Manan ff - heartbeat imp note on pg 132...30/06/16 - Page 45

Smiley... U always smile and also make others smile

Mindblowing
fabulous
loved it very very much their romance was amazin'
and the game was also awesome
loved the way nandu kissed Manik
but the next part was shocking
aliya slapped nandu she also slapped her! Haha
nandu's tigress form was awesome
update soon

Awesome update
Nandini kissed manik in front of fab5
And then aliya slapped nandini but nandini also slapped her that was super
And Manan update was amazing
And cabir asking questions from nandini cabir is such a teaser
plz plz Update the next part soon

WOW!!!!!!! Tnqu sooo muchhh for such a lovely n cute update...u penned it soo beautifully...
the way u write is jus outstanding...i jus cant describe it in words...ur story jus mindblowing...kaise karleti ho?how u manange to pendown soo beautifully?
ur such an amazing writer...must say that ur blessed with ur writing skill..hats off dea
u knw wot u rocked it...
plsss be fast update ...cant wait more...m really excited for manan romance n hot scene...waiting for ur update...
as always manan scene is blissful...n that stupid aliya..how dare she slap nandu? i 'll kill her..n our own cabiran his rules..hahaha..nandu kissed manik infront of everyone...i jus loved it
plss continue ASAP
KEEP WRITING..TC

LOADS OF LOVE

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Smiley... U always smile and also make others smile

What an update yaar. Superb

I mean starting from MaNan romance till the end of the day... Great

Truth & Dare... I'm damn sure Abhi would have been bold out by seeing Mukti's sexy moves..

And, MaNan kiss... Was not expecting this. But nice

And then Nandu slapping Alya, haha... She deserves

And then Cabir & his stupid jokes...

Hmm... So MukBhi like each other... Yaayyy...

So Navya & Harshad are soon going to become important parts of the story... M waiting

Update soon dear

hey.. u r such a amazing writer yr...I really appriciate ur writing skill...I mean ki bhut hi alg concept or cute concept hai tmhare story ka...

Originally posted by: suraiya77

Mindblowing
fabulous
loved it very very much their romance was amazin'
and the game was also awesome
loved the way nandu kissed Manik
but the next part was shocking
aliya slapped nandu she also slapped her! Haha
nandu's tigress form was awesome
update soon

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Awesome update
Nandini kissed manik in front of fab5
And then aliya slapped nandini but nandini also slapped her that was super
And Manan update was amazing
And cabir asking questions from nandini cabir is such a teaser
plz plz Update the next part soon

I am happy that instead of standing there and crying Nandini went and slap aliya

Originally posted by: dishamathur

hey.. u r such a amazing writer yr...I really appriciate ur writing skill...I mean ki bhut hi alg concept or cute concept hai tmhare story ka...