Manan ss Tu Chahiye! Part 13 pg 80 updated 18/9 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do continu yr n ya plzzz do pm me i jst lv ur story it really intrstng
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Wow awesome start dea. ...
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Here's is the first part!!!
Part1

Manik went home and slept because tomorrow was a big day fo4 him.
Next morning Manik got up and freshened up quickly and called Cabir asking about the progress of the challenge. Cabir asked him to come to the cafe near Jenny's residence. Manik got ready and went there. Cabir showed him a video after seeing the video Manik was baffled and shouted " How dare she?
Flashback
After taking the challenge from Manik, Cabir called Jenny from an unknown number and called her to a pub. He was dressed up as a rich man and went to Jenny. He told her that he was Manik's business rival and wanted to ruin him and if she helps him in doing so he would give all Manik's wealth to her. Jenny was a very greedy girl. She was fooling Manik from the very first day of their relationship. She instantly agreed. Cabir had recorded all this.
Flashback ends
Cabir calmed Manik down and instructed him to go to her house. Manik went to Jenny's house and ringed the bell. Jenny opened the door and hugged him. Jenny said " Hi baby, pata hai i missed you so much." Manik replied " Miss karne ki need hi nhai hai baby ab main tumhare saath rahunga because I am ruined I have lost all my money"
Jenny smirked and said " Manik what makes you feel that I have ever loved you. I only loved your money and now that your money is gone I don't need you any more"
Manik said " What a shameless girl are you" and turned to leave but Jenny stopped him and said " Who are you tell me shameless you too are no less you were married but you still came to me. You know what you are a looser. You know why? Because tumhe ye bhi nahi pata ki your wife loves you alot. Pata hai vo mujhse milne aayi thi and usnse ye kaha ki she knows that you and I love each other and she will never come in between us because she wants you tobe happy and she told me not to hurt you."
After telling him this she shut the door. Manik came down to see Cabir but Cabir was not there. He received a message from Cabir ' Manik don't come to the hospital till you know what she is to you and how important she is and the only way to get to know this is read her diary and after yesterday's incident you should know what she was goin through'
Manik straight away went to his room after reaching his home and started looking for the diary. After 15 minutes he found it and opened it. It was written Nandini Murthy then Murthy was cut and soon to be malhotra was written which was also cut and Malhotra was written which was also cut and atlast doesn't matter was written.
(Diary entry will be in quotations)
" Hey diary,
I am very happy you know why because Ravi uncle aaye the and unhone Manik ke liye mujhe pasand kiya hai. You know I love Manik from the day he first visited this orphanage. The way he was playing with kids with utmost innocence made me fall for him. I fell for Manik not The Manik Malhotra because I was unaware of the fact he was him. Ravi uncle told him that he had a difficult childhood just like me and so I know how it feels. Once I get married to Manik I will always aupport him like a friend, protect him like a father, love him like a mother and care for him like a lover.
Goodnight diary"
After reading this Manik was surprised at How someone could love him so much without his knowledge. He turned the page to read the next diary entry.
End
I am free today so if I get more comments and likes I will give 1 more part today!!!
For pm buddy me and comment

Edited by Knight99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Knight99

Here's is the first part!!!

Part1

Manik went home and slept because tomorrow was a big day fo4 him.
Next morning Manik got up and freshened up quickly and called Cabir asking about the progress of the challenge. Cabir asked him to come to the cafe near Jenny's residence. Manik got ready and went there. Cabir showed him a video after seeing the video Manik was baffled and shouted " How dare she?
Flashback
After taking the challenge from Manik, Cabir called Jenny from an unknown number and called her to a pub. He was dressed up as a rich man and went to Jenny. He told her that he was Manik's business rival and wanted to ruin him and if she helps him in doing so he would give all Manik's wealth to her. Jenny was a very greedy girl. She was fooling Manik from the very first day of their relationship. She instantly agreed. Cabir had recorded all this.
Flashback ends
Cabir calmed Manik down and instructed him to go to her house. Manik went to Jenny's house and ringed the bell. Jenny opened the door and hugged him. Jenny said " Hi baby, pata hai i missed you so much." Manik replied " Miss karne ki need hi nhai hai baby ab main tumhare saath rahunga because I am ruined I have lost all my money"
Jenny smirked and said " Manik what makes you feel that I have ever loved you. I only loved your money and now that your money is gone I don't need you any more"
Manik said " What a shameless girl are you" and turned to leave but Jenny stopped him and said " Who are you tell me shameless you too are no less you were married but you still came to me. You know what you are a looser. You know why? Because tumhe ye bhi nahi pata ki your wife loves you alot. Pata hai vo mujhse milne aayi thi and usnse ye kaha ki she knows that you and I love each other and she will never come in between us because she wants you tobe happy and she told me not to hurt you."
After telling him this she shut the door. Manik came down to see Cabir but Cabir was not there. He received a message from Cabir ' Manik don't come to the hospital till you know what she is to you and how important she is and the only way to get to know this is read her diary and after yesterday's incident you should know what she was goin through'
Manik straight away went to his room after reaching his home and started looking for the diary. After 15 minutes he found it and opened it. It was written Nandini Murthy then Murthy was cut and soon to be malhotra was written which was also cut and Malhotra was written which was also cut and atlast doesn't matter was written.
(Diary entry will be in quotations)
" Hey diary,
I am very happy you know why because Ravi uncle aaye the and unhone Manik ke liye mujhe pasand kiya hai. You know I love Manik from the day he first visited this orphanage. The way he was playing with kids with utmost innocence made me fall for him. I fell for Manik not The Manik Malhotra because I was unaware of the fact he was him. Ravi uncle told him that he had a difficult childhood just like me and so I know how it feels. Once I get married to Manik I will always aupport him like a friend, protect him like a father, love him like a mother and care for him like a lover.
Goodnight diary"
After reading this Manik was surprised at How someone could love him so much without his knowledge. He turned the page to read the next diary entry.
End
I am free today so if I get more comments and likes I will give 1 more part today!!!
For pm buddy me and comment

Awesome dear
Cont Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start but plz try to give bigger updates...
Cont soon...
Thanx for pm..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey.. Congratulations for ur new story ... Nice plot and eagerly waiting for what u have stored for us :)))
Plz do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice yar..
nice concept n story is interesting...
so I luv to read it more..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc one ...plz post nxt chappy tday
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fab update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome.. loved it.. plz do post todae...waiting for it

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