MANAN- SS ONE MISTAKE - LINK TO THREAD 2 ON PG1 & 147 - Page 83

Originally posted by: nawJAHAN

amazing update... just loved it...


keep writing

Originally posted by: Yathignna

Nice and awesome
Their sweet moment is cute
I hope she forgives him early
Cont. Soon

Originally posted by: payal94

Nice update

Emotional too

Originally posted by: Linda45

Amazing update.

Emotional one.

Both were vulnerable.

Both trying to calm the storm inside.

Both couldn't see each other in that way.

Their cute little time away from these thoughts was amazing.

Until she's there in the same house she's going to be shattered again & again.

It's not easy to forgive someone & trust them.

They need a break.

From this place, these people, that house.

Everything which reminds of past.

Bring them together please.

Thanks for update.

Continue soon. :)

Nice update

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting!

It was nice.. U penned evry emotions so beautifully.. Evntgh people get bored of ds kinda track, i mn ds kinda track z alwys slow, v feel lyk dragging n ol . But but i knw dat ds track demand it. Evry emotions need to b xplaind slowly steadily ... Nd u r vry gud at it.. Doing well lso.. Thnks fr d pm

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

You returned and you returned with a BANG!👏
Apps, I missed you. How are you now?😳
Okay, so this chapter made me feel more heartbroken than before.
It feels like I'm sitting there staring, watching them tear each other apart but I can't do anything💔
I loved it, please come soon and continue