Manan ff - heartbeat imp note on pg 132...30/06/16 - Page 42

nice update...

Maza aa gaya alya ko thappad hahaha
Manik ko private property damajti hai huh
Vey nice
Nxt update hot haa
Waoting
Cont soon
Lots of love

Ok.! As you demand a big big comment, here you go.
I know you r correct at your place to expect a acha sa comment from us. Sorry :( .
I comment only when i am in right frame of mind and mood .

Haan toh firstly, your story is super cute and adorable.
I love MaNan here. Very muchh.
Manik and Nandini's romance. Hayee <3
The way Nandu fights back with Alya.
The slaps and taunts.
The way Manik and Nandini support each other throughout.
Cabira being our cupid throughout. His funny pranks and jokes :P.

Ya. But don't you think they r just in +2 only. And MaNan are already together, i mean Nandini is Manik's fiance already. And they romance like anything.Isint it too early..? Why don't u change them to college..!

Otherwise, your story is superb and i like its concept. Waiting for it to unfold more..!
Update the next soon. :)
Waiting waiting eagerly...! Zyada wