MANAN FF~~FANNAH~~ch 5b nd 0ch 6-PG-15(DISCONTINUED) - Page 3

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

it looks quite interesting😊

what happened to nandini??..the biggest question

is nandini abhimanyu's sister??

is aryaman behind all this??..maybe

and who are parth & maya...are they mukbhi's children?? you didn't mention it.

thanx for the pm dear

update soon

tc

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

its sad
..yr to see manik lyk did..better u disclose secret of nandu ...m eagerly waiting ...
...so much pain he hiding inside him...

nice update

Originally posted by: princypriya

nice update

feeling bad to see manik like tht

plz revile the myserty of nandu

continue soon

awesome update..

Wow!
Amazing..
The story is so mysterious..
Waiting for the next update

Omg is someone nandu?? Ahhh let's see..but wow..
⭐️ 👏

Manik is in soo much of pain!! Disclose the mystery and make Manik and Nandini meet soon!!

CHAPTER=3

LOCATION=MANIK'S CAR

Manik was in the driver seat while the children where talking among themselves about which place ti go, (actually fighting)

PARTH=no yaar pro(prithvi) I have decided that we r going to games club first, I have heard from pa nd mom that manali's gameclub is so awsm...

PRITHVI= No ll go to see a match first u knw what maine sunna hai aaj yaha par ISL ka qualifiers match hai Ind it's gonna start soon toh hum pehle wahi jaenge

MAYA=oh shut up u action frcos!!! We ll go to shopping first alya aunty ne bataya tha ki yaha ke shopping mall kafi interesting hota hai nd loaded with new stuff especially in this season

KAVYA= arre hum kah rahe hai na hame pehle mandir jaana chaiye, ma ne hame kaha tha ki manmanli me bahut dharmik manir hota hai,, hume mata rani se sabki sukh santi ke liye prathna karni hai , taki hamari yeh yatra Mangalmaya ho...

ALL LOOK AT HER IF SHE IS A ALINEN , INCLUDING MANIK,,

MANIK= Like mather like daughter !!! MADHUBALA KI BETI USSE BHI BARI MADHU SALA!!!

PARTH= kavya can u plzz come again coz I didn't understood a single word of urs...

MAYA=I second bhai even I didn't get any thing u said...

PRITHVI= yaar kavya tu na apne in filmy aur 80's ke words ko apne pass rakh hume koi shauk nahi nahi hai sunne ka..

Then' they all turn to manik,, manik knew what's coming , but he kept mum for the sake of the chilren...

PARTH= ummm... Chachu aap ka kya opinion hai hume pehle game club jaana cahiya naa...

MAYA=no superman we should go for shopping 1^st right??

PRITHVI= no frnd we should go for the match

KAVYA= humari baat mano hume mandir jaana cahiye

Manik Who till now was enjoyimg their "so caled fight" was trapped , he didn't wanted to hurt any of his "JIGAR KA THUKDAS" so he said " arre mujhe iss me maat ghusao ,, tum log aapas me aapna matter solve kar lo... mujhe tumahara parent's ke hatho marne ka sauk nahi hai.."

All the children giggle on this coz they knew the real reason, but they again got engaged in their fighting and taunting buissness..

Suddenly , manik stopped the car with a halt coz of which children git scared,, they look at manik who was looking outside through the window as if searching for something, the children asked him,

KAVYA= hay mata rani yeh achanak se mamu ne gari kyu rok di humari toh jaan hi nikal jayi thi...

PARTH= haan chachu kya hua aapne achanak gari kyu roki

MANIK= who mane bahar sayad kuch dekha tum log yahi ruko mai aata hu..

Saying this got down from the car and started searching here nd there when he heard a mere whisper, which was enough for him to get rooted in his place he was thinking it's his maind's game' but again he heard the whisper which made sure it wasn't his mind doing this' he started looking here nd there crazily like a mad .. the children were confused with his behaviour, they called him

PARTH= chachu kya hua ???aap kya dhund rahe ho??

This brought manik back to reality he looked around and said

MANIK= wohh... Kuch nahi aa raha huu..

With this got inside his car nd started it, all the while he was silenmt nd when the children had finilizd there destination they told him they want to go for shopping first, but manik said" baccho kya hum abhi ghar ja sakte hai meri tabiyat thik nahi lag reahi" all children aggred as they knew wouldn't refuse them without a valid reason. On the way to home,,,

MANIK'S P.O.V

Was it a dream but I saw.. I saw her in the mirror the same ... same whom i luv.. and then the wishpers I heard it two times... were they my hallucation too

Manik what r u thinking man ... she had gone ... gone far away from u she won't return STOP THINKING NOW...

and she can't be the same ... she didn't have the shine in her eyes

NO SHE IS NOT THERE

P.O.V ENDED

All this whatched by two pairs of evil eyes,,

VOICE1= poor mr. malhotra he don't know that he wasn't hallucating...tch..tch..tch..

VOICE2= yah.. and this is just beggining for all...

And They back where the statue of the girl manik saw is placed they look at it nd then at each other nd they laughed evily..

SO BACK WITH CH 2 ,,

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CH 3 COMMONG SOON...