MANAN FF~~FANNAH~~ch 5b nd 0ch 6-PG-15(DISCONTINUED) - Page 7

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SORRY GUYS I WON'T BE ABLE TO UPDATE THE STORY TILL MONDAY

IT IS BECAUSE I VE EXTA CLASSES ON SATURDAY ND SUNDAY

SO I THINK I LL UPDATE ON MONDAY EVENING ONLY NOW

SORRY FOR THE IN CONVINIENCE

Waiting to know...who is this...jise dekh kar sab shock ho gaye...Thanks for PM...

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CHAPTER=4

Manik came out of the venue. The crowd was still cheering for him few people were crying thinking about the depyh nd pain in his voice. Anyone could tell that he meant every word of the song. Not only that but had experienced it himself. Here his frnds were panicking . they knew he is in pan know. They smiled at the audience nd came down the stage . thy were going to get out of the hall . when they heard"LET HIM GO".

They looked at the owner of the voice . it was abhimanyu. They gave a confused look to him nd then asked him

CABIR=What r u saying bro? tujhe pata hai na use iss waqt sab se jyada hamari zarurat hai!!

MUKTI= haan abhi cabir theek kah raha hai

ABHI= guys use dhora der akele rahne do . is waqt use space chahiye, apne aur apne khayalo aur uske liye...

Abhi stopped as he felt a lump struck in his throat. All look at him coz they knew he is right. The song manic sang was absolutely dedicated to HER, MANIK'S HER. All nodded in acknowledgement.nd left for the hotel

OUTSIDE THE AUDITORIUM

Manik came out of the hall . his eyes were all teary. He went inaside his car nd started the engine. He was driving his car destination less.nd tears were continuously flowing from his eyes . he was driving the car but his thoughts were revolving around HER. He was far awa from the city now. His stopped his car in a deserted nd lonely f\road.

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein
Kyun rooh meri ye sahe
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Hardum ye keh raha hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai (x2)

Manic came out of his car.nd broke down there. He waqs contuniously crying, his heart was aching due to pain.

"MANIK U R A MONSTER"

"THANK U"

"DON'T WORRY I WON'T TELL ANYONE THAT U"U R NAOT A MONSTER""

"AIYAPA KEEP MANIK SAFE TOO"

"I WON'T LEAVE U EVER"

"I TRUST U MANIK"

"I LL SHINE FOR U"

"I LOVE U MANIK"

"UR HEARTBEAT, THEY BEAT IN A RHYTHEM"

"Manik...Manik...mai tumhare saath hoon."

Her words were ringing in his ear. He put his hands on his ears...and cried

STOOOPPP

Andheron se tha mera rishta bada
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya
Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan
Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

The whole surrounding echoed with his voice. His inner turmoil also supressedn with his voice..

MANIK= why?why? apne use mujse use chin kyu liya ..kyu kya galti thi meri ... ki maine use beintehaa mohabaat kit hi. Ya yeh ki hum dono ek dosre se bhot ...bhot mohobbat karte the...akhir kyu...uske bina mujhe jeena ki ass bhi nahi hai.. uski jagah mujhe le jaaate... use kyu...

His pain was clear in his voice...THE PAIN HE HAD IN HIS HEART...PAIN OF LOVE...

MANIK= aur agar use hi le jaana that oh mujhe bhi uske saath le jaate..

He was totally shattred by now,,,but little did he knew all his prayers were heard by her aiyappaa

MANIK=plzzz plzzz... Use wapas le aao mere pass... taki mujhe mere jeena ki wagah mil gaya plzz mai haath jor kar tumse winti karta hu plzzz...

Hmm.. tere jism ki woh khushbuein
Ab bhi inn saanson mein zinda hai
Mujhe ho rahi inse ghutan
Mere gale ka ye phanda hai
Aaa..

He folded his hands.. but he didn't knew that his wish was going to be fulfilled that too very soon...but it is going to be ROUGH...VERY ROUGH...

Manic got up from the road nd he again started to drive the car. He was again driving aimlessly.. his mind full frustrated nd paining...when he saw something in the road side.. his stopped the car with a halt.. he came down of the car. He crossed the street. He went near the body. Iy was a girl, her head was bleeding nd her clothes were torn ,but her face was covered with a scarf.. he tried waking her up.

MANIK=(patting hercheeks)listen!!Hey!!!!!get up...

He was continuosly tring to wake her up but all in vain , she wasn't waking up...so, he decided to take her to his home. He took her in his arms , but stoped for few secs as he felt a FAMILIAR TOUCH, FAMILIAR SCENT in her.

But, now his priority was her health he took her in his car nd laid her in his backseat. He started driving the car, all the way he was looking at her through the rear mirror. He reached home within few mins,. He took her again in his arms nd walked inside the mansion.

As soon as he stepped in the mansion hgis frnds were surprised to see him , carrying a girl in his arms bcoz they knew he only loves HER. They all rushed to him, nd started asking him questions

CABIR= bhai yeh tu inti jaldi kaise aaya??!!

DHRUV= ha buddy auryeh larki kaun hai??!!

MANIK= sab battaa hu!! Phele cabir tu doc ko phone kar aur mukti , navy and alya come with me she needs a change.

They did as he said. Manic took the girl to his room nd laid her on his bed. He was going to leave when he saw her locket entangled with his shirt button, hee carefully started untangling them, all the while he was looking at her face that was covered with the scarf. He finally did it nd mukti nd alya asked him to go out, he obeyued.

Ho.. tere choodiyon ki woh khanak
Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hai
Sunkar isey aata hai yaad
Haathon mein mere zanjeerin hain
Tuhi aake inko nikaal zaraa
Kar mujhe yahaan se rihaa
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Ye sadaayein de rahaa hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

As soon as mani k left the room alya closed the door , but when navya removed the girl's scarf, the face they saw was a shocker all were dumbstruck. Mukti called all the boys too...

Everybody was shocked , but the person who was shocked to the core nd was standing like a ststue was MANIK...

He went near the bed nd touched her facve to make sure she is real, tears had already started flowing from his eyes

The girl was...

SO I M BACK I BROUGHT BACK SOMEONE FOR U ALL

ND TODAY I M SOOO...

HAPPY BCOZ OUR MaNan cum PaNn R THERE IN KYY SEASON 2 SO IT IS ALSO A TREAT AS I MGOING TO MAKE MANAN MEET HERE ALSO SOOO ENJOY

CH 5 COMING SOON...

The chapter is full of mystery
reveal soon
and it's damn interesting and emotional also
really curious to know what will happen in the next part..
Update soon

Really really nice update dear...now i m waiting for the suspense to open.
Update soon dear
Tc

PROMO

Awesome!
The promo is so interesting
the girl has lost her memory! Maybe