Manan ss Tu Chahiye! Part 13 pg 80 updated 18/9

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Danny92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

Nice update just loved it

U penned it very well

The way manik confessed his love was super I liked the part wen he said that he will be on Keen's in front of a lady that is tie there daughters shoe lays

All that was so sweet

He called her getting there marriage certificate

Wen manik said that nw she doesn't need a dairy and she can share everything with him that was just so sweet

Ur gng gud with the story

Continue sooonnn

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srija-n

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Uhh!! Romantic ... bt next part hot hona chaihe ha ..!! He he ... jokes a part ...
Beautiful... bt short na ..!!
Next part soon plz ... :-)

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pujadas187

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Nice update...
Manan confessed. .wow...
Manik promised tht nxt time whn he kneel down in frnt of any girl.. tht will b their daughter..to tied the shoe lac.. Soo cute...
Continue soon..

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tas456

@tas456

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Awesome!!!!!

Wat a confession yaar..dil.khush kardita

Omg..loved it when he said I will only kneel again to tie our daughter's shoe lace

I feel in love with manik all over again

Can't wait for your next update

Tq for the pm

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music_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Hi, I waited for your update so long.😭 Wht a awesome,brilliant n emotional update😳. So at last everything cleared. No misunderstanding, Only love. U r sooo good. I love u for this. Everything was sooo romantic he picked her n came from station. He understood her dilemma. His assurance towards her life. Everything is so heart touching. U scripted vry beautifully the confession. 👏This is the best part of your story. At last they r together.

Please dnt take much time in updating next. U r really a fab writer.

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anjaliiiii84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Wow just amazing...hahaha uski daughter ki shoe less really awww so romantic confession wow wow wow..I m eagerly waiting for next part..plzzz soon post next part..N thanks for pm me dear

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unnatishukla241

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

yess finally he said

yeeehhh i am very happy for them

i love this chapter

this is my favorite one

continue soon

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

finally Confession.. wat a proposal yar loved it... n finally a lovable kiss... just loved it. just loved every bit ... so nice yar . just awesome. . wat a beautiful update itsss a really a nice chapter. . I like it . itsss so nice. n amazing. . I just love it. . keep updating like this. . update soon. ... waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. thanks for this beautiful update.. Thanks for pm too. . :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) ;-) ;-) :-) :-) :-):-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-):-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) ;-), :-) :-) lotsss of love