MANAN- SS ONE MISTAKE - LINK TO THREAD 2 ON PG1 & 147

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nubula

@nubula

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

finally you updated and it was so emotional.

feeling very bad for manik bt it's ok.usne Jo kiya nandu ki

sath uska punishment to milna chahiye.

waiting for next update.

update soon.

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Emotional update

Feeling really bad for manik

They both are broken and hurt

Hope everything gets fine between manan

Loved the update

Update the next part soon

Edited by mairaallauddin - 10 years ago

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epicangel

@epicangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#853

Finally..awaited update
I loved their cute scene
Hope exist..
Thanks for pm

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#854

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
.
Thanks for pm too. ..

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#855

Nice chapter

Loved the cute care they have for each other

Silently feeding each other food!

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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millie

@millie17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#856

Nice..
But promo wala part kaha hai...??
Hope they gt bck togthr soon..

Continue soon...
N thnx fr d pm...

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neetimehta

@neetimehta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#857

Omg .such an emotional update

m so touched

thanx for pm

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anu

@anupandey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#858

emotional kr diya tune to apoo

its dmn amzing really

nd ur note in the middle

those lines just stole my heart

srsly hats off

awesome wrk

thnk u for pm

loveu

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#859

Awesome update dea...

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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asmi.6

@asmi.6

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#860

It is becoming even more interesting after every update ! The way youdescribed their emotions is really really commendable ! I totally fell for your choice of words !

That weak moment between these two absolutely broken souls was so beautiful ! And I know, these little week moments will only bring them closer !

And personyy i don't want you to re unite then just like that. Take time. Give more if these sweet moments and slowly slowly make her realise that finally she can trust him again !

I really want know how the rest unfolds !

Thanks for the lovely update !

Would wait for the next :D