MANAN- SS ONE MISTAKE - LINK TO THREAD 2 ON PG1 & 147 - Page 85

Originally posted by: Lizbeth

It was nice.. U penned evry emotions so beautifully.. Evntgh people get bored of ds kinda track, i mn ds kinda track z alwys slow, v feel lyk dragging n ol . But but i knw dat ds track demand it. Evry emotions need to b xplaind slowly steadily ... Nd u r vry gud at it.. Doing well lso.. Thnks fr d pm

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Thanks for pm..dear.

Very very beautiful and very emotional.

I just loved it. ..the way you described both sides. ..

inner turmoil was amazing. .

First time I feel maniks helpless. ..how he tried hard. .

But what he did was also a crime .

she was so happy with her family but he gives her

a shock of her life. ..

how she will forget easy. ..this is very hard to trust someone again.

You penned amazingly ...all the emotions.

Dear you are a wonderful writer...👏👏.

Please continued like this.

Thanks for sharing this awesome update.

Stay blessed dear.

Love. .

Jyoti.

Originally posted by: prasanna77

superb update...u returned with a bang...waited so long for ur update...but u made our wait worthy...love u loads..👏

the epiosde was amazing...u described their feelings so perfect that i have lost in ur story...omg its awesome...

manik and nandini they both can't see each other in pain...it really shows how much they love each other

they were craving for each other's warmth..

they fed each other forgetting everthing...they just wanted to heel their pain for a moment...

u penned down their feelings very nicely...

and the quote made by you in the middle...its really true..i loved it...it proved that u were a good writer😊

waiting for next update...plz update soon😳

thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: Simikumari

The update waswas nice... Waiting for a long long one... Plzzz update sooon... And thanks for pm😊

Originally posted by: A12609z

Awesome...
But plzzz want more...esse kese Nandini Manik ko apna sakti hai plzzz want more twist n turns...avi v essa lgta hai Manik Nandini k pass wapas iss liye aya bcoz 1st soha n usko hurt kiya n 2nd for his child...plzzz...i want Nandini k Miscarige hooo jaye fir n ek new Ladki k entry ho Manik k life m fir Manik k trueness kitna true hai pata lagega plzzz plzzz fir Manan justified hoga clear hoga plzzz plzzz
Plzzz Update fast fast

Originally posted by: tas456

Yippeee...you are back

The update was awesome

Hope she can forgive him soon

Tqvm for the pm dear

Will be waiting eagerly for your next update

Take care and stay blessed

Originally posted by: lovelyyuvi10

awesome update...

loved it...

please continue soon...

keep writing nd smiling... :)