MANAN FF~~FANNAH~~ch 5b nd 0ch 6-PG-15(DISCONTINUED) - Page 9

Sorry for commenting late and it was a bliss reading this chapter I really could feel Manik's pain hope you bring old Nandu back!!

PROMO

VOICE- kyu?akhir kyu karti ho tum uss se itna pyar ha?

Yeh do saal...do saalo me maina tumhe pana ki kitni koshish ki par tum...tum aur tumhara dil toh uske pass hai!!!!!!!!

Tum ne apna memory loss kiya ...itna torture saha... phir bhi...tum use ab bhi pyar karti ho.. tumhara yeh dil ab bhi uss ke liye hi ndhakta hai... akhir usme aisa kya hai jo mujhme nahi , ha??

I will somehow.. or anyhow...i will make u mine ...

Tum sirf meri ho...aur kisi ki nahi

Aur agar tum meri nahi ho sakti to tum kisi ke nahi ho sakti...us ski bhi nahi

That was Awsome...Promo...plzzz cont soon

I think tht is Aryaman saying all this
Good one

really interesting...

i m updating in a min

CHAPTER 5B

Manik was sitting on the bar counter with a glass of beer. He wasn't crying and that was the problem that his frnds sitting near him didn't want..

They knew right now he needed her.. HIS NANDINI .. but the major question right now was how is she alive??!!

CABIR= akhir yeh kaisa ho sakta hai nandini..Nandini zinda kaisa ho sakti hai...

ALYA= haan who toh us accident me...

MANIK=STOP IT GUYS!!!!!!

All look at Manik they knew he had from the last two years so much inside him but he won't let that come out...Bcoz he had a little... a bloody little hope that his NANDINI WAS ALIVE SHE WOULD COME BACK TO HIM

Manik= MERI NANDU ZINDA HAI !! aur aaj tum logo ko bhi vishwash ho gaya na

Do saal phela jab maina tum logo ko kaha tha ki meri nandini zinda nhai tab bhi ntab bhi mujhe pata tha ki who hai.. zanta ho kyu?? Kyuki main ...main zinda hoon meri har ssaans gawah thi kik nandini mera sath hai par tumlogo ki khatir aur iss stupid society ke liye maina... yeh man lliya ki nandini mar chuki hai par mera dil yeh har waqt6 mujhe kehta tha ki who hai... hamesha thi...hamesha hai...aur hamesha rahegi jabh tak meri aakhiri saans chalti rahegi..tabtak...

All were in tears by now except Manik; abhi went to him and hugged him

ABHI= I believe u bro... main do saal phela bhi tera saath tha mujhe bhi wiswas tha ki meri behan zinda hai par jab tne khud mujhse aake kaha kit u bhi inn sab ke saath inki baat maan chukka hai mtab maina bhi hope chor di ...par aab ..aab main hope nahi chorunga..main pata llaga ke rahunga ki meri behan ke saath pichle do saal me kaya hua tha.

CHAPTER-6

That was it for Manik... he couldn't hold himself more he started crying like a 2 year old boy by hugging abhi... between his sobs he kept repeating...MAIN JANTA THA...MUJHE PATA THA MERI NANDINI HAI.. MERI NANDINI MERA SAATH NAHI TOH MERA SAATH HAI...abhi smiled in between his cries listening to manik's complain he knew Manik was speaking is his heart out at last..

At last of some good 20 minutes Manik stopped crying and broke the hug...

MANIK=thank u

ABHI=arre thanks mat bol whenever u need me u know I m there...

They exchanged smiles and seeing Manik smiling his other frnds also started smiling and to make the over emotional air little light our cabira jumped in between his 2 frnds

CABIR=guys agar tumhara yeh emotional scene ho gaya ho tosh dinner karna challe..

By this everyone remeberd it was quite late they hadn't dine till now..

MUKTI=haan yaar bhuk tosh much bhi lag rahi hai..

NAVYA=tosh intezar kyu kar rahe ho aap sabhi aa jayeya humne bhigan bana ke rakha hai use graham kijiye

All look at navya as if she is ana lien

MANIK=like seriously madhubala tum kabhi nahi badlogi na..

ABHI=sahi kah raha hai Manik.. madhubala ji do saal ho gaya tumhari shaadi kpo paar tum abhi bhi waisi hi ho.. yaar kabir tgeri jay ho tu isse kaisa jhel leta hai

CABIR= wahi toh main soch raha hu

All brust out in laughter while navya glare cabir..

CABIR= accha jokes apart...(looking at Manik)_Manik..hum ab jaate hai aur tu... Apni NANDINI ko bhi khana ke liya bula la.. tujhe bhala hi use dekhne ke baad apni bhook-pyaas chali gayi par...uss bechari ko toh bhook lag rahi hogi na

Manik glare cabir while other brust into laughter

MANIK(sighing)_and our cabir is back..seriously cabir tu kabhi nahi sudhreja na...

CABIR=do u think that??or are u expecting that??

MANIK= nono of the above

All again laugh and all leave for tha dinning table while Manik go to nandini's room to call her..

NANDINI'S ROOM WHILE MANIK AND HIS FRNDS WERE TALKING

As soon as Manik nd all left the room nandini got up with a jerk her eyes shot open which wre blood red she smirk and look around and spot a knife. She gets up takes the knife and again come back and sit on the bed

NANDINI(_male voice)= toh aahir kar tum pahuach jayi na iske paas..

She herself make a small cut on her hand and keeps ha knife on side table..

Male voice-- kyu?akhir kyu karti ho tum uss se itna pyar ha?

Yeh do saal...do saalo me maina tumhe pana ki kitni koshish ki par tum...tum aur tumhara dil toh uske pass hai!!!!!!!!

Tum ne apna memory loss kiya ...itna torture saha... phir bhi...tum use ab bhi pyar karti ho.. tumhara yeh dil ab bhi uss ke liye hi ndhakta hai... akhir usme aisa kya hai jo mujhme nahi , ha??

I will somehow.. or anyhow...i will make u mine ...

Tum sirf meri ho...aur kisi ki nahi

Aur agar tum meri nahi ho sakti to tum kisi ke nahi ho sakti...us ski bhi nahi

And give an evil laugh and after that nandini's eyes bcome normal as if nothimg happened happened . Manik entered the room he saw nandini sitting on the bed holding her head and blood oozing from her hand. He got worried at once.

MANIK=nandini yeh...yeh kaisa hua??...

NANDINI=hume nahi pata hum toh abhi...abhi jaage haii...

MANIK=(worried tone)aap...aap rukiya hum first aid box le kea ate hai

He stood up and brought the first-aid box. He cleaned her wound coz of which she hissed in pain..

MANIK= sorry...zada pain yoh nahi ho raha...I should have been more careless I m so dumb..

He keeps on blabbering while dressing her wound and nandini was smiling and looking at his face without blinking her eyes for even once...

NANDINI=kaun ho aap??

Manik who was engrossed in dressing her wound looked at her with a surprising expression

MANIK=matlab??

=matlab aap jaisa hamara cut ko dress kar rah hai aau freak out kar rahe hai aisa lag raha ki cut hame nahi aap ko laga hai

Manik smiled and kept the first box on side table he saw the knife but ignored it..

MANIK=aap pe job hi dard hota hai uska dard hame hota hai ... bahut hota hai

Now. Nandini looked at him surprised but after analyzing the words she started blushing but control;linmg her blush she asked

NANDINI= aapka matlab??

Now Manik realized what he said in flow..he started stammering

MANIK=mera matab...who..umm..yeh..woh..mera kahna ka matlab tha ...me

Nandini suppressed her laugh but after something she brust out into laighter..

And seeing her angelic laugh after so much time a smile crept on his face...After finishing her laughing session...nandini looked at Manik who looked lost somewhere...she smirked smugly and fakely coughed..Manik came back to the world from his NANDINI WORLD and started looking here and there..

NANDINI=(serious tone)ok now jokes apart I want to know ki main yah ape kyu hu??aur akhir mujhe..mujhe hua kya hai??

Mamik also bcame serous he knew this would be coming...but he him,self didn't had the answer for her question...which he wanted to find himself.

MANIK= I know u have man y questions which u want to ask.. and trust me I would answer all ur questions just..just give me some time..main tumhara har sawal ka jawab dunga just give me sometime..

Nandini smiled on this and holded his hands

NANDINI= I trust u Manik

Manik looked at her ..he started remembering the after drunken night morning when he was teasing her but she had told him" THAT IS BECAUSE I TRUST U"

Happiness tears started flowing from his eyes. Nandini saw thaem and wiped them from her hands and nodded her head in a no. Manik closed his eyes to feel her..he held hewr hands and without thinking kissed them,(as we know Manik malhotra kabhi bhi romance ka chance nahi chorta hai ;)

MANIK=thank u...thank u sooo much for trusting me...

Nandini after this turned her face other side coz it had turned red as a tomato due to blushing Manik.. realized what he did he immediatyely left her hand and started looking here and there..

M,ANIK=who..main...m ..sor...

He was going to say sorry but nandini kept her hand on his mouth

NANDINI= don't say sorry...plzz..

Manik look deep in her eyes .they share a deep and intense eyelock. Manik was totally bowled off due to her beautiful eyes..(waisa bhi bowled hai..aaj mr. malhotra out bhi ho jaya hai ;)

And..and..don't ever forget mr. Manik malhotra's evil and bad timed frnds who always appear when he is romancing or busy in some important work(that is romancing or kissing or making out or ...doing anything with nandini ;)

MANIK(self thought)yeh log kabhi nahi sudhrenga ..saalo do saal baad mil raha hu abhi toh kaam se kam rakho aur mujhe disturb karna band kar do..

Manik's frnds had witnessed all thescene they were happy that finally MaNan are tighter but we know na inka kaam Manik ka kaam me dakhal dena especially don't forget our evil twins...mukti and cabir...

CABIR= mukti..tujhe nahi lagta gaarmi baadh gayi hai??!!

MUKTI=haan cabir shimla itni thaand hai par iss room me garmi lag rahi hai...

Manan blush on this..

And after liitle more teasing session by his frnds. Manik somehow stops his frnds and all including nandini leave for dinner...

All this was watched by a pair of evil eye

VOICE=kush ho lo jitna hona hau kuki kuch der ki khushi hai yeh...hum tumhe baarbad kar denge manik ...puri tarah se..

He laughs evily

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Originally posted by: princypriya

lovely update yar

manik knws nandu alive bcoz he is living

abhi n manik was too good abt nandu

cabir never let chance to tease manan

navya hd nt changed manik n abhi r teasing her

manan r back

hope nandu get memory soon

jst love ther moments

continue soon

thnks for pm

stay blessed

keep smiling