Kaisi Yeh Yaariyaan Season 1 Ending Note on Page 15 - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

110

Views

14.7k

Users

35

Likes

249

Frequent Posters

Taarey_Manan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

will love to read more..

please continue soon :)

thank u
will update soon
m writing the update
Mawara_Ejaz thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Taarey_Manan

thank u
will update soon
m writing the update


looking forward for it dear :)
priyasmiley thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#23
hey conyinue soon
waiting to read the update
make it as ff
Taarey_Manan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz


looking forward for it dear :)

Just few minutes more...
Its going to finish
jst edited the errors
Taarey_Manan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: princypriya

hey conyinue soon

waiting to read the update
make it as ff

just few minutes more and i will update
just few things left to edit
doing that
Taarey_Manan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Hello every!!! I am back the updates!!! Be ready with tissues... you might need them. As it was my birthday day before yesteray i.e. on 25th August... I am here with my birthday treat for all of you... I hope you would like my update... And sorry in advance for the mistakes in the update..

PART 2:

Manik broke down completely and Nandini felt guilty of what she was going to do... She was going to leave him... a peron who was craving for her love... she was leaving her life. She was pushing him back into the darkness...

" Go away Nandini... jao mujhe chhod jao sab chhod ke hi toh jaate hai tum bhi chali jao.. Main kya itna bura hun ki I don't deserve anyone's love and care... Mere dad who left me with Nyonika... Nyonika, my mama jinke main itna close tha but then she changed and what she did was unforgettable... Harshad, he forgot our band of brothers in jeolusy... he too left me... then Dhruv and Alia... who bhi chalege tum bhi jao Nandini jao... Main akela hi thik hun... kyu aye tum sab jab mujhe chhodna hi tha..." Manik said while crying hiding his face in his palms...

"Manik aisa nhi hai please I am sorry... I know maine tumhe bahot hurt kia but see... M not going anywhere... I am here right in front of you... and I wont leave you this is Nandini's Murthy's promise!!!!" Nandini said while wiping her tears and hugged Manik... Manik didn't hugged her back...

They didn't knew that there was someone who heard there whole conversation from starting... Dhruv, Alya who came there just for keeping Aaryamann's heart; Harshad and Nyonika who came there to plan a bomb blast in Manik's car.. All four of them heard their conversation and were in tears...

Yes... They understood pain of Manik... They did at last... DhruLya realised how wrong they were... Manik had so much in himself... he never showed his tis vulnerable side to anyone just to protect Fab4... They silently prayed to god and thanked them for sending Nandini in his life and making them realise their mistake before its too late... Nyonika understood her son for the first timein these few years when Manik started calling him with her name... Today she got to know how much he craves for her... He never showed it but he did craved for her love which he only get untill he was 17 years old after that he never got that love... Harshad, he realised his mistakes... what all he did with Manik was wrong... he was his brother and what he did.. and was doing... he ws planning his death with Nyonika... God how wrong they both were... Planning death of Manik... the one who still have a soft corner for them but never showed...

But now it was time for payback... They had to rectify their mistakes and they will do it...

[Nyonika and Harshad didn't do IT together but Nyonika helped Harshad in planning against Manik and due to that they had rift between them and Manik insulted her a lot as a mother so she became the same as Manik described her]

Manik broked the hug forcefully and left from their in his car... Nandini was crying... Alya went and hugged her tightly... Nyonika told everything about the bomb and begged him to save her son and Harshad went to stop Manik from going in that car which would explode anytime...

Harshad and Dhruv both ran towards Manik and shouted his name but he didn't bothered to listen... Nyonika went towards Nandini and seeked forgiveness from her for her past deeda and Nandini forgived her happily and told her that Manik would also forgive her just give him some time...

Dhruv and Harshad were screaming his name loud and were running when Dhruv stopped in his track... he was confuse how would he face Manik... would he forgive him for what he did... Harshad saw that but he didn't stopped... right now Manik's life was more imortant...

He saw hin getting in the car but before he could sit... Harshad pulled him and started running... Manik was confused but he didn't move and Harshad was pulling him but he was stick to his place...

"Manik please abhi chal yahan se... iss car mein bomb hai.. blast hone mein sirf ek 1 minute bacha hai... chal... please chal band of brothers keliye..." Harshad said and both of them had tears in their eyes on the phrase BAND OF BROTHERS... And...

...

...

...

...

BOOM

The bomb blasted with a bang...Cabir and Mukti came out on hearing the and were shocked to see the scene... Nyonika, Dhruv, Nandini and Alya... they all looked towards the car and were shocked to see it... They had tears... they thought they lost Manik... Nandini was shattered... she was crying...

All of them shouted:

MANIKKK

BUDDYYY

They all fell on their knees... And suddenly they saw two figures coming towards them.. They were Harshad and Manik... Harshad was crying and Manik had a blank face... he didn't knew how to react that time... he was confused...

As soon as all saw him they rushed to him and without thinking twice Nyonika hugged him...

"Manik... tum thik ho na?? tumhe kuch hua toh nhi naah... I am sorry beta... mujhe maaf kardo... Maine kitna galat kia tumhare saath... I am sorry beta... please maaf kardo... maafi bahot chota word hai but still ek aakhri chance dedo apni mama ko... please"

Nyonika cried hugging her scene... Everyone was shocked to see her like this... They knew she changed and she changed for the good... Manik was shocked to see her like this... he had tears in his eyes too.. he craved for this motherly hug and now after 3 years he got this hug... He couldn't resist her hug and hugged her more tightly...

"Mama... Its okay... Don't cry please... I am fine... I am completely fine... look.. mujhe kuch nhi hua kuch bhi nhi"

Manik said hugging her... Nyonika broke th hug and kissed her son's forhead... Finally Manik got some happiness... Nandini hugged him next and said sorry for her decision of leaving him... Manik can never be angry with her so he breaked the hug and kissed her forhead...

Alya and Dhruv came and said sorry together and Manik hugged them both and Cabir and Mukti joined the group hug and again Mukti pulled Nandini with them and announced her as their group member... All were very happy...

Nyonika told about the bomb blast... Manik got angry at first but the fact that she confessed the truth herself and Harshad realised his mistake made him smile and forgived both of them... He saw Harshad leaving wping his tears... Dhruv and Manik shouted together with a smile...

"Harshad... Kamine kaha jaa raha hai tu... wapis aaja...itni aasani se tujhe yeh band of brothers chhodne nhi denge..."

Harshad turned and saw them smiling at him... He smiled and runned towards them and hugged them both tightly...

After breaking the hug... Harshad seeked forgiveness from everyone... Till that time Navya and Aaryamann too came their and Harshad seeked forgiveness from them too...

To Be Continued

I hope it was upto the mark..

Do comment and hit like pls

Edited by Taarey_Manan - 10 years ago
HTA111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Interesting heartfelt amazing update

Manik is all shattered to know is everyone wants to leave him alone and is he not important anymore to any of his friends even for love of his life as she decided to leave him too

Continue soon and thanks for pm
Taarey_Manan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: HTA111

Interesting heartfelt amazing update

Manik is all shattered to know is everyone wants to leave him alone and is he not important anymore to any of his friends even for love of his life as she decided to leave him too

Continue soon and thanks for pm

thank u so much
I have already updated chapter 2 on page 4
Rockingbhardwaj thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#29
I searched all over the forum for fab5 stories but could not find one..
I m sooo happy..
Finally a fab5 story..

Loved it
The concept is good..
Humzy thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#30
wow awsm update
loved it
nicely written
cont soon

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".