hai jheel sa
Khaamoshiyon ki ek tarang liye tarang

Rishta yeh kaisa jalti ret paaon ka
Rishta yeh kaisa chand din dhoop chaaon ka
Bolo wooo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhare
wooo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhare
wooo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhare
wooo adhoore tum...adhoore hum...bin tumhare

Evening time
They reaches home n they came out from the car n going toward their room holding eachother arm n karan is seeing them n say badhe kush ho na ab dekho main kya karta hn

They reaches in the room

Nandini : manik i m so tired i m sleeping

Manik : k baba so jana maine khana order kiya kha kr sona

Nandini : okay..

After 15 min.

Nandini : manik khana kyo nhi aya ab tk

Manik : main check kr ke ata hn

Nandini : okay come fast

Manik goes n nandini sitting on couch


Part : 55

Manik came out from room n he listsen the voice of girl coming from side room n he go inside to help her but the girl drag him in the corner the girl is aisha n his husband came with public n people ask from girl what happen so the girl start crying n point finger toward manik n say he came in my room n start tearing my cloth she shows her cloth n she again says" he trys to rape me "manik get shock to hear this

Manik : yeh tum kya bol rhi
Maine aisa kuch nhi kiya..

Scene changes

Nandini listsen sound coming outside nadini thinks "yeh awaj kha se aa rhi hai "n than nandini come out from the room

Scene changes

Karan come n hold manik collar n say" dikha di na tune apni akuat " n than manik hold his collar n say" akaut kisne dikhae sbko sb pta hai "

Nandini come n start shout "manik.." so manik leave karan n karan leave manik n stand back of manik

Nandini : tum itna kaise gir skte ho
I never thinks in my dream also ki koe itna ganda ho skta
Hai

Manik : nandini...

Nandini start coming towards manik n go forward crossing manik where karan standing give tight slap to him

Nandini : tumne issa krne ki socha bhi kaise
I know manik never do this cheap thing in his life

Nandini go toward manik n hold his face n say "manik main tumhai kuch nhi hone dongi" (having tear in eyes)

Manik holding her face n wipe her tear n say " i know "

Nandini move forward aisha

Nandini : tum ladhki ho kr aisa kaise kr skti
Plz ab sach bola
Bola

Aisha : maine jo bola vohe sach hai

Nandini (shouts) : Shame on u...

Police came

Karan : sir isse le kr jao

Police start arresting manik n manik giving angry looks to karan n nandini start crying
N start stopping police

Nandini : manik ko kha le ja rhai
Manik ne kuch nhi kiya
Manik bolo na (holding manik hand )

Manik : nandini.. relax.. kuch nhi hoga

Police start going taking manik with them n nandini also going after them n saying manik ne kuch nhi kiya (crying ) n police put manik in jeep n manik hold nandini hand

Manik : nandini... plz don't cry jb maine kuch kiya hi nhi.. toh koe humhra kuch nhi bigadh skta..

Car start moving n manik leaves nandini hand n nandini start running after the car n shouting" manik.. manik... "n than she fall down on floor

Manik : nandini ...
Gadhi ruko
Nandini ...

Nandini seeing manik n her eyes get close in sec. N said last word "manik.."

Manik reaches to police station

Manik : plz mujhe nandini se ek bari milne do
Uski health bhi krb hai n i want to talk to my lawyer

Hawaldar put manik in jail

Manik hold hawaldar collar n say

Manik : maine kha na i want to meet nandini

Hawaldar throw manik in jail n say "ab shadh iss jail main "

Manik start taking round of jail n remebering that nandini fall down he is worring about nandini

8pm time

On the other hand nandini open her eyes lying on hospital bed n she get n shouts"manik.."
N call cabir

Cabir : hello nandini

Nandini : cabir...(crying)

Cabir : nandini kya hua tum ro kyo rhi ho
Manik thik toh hai na

Nandini : manik ko n start crying

Cabir : manik ko kya
Nandini...

Nandini tell everything to cabir
Cabir : nandini u don't worry
Hum abhi aa rha k
U take care

Nandini (crying ) : cabir.. plz.. save manik..

