Manan ff - heartbeat imp note on pg 132...30/06/16 - Page 43

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Oh my my

I know u give shock

But atto heart attack Ho gaya

My poor nandu slap

Excellent

Awesome

Mind blowing

Enjoying

Hit

Rock

Originally posted by: Hudah18

Its amazing always love ur update to the core and the romance va re wah its sooo cute and poor nandu got slap from aliya and y aliya is chipku always and feeling awkard regarding harshad noticing nandu

Originally posted by: parthsha

Super hit yaaar loved the update...

Now

Want

Next hot hot chapter fast

Waiting

If its ready post it dear

Originally posted by: muskan4199

Awesome update ...

Secret romance of manan ...

Nandini's dare ...kiss ...

Slap by aliya ...

And a healing kiss by manik ...

Fabulous story...

Really u r a amazing writer ...

Waiting impatiently for nxt update ...

Thnx for this uodate ...

And plzz update nxt part soon ...

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

nice update...

like it

but aaliya😡...how can she slap nandini

means it is very clear that manik is not interested in her

Originally posted by: lakshita03

Ok.! As you demand a big big comment, here you go.
I know you r correct at your place to expect a acha sa comment from us. Sorry :( .
I comment only when i am in right frame of mind and mood .

Haan toh firstly, your story is super cute and adorable.
I love MaNan here. Very muchh.
Manik and Nandini's romance. Hayee <3
The way Nandu fights back with Alya.
The slaps and taunts.
The way Manik and Nandini support each other throughout.
Cabira being our cupid throughout. His funny pranks and jokes :P.

Ya. But don't you think they r just in +2 only. And MaNan are already together, i mean Nandini is Manik's fiance already. And they romance like anything.Isint it too early..? Why don't u change them to college..!

Otherwise, your story is superb and i like its concept. Waiting for it to unfold more..!
Update the next soon. :)
Waiting waiting eagerly...! Zyada wait mat karwana.
Ab toh I guess i have commented enough big.Happy..?

Great job.
Keep it up.
All the best of luck.
Keep smiling and be happy and blessed.

Love-
Lakshita :)

Originally posted by: aditimanan

Maza aa gaya alya ko thappad hahaha
Manik ko private property damajti hai huh
Vey nice
Nxt update hot haa
Waoting
Cont soon
Lots of love

Originally posted by: MANANamazes

😉😊😊awesome story ...continue soon