!!MANAN SS!! DARBADAR DIL || resposted link pg 1 - Page 10

Completely losted in ur update..
So many unsaid and hidden emotions r their in ur update..
I really loved it..out of words..
Update soon.
Love...mini

Vry nice chapter ... Great start it is ...

awesum sweetie


lovin d plot


want 2 c wat NM does next



curious about d past


thnkz 4 pm



updte soon


bubye...

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Awww!!!! Mao...

Same pinch!!!!

I am too crazy about concerts especially night ones...I specially go to delhi to attend them... They are heaven...I am so crazy...I sold my phone on the sorr outside the ticket counter to buy ticket coz I was having 3000 but it costed 6000... See!!! I am this crazy... Uske baad jitne pause bache..mera friends he Saab beer par udhadiye... My dad still laugh remembering my craziness and he makes sure I take at least double the ticket about so that I don't sell any more things...

See I am so unpredictable NM is nandini malhotra...but think why she denied that she is only NM not anything els...

Waaahh!!!! Mao...

Isse baat par...

Concert ne hamein nikama bna diya...

Admi him bhi tha badge kamke...

And yes!!!!!

Your mishu loves her Mao a lot...

Awsumm strt...too good

Hey mish! Sry fr d late comment!!
This ss out of the world!!!!! Just love it soo much!!! Just by reading 2-3 lines of d prologue i fell in love wid this ss-darbadar dil!! Such a beautiful title it is mish!! The prologue was awesome!!
Comin to d first chapter...lovely yet heart-wrenching chappy!! N i love heart-wrenching stories to d core!! So in 1st chapter only am more in love wid d ss!!
Manik's part b4 nandu's entry was nice...i love his strength to live life..i.e.nandu's smile:)..!!
Nandini's words were beautifully penned!! Depiction of broken heart-out of the universe!!! Loved hw manik felt her pain throughout d song!! Song selection..u kno ur always gud at it!!
Nandu's costume..actually NM's..dat ws really nt nandini-ish!! It ws mukti-ish!! Complete opp. to nandu!!
loved d way u used newton's 3rd law!! That ws unique n incredible!!
Stranger??!!! Manik???!!!!! MaNan r married...we n manik too shud wait to kno d answers!! Y nandu left manik?? Dat too goin through d same pain??? Loved the kiss!!! NM!! Wat's goin on??!!! Nandini murthy or nandini malhotra??!!! Many questions to b answered...but at d right time..!!
Loved it!
update soon n thnxx fr d pm:)
keep writing:)..will always love u:)

Amazing just as your other works! I was spellbound with the song and I am really waiting for the next update!😃

Ty for d pm...

That was so superb sweetie
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There is nothing can awsm by this...
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Ye Nandu ko ky hoo gya aisa??
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Oh God soo much of suspense
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How can I bear this?? But I hv to so I'll really wait for ur another update post soon...
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tc keep smiling always like me 😛 😉
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ty for pm stay blessed 😊

wow amazing update...nice choice of words...why nandani can't recognize manik curious to know that ...nice song...One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain...pain nourishes courage ...nandani can ignore her but can't live without her...thanx for pm👏.