Cabir : nandini plz tum ro mt hum aa rhai hai na sb thik ho jaega

Nandini reaches to police station n media is standing outside the police station

Reporter : nandini ji aap kya kahna chahengi in sbke bd

Nandini : mujhe kuch kahne ki jarurt kyoki i know that manik ne kuch glt nhi kiya aur god support people who r right
I will prove u all that manik ne kuch nhi kiya

N nandini go inside the jail

Reporter : aap abne dekha nandini mahlotra ko apne pati ke upr pura bharosha hai
Ab sachae ka result ane ke bd hi pta chlega tb bne rhie aaj kl news ke sth

Nandini : i want to meet manik

P. I. : lawyer ke sth ae

Nandini : lawyer ata hi hoga aap mujhe manik se milna hai

Lawyer come

P.I. : aap mil skti hai manik se but Bail toh aaj nhi mil skti

Nandini : main manik ko ek sec. Bhi jail main nhi dekh skti
Aur aap bol rhai bail nhi mil skti

Lawyer : mam aap ja kr manik se mileye main yha dekhta hn

Nandini go with hawaldar

Manik is lying on table with covering his eyes n he is sweating very badly n mosquito bitting him n after seeing his condition tear come out from nandini eyes

Bg song lyrics

(Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri)

but she wipes it n nandini say manik n smiles n manik get up hawaldar open the door the gate n nandini go inside

Manik (holding his hand ) : nandini tum thik toh ho na

Nandini leave manik hand n hug him very tightly n having tear in eyes n manik also hold him

Bg song lyrics

(Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri
Jaan meri.. jaan meri.. jaan meri..)

Nandini : manik...
Yeh sb kya hogya

Manik break the hug n hold nandini face n say nandini main bilkul thik hn k aur mujhe pta mujhe tum jada dr yha nhi rhaine dogi haina

Nandini nods yes n manik removes nandini tear n kiss on
Her forhead n nandini kiss on her face again n again n hug him again n say manik i can't see u like this

Bg song lyrics

(Mere dil ne chun laiya ne, tere dil diyan rahaan
Mere dil ne chun laiya ne, tere dil diyan rahaan

Tu jo mere naal turehn ta, turpe meriyaan saahan
Jeena mera haye, hund hai tera, ki main karaan
Tu kar eitbaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri
Jaan meri.. jaan meri.. jaan meri...)

Hawaldar came n say meeting time is over
Manik break the hug

Manik : nandini ek din ki toh bt hai
Now smile mere liye

Nandini smiles n manik too n nandini coming out from jail n but she again ran toward manik to him n she sees that manik trys to drink water from matka but the water is finish n manik throw the glass n removing his sweat from head
N than seeing his condition nandini ran outside covering her mouth n controlling her emotion n sit in car n crys n again again remembering manik condition

Bg song lyrics

( Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee

Ve changa nahion keeta veebar,
Ve changa nahion keeta veebar, dil mera tod k
Ve bada pachtaiyaan akhaan,
Ve bada pachtaiyaan akhaan,
Naal tere jorr k..)

Nandini reaches to her room n in dark sit in corner of room without fan or a/c becoz manik is leaving without it n covering her face n crying remembring manik
Bg song

( Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri)

She spread the bed sheet on floor n sleep on floor n on the other hand manik remembering nandini n can't able to sleep

Bg song lyrics

( Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee
Tu ki jaane pyaar mera, main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri
Jaan meri.. jaan meri.. jaan meri...)

After sometime manik fall down from table becoz manik is can't able to fitted on it on the other side nandini suddenly get up n shouts manik...
N go toward the window n start seeing the moon n touch her face with wall having tear in her eyes
Bg song lyrics
( Main tenu samjhawan ki, na tere bina lagda jee

Ve changa nahion keeta veebar,
Ve changa nahion keeta veebar, dil mera tod k
Ve bada pachtaiyaan akhaan,
Ve bada pachtaiyaan akhaan,
Naal tere jorr k..)

She thinks manik thik toh hoga na vha on the other hand manik sleep on floor n nandini also sleep .

So guyz.. here is next update... hope u all like it n next part will be a emotional update again... 😭 n guyz.. plz.. do comments n hit like botton
keep smiling
Love Mehak


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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago

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