III - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Ch46 - PG137/Thread4 Link - PG153]

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Sehgalradhika

@Sehgalradhika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#711

Okay

Thi is my second comment on your ff

Just wannna say that your ff force me to comment

Your writing skills are perfect

I wish i could Pinch of it

And did i ever mentioned that arav-Manan scenes are the best

Its pure bliss and the dates written by you are so perfect

Especially the locations im mean they are so pretty

And worth reading

Keep writing

Update soon

Loads of love

Radhika

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Claire_D

@Claire_D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#712

I'm sorry for the late comment! The 2nd part is even more amazing! Manik asking about the baby, whether his hands & feet are developed. His Promise to always keep her near him & let no harm come near her! He will be the Perfect Father. And yes he can't love anyone more than Nandini, she is his life! Mukti & Alya pampering her & Nandini getting emotional, they've truly accepted her! Aarav getting impatient about the baby, but Manik just handled him perfectly! Manik didn't want to leave Nandini, but the surprise he got when he returned! She organised the best date ever! He fulfilling his desires but also heedful of her conditions! Awesome work! Now I can't wait to read the next part as it keeps getting better!

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

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Posted: 9 years ago

#713

Ty for d pm...and am really sorry for not liking n commenting...am out of town for vacations...and am not able to read also...plz dnt stop to pm me...

N abt d updates...dey were super awesome...

loved manan moments to d core...

awww I loved d hospital scene...

I loved d part wer Mukti n aliya were being so concerned for nandu...I loved fab5 n nandu moments...

awww I loved innocent aarav...N partner n champ parts were so cute...

I loved d dream date n nandu's surprise...

am sry am not able to comment long...

plz continue soon...

'll b waiting for d update...

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humerashaikh18

@humerashaikh18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#714

It was awsm dear as always...loved the manan bond...n mukti n alya they are amazing...loved it to the core...

Stay blessed!!

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frutiiee

@frutiiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#715

Awsum update.. Thanks for giving such amazing updates. Really loved it... :-) :-)

U r really brilliant... Keep smiling👏😉

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dhrits_24

@dhrits_24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#716

Apologies for not commenting regularly...as i was stuck wid my xmz n stuff...n u write beautiful...From now I wont b late pakka😊

I guess of all the phases u hv described wid MaNan this b the best...

a transformation in their life...b the most beautiful phase...

Cabir - I m loving him

n Mukti Alya too

MaNan they r love

their bond wid Mr. Malhotra is beyond beauty

the way Manik cares for Nandini, taking care of her like she herself is a baby...

his care, concern, love, protection...

n what touched me the most was when u portrayed them being tensed abt der being ne complications n Manik n Nandini caring about Nandini's life prior to baby's...though the thought itself wud kill the person to the core...but d way u portrayed it...u got my eyes moist...

Manik n his upcoming baby's bond is so beautiful...

n their feelings dat u hv shown ... wht they r feeling, going through this phase...I m speechless👏

their dates n romance is always beautiful...

Aarav is sooo cute...n his bond wid MaNan is bliss...

U truly write beautifully

PLzzz cont soon...tc😉

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khadupam

@khadupam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#717

Awesome wonderful bailout chapter
U r just awesome writer
Do you refer to some books or something because the words u use is very unquie n different as it is not used in the normal daily speaking English
It's marvellous fabtabulous chapter
I loved the part where MANIK was explaining to Arav Tht airport part hahahahahaa
N I think u should bring some masala to ur story till Nandu becomes 6 months pregnant
Or u should bring Abhi back n start mukti love story
Any continue soon