MANAN FF- IT HURTS ALOT...(chp12A-pg147 / link to thread 2-pg 152) - Page 97

Originally posted by: _Myrah_

Thnkew so much shuvaangi for ur lovely comments.. M glad u liked it...

Haa ab manan patch up.. Ab itnaa time hogaya i mean 11th chp tak pohoch gayi toh patch up toh bantaa hain naa.. Ab main inhe kitnaa alag karu.. Mujhse nahi hogaa..so ab patch up on the way..

U too take care..

Originally posted by: jiamalik12

Alley meri doll itnaa gussa nahi karte... Avi toh mainey kuch kaha vi nahi aur itnaa gussa kuch kaha hotaa toh aap toh humse katti hi hojaatey...

Originally posted by: crazydreamer

WOW
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fantabulous
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amazingly
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awesome it was...
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I read all the parts n it makes me cry a lot
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How Nandu struggled and how much pain is inside her .
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Manik misunderstood her... that was sooo bad he hv to trust his love for once before blamming her...
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I had cried a lot with the each emotional chapter of this story...
really i like it... n like this part tooo
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I hope MaNan will be back soon as u say...
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so waiting eagerly for nxt updates...
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I hope u will update ASAP...
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ty for pm
tc stay blessed 😊

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update loved it rohan has went through so much he has so much pain manik will definitely make her nandu fine he will get his shining star back. Manan romance was amazing.

Originally posted by: Didiaish

Hey awesome update

It's actually necessary to know rohan everything
Now he will also help manik

N he also suffered so much

N sorry for late reading N commenting
Busy with family

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ZaraKhann

Woah!!

Mindblowing FF!!

I am new reader!!

Read all the parts in a go!!

Aur woh bhi kahan pata hai??

Bhai ke sangeet main!!

Log mujhe pagal samaghrey they!!

I was sitting in my room and was continously crying with Manan!!

Sab logo ne itna mazakh banaya mera!!

Upar se bhai sab ku kehte phir rahe they ki mera breakup hogay!!*_*

Boht bura hai mera bhai!!

Mai bhi kya shuru hogai aapni ramkatha lekar!!

Ur FF is beautifully written!!

I have hopelessy fallen in love with it!!

From the prolouge itself it was soi interesting ki i forgot my the world even my brothers sangget!!

Lekin manan ke liye sab jayaz hai!!

Painfull separation!!

Trust issues!!

Cold and sarcastic behaviour!!

Guilt feeling!!

Manan!!

This FF has all the things i love!!

The way u write👏

When nandu behaves coldly i got half of it!!

But the progress of the story was even amazing!!

Each time they ignored eachother i myself felt guilty!!

Pata nahi shayad pagal hun mein!!

When manbir knew tge truth that feeling was like oh shit!! Why did this happen??

I really felt my bad on nandu!!

Shes really changed!!

The way fab5 apologises!!

Awww!!

Even pari was soo cute!!

Sge helped half of it!!

But then tge drunk parts be the best!!

They came to know thier feelings on tge other without even asking!!

Thankgod manik removed the guilt from the head!!

Nandini is bold enough now!! I like it!! Eventuallt love it!!

A very imp part!!

The delhi trip!!

It actually helped the story to progress in a better way!!

Nandini sleeping peacefully was very cute!!

Atlast she has some peace!!

Even rohan is very supportive!!

I like it!!

Bade bhai bane isliye hi hote hain!!

The morning scene!!

Goshh!!

It made me gitter!!

Shower and the proximity!!

Manan holding each other!!

THE HUG!!

Good going!!

Keep up the gud work!!

I need a pm!!

Plz add me!!

This story is something i don't wanna miss even by a single second!

P.S.-Big sharukh fan??

Same pinch!!😃

I love the song gerua u added!!

Even galti song too!!

Continue soon!!

Will be waiting!!

Lots of love

Zara😛