III - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Ch46 - PG137/Thread4 Link - PG153] - Page 54

Beautiful update... soo nyc whole date n manan convo aww so sweet...n their convo with super cool dad..awsumm loved it😛👏

Nice update

Nice storty i love it

Amazing ...
Beautiful date ...
manan with dr raima was very cute ...
Manan with mr molhotra cnversation ... i always loved that ...
Waiting fr next part ... cntinue soon...

awesome update dear...?????

Hey juhi
U y u said u have wrote bad
As even in ur block u wrote good
And abt suggestion thing
I think u should change in their lyf due to this phase
And how they deal with it together
Also if u don't want to show in detail their this phase u can take a leap
But in my opinion don't take a leap
Show their lyf in this new phase
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Hey...!!!cute update... They are like babies... Loved it..:)
But one thing I wanna add... As I'm a doctor I think u should not show Nandin like this... I mean she is a doc...completed her mbbs so she must be knowing these details of getting intimate n all...
N about the suggestion thing... I think u can add that how Nandini explains Manik about every minute detail about the growth of baby..!!!
Like at what weeks he/she would dev hands feet nails eyes nose ears..digestive system Cvs... Etc etc..

When a baby starts breathing , hearing seeing..starts eating ..passing meconium, movements..N his expressions would be million dollar I'm sure..

U can add that how they are preparing for their baby's room.. N having cute cute posters.. Something like that..!!
Or u can add that Manik writes something for his upcoming princess like some Chotu Chotu things for her... May be a melody... Or may b pictures of Nandini every week... N see the changes in her...!!

I hope I hv not offended u... Coz since very long I wanted to tell u that being a doc she must know all these things... N u have shown Her a cardiologist which actually takes around 12 years... So of course she should know the basic detail of a gynac...

N sorry if u felt bad... U can ignore it...

But I just love ur story... Keep writing the way u love...:)
Will be waiting for next as always...

Love... Nandini..:)

Why do you think that u have got failed in writing an awesome part of yr story...plz don't think like that..it was awesome infact whatever you write everytime it just remains awesome,flowless n amazing...now i m waiting for next part n thanks for pm n i don't think that i m capable for giving u any advice or suggestions in writing coz writing is not my cup of tea 😉 n i have faith in yr writting skills

N ha I'm again saying sorry if u felt bad... It's just my state of mind... N this story is ur baby so have to nurture it the way u want.. Ok n I love whatever u write...!!!
U r simply amazing... N this update is not at all like a block at all... It's bful...

I just love to read your story... So just do your magic the way u want...!!! Suggestions are here... N u just add ur magic masala...

Bye bahut jayada bak bak kar li mene aj...

So bye tkcr..:))

Ok so it was reallyy goodd...👏👏