III - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Ch46 - PG137/Thread4 Link - PG153]

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

ffirst of all the date was super romantic

manik s reaction after eating spicy was awesome

both in doc s cabin funny

malhothra men always one step ahead

superb ep

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Wow amazing superb update dea. ...

Manan n mr malhotra bond ws lovely

Beautifully written

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

Take care

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vaishnavi

@vaishnavigarla

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

awesome update
manan romance is treat to read
the spicy food scene is too cute
so already mr malhotra knows that
nandu is pregnant
manan shopping for kid
manik got some urgent work
so he had to leave n she is missing him
nandu mood swings
i don't know that much sorry for not giving proper suggestions
you r an awesome writer dear
so don't bother really the update was great
cont soon

Edited by vaishnavigarla - 10 years ago

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asmi.6

@asmi.6

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Okay so first of all, may I pleeeaaaseee yell at you and scold you for thinking that you've written crap in this update ? Like how :O how can you even think that ? The update was very very beautiful !

You always rise and shine with your extraordinary expression of thoughts ! Trust me ! And please don't take so much stress, keep calm and I'm sure you'll find a good inspiration soon that'll help you get over this writer's block thing ! Somewhere I guess the absence in MaNan on screen is causing this to you ! :/

But anyway, I trust you and you talent and I'm sure, stepping over every difficulty you would be back to you own comfortable pace !

I really really apologise to you for the fact that i really can't think of anything to advice you so that you could include that in your story!

Mainly because u just don't have it in me, and the other reason is that I really don't have a slightest of idea what a pregnant woman goes through ! So really sorry for not being able to help !

Thankyou so much for the update inspire of all that is going in inside your head ! And of course Thankyou for the pm!

P.s. delete some messages from your inbox. I'm unable to reply to you as your inbox I full. :/ :P

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Aap bahut bahut bahut ztada pyaara likhte ho..
Mrre har baar words mujha ditch kar dete he jab bhi me aapke tareef ke liya nikalne ki koshish karte hu...or kehte he ki kaha se shuru karogi or kaise khatam kar paoge 😆

U have a biggest magic in the world that is to keep the whole world on just one paper...

Dil chu lete ho aap har baar apne khayalo se..
Loved it.
LOVE..MINI

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Pragya

@pragyas1192

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

ohhh goshhh ds s ur writer block update...dn i must say ur brain must b functioning more dn its actual rate...

awesome superb update dear👏...n nt dt short...

reali loved d date its jz like any gals dream date...

d pampering caring evrythn s jz beyond words...

d hospi scene ws fun reading...

n senior Malhotra is so awesome...loved der convo...

eagrli n impatiently waiting for ur nxt update...

u cn write somethn of Nandu's mood swing n ol...dts d fun part to c in pregnant women...

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nikki.smiley95

@nikki.smiley95

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

that was a complete aawww update😳😉

this couple everytime amazes me soo much yyrrr...they are too cutee😊😛

each and every part of the chapter was ssooo blissfull..aahhh...loved it to the core yrr..😳

and the length of the chapter was also apt dear...it was no less😊

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nandu00sr

@nandu00sr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Hey nice one dear.. I read the note and wanna tell u that whatever u r writing is good.. In the last part manik asked chachi to stay with them.. And include all the characters too.. And bring back mr.malhtra.. This time for a long stay.. And want some good quality family moments... Manik taking care of nandini.. As usual.. And this part was really good.. Manik controlling his feelings for Nandini and their baby.. Loved the way he explained it to her.. Nice part.. Thanks for pm.. Update the next asap.. Take care dear..