MANAN FF~~FANNAH~~ch 5b nd 0ch 6-PG-15(DISCONTINUED) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: NAVYA64

nice update

interesting
cont soon

thank uu so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
nice update
liked the children fighting
hw they understand every well abt manik
continue soon
thnks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Awsome...update...
bacha party fight...hahaahaa...soo cutee...
And manik saw nandini...ri8??
But he saw statue of nandini...oh god...i hope nandini zinda ho or thik ho...or wo do person kon the..?? I know hamain hamare ans jaldi hi mil jayenge...haina?? Waiting for next update...
thanks for PM...
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
looks interesting
continue soon
waiting fr the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Wow!
Fabulous..
I was laughing like hell while reading the conversation of the children
especially kavya's part
the last part was mysterious..
Waiting to read the next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
it was a cute, simple update😊...madhubala ki beti sachi mein madhubala pe hi gyi hai😆😃
but what was that???...who are those people??...was it for real??
wanna know it soon
update soon dear
tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow kavya is the best hehehe..jaise Maa waise beti.
N yeh kaminey log manan ko alag kiu kar rahe hai.
Thanks for pm me 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
awesome update...
who are those 2 people...
introduce nandu soon...
can't wait and keep up the good work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

who are those 2 people...
introduce nandu soon...
can't wait and keep up the good work...

thank u
ll introduce her sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

CHAPTER=3

Manik nd all the chidren came back home soon. As soon as they entered in the house all the adults were surprised bcoz it had not even been an hour of there departure. They looked at manik who was still in his own world of thoughts thinking about the girl..

CABIR= tum log itni jaldi aa jaya??

MUKTI=ha bhai kya hua ?apko jaye ek ghanta bhi nahi hua hai!!

MANIK=woh...who..

He saw that the children were also looking at him curiously nd didn't wanted to give tenson to his frnds by telling that he saw her, so he told a not so plain lie

MANIK= haan.. who.. kal.. kal... concert hai naa toh mujhe apne song ko cross check bhi karna hai aur I mean haan isi liye yeh baat bich raasta me yaad aye toh bas..

All look at him suspiously coz they know this can't be the real reason coz manik luves children very much nd he just can't upset them, for the sake of competition

CABIR=tu sach kah raha hai?

ABHI=mujhe nahi lagta tum ne pichle baar who London ka concert cancel kar diya tha bcoz u had promised the children to take them for a movie to kal ke manali ke concert me kya khass baat hai??

MANIK=arre yaar plzz don't start ur dectective Q/S now. Tomorrow we have a early morning flight to catch so better we focus on that in place of thia nd m going to sleep now coz I m getting a headache.

Nd before anyone could ask anything he went I his roon nd locked the door. All his frnds were confused with his behavior but decided to ignore it they went in there rooms. Here in manik's room , manik was sitting on the bead his head resting on the headboard, eyes closed nd a picture placed near his heart.

MANIK'S POV

Was it real? Did I rally saw her?? But how is it possible then what about the accident 2 years back? No she can't be real u r just missing her!but what bout the whispers I heard?

Mani stop thinking ! u r over reacting it can just be one of ur mind's stupid brain game.

U know she can'tcome back she has gone far away from u... VERY FAR AWAY...

POV END

Thinking thi manik drifted in his sleep all the while thinking about HER

NXT MORNING

Manik was all set for the air port he ame in hall nd saw all his frnds waiting or him. They all greeted each other nd then set out for the airport. The flight was of 3 hrs so whole jorney went of in just alittle time. All the journey manik was busy with the children. They finally reached MANALI. A.S.A manik came out on the airport all the girls started surrounding him for his auto graph but he being THE MANIK MALHOTA in his all time ATITUDE just got out of the airport nd sat in his car. They reached the hotel in a while . all children were feeling sleepy. They had an evening concert. They took a short nap nd then got ready for the concert. They reached their destination in few mins. Again fans started surrounding them- THE GREAT FAB 5 , ESPECIALLY. MR MANIK MALHOTRA. All the gils present there were ging ga gaover him.

MANIK'S DRESS

ALYA'S DRESS

CABIR'S DRESS

MUKTI'S DRESS

DHRUV'S DRESS

Abhi nd navya stayed back stage with the children, as soon as they stepped on the stage manik shoutd"SO MANALI R U READY TO ROCK"

'YES" the crowd shouted

MANIK=so this song is dedicated to my shing starwhom I LOVE VERY VERY MUCH..

AWWW... again the crowd shouted.

As the song started only manik nd his frnds knew what they where ging through that time.



Yad aa rahee hai - (2)

Teree yad aa rahee hai -(2)

Yad aane se, tere jane se jan ja rahee hai

Yad aa rahee hai, teree yad aa rahee hai

(HE STARTS REMEMBRING HER SMILE)

Pehle yeh naa jana, tere bad yeh jana pyar me - (2)

Jina mushkil kar dega, yeh dil divana pyar me

Jane kaise sans yeh aise aa ja rahee hai

Yad aa rahee hai, teree yad aa rahee hai

(HE STATRS REMEBRING THEIR 1 ST KISS)

Bante bante dulhan, prit hamaree uljhan ban gaee - (2)

Mere dil kee dhadkan, meree jan kee dushman ban gaee

Kuchh keh kehke, mujhe reh rehke, tadpa rahee hai

Yad aa rahee hai, teree yad aa rahee hai

(HE LOOKS AROUND IN HOPE TO FIND HER BUT SHE WASN'T THERE)

Yeh rut kee rangaraliyan, yeh phulo kee galiyan ro padee - (2)

Meraa hal suna toh, mere sath yeh kaliya ro padee

Ek nahee tu duniya aansu barasa rahee hai

Yad aa rahee hai, teree yad aa rahee hai

Yad aane se, tere jane se jan ja rahee hai

Yad aa rahee hai, teree yad aa rahee hai

(HE REMEBERS ALL HIS MOMENTS WITH HE- TGEIR FIGHT'1 ST HUG TO THEIR 1 ST NIGHT)

He ends the song till now he was in tears but he some how put a smile nd walks of the stage...

SO CH 3 DONE..

COMMENT LAMBA...

CH 4 COMING SOON

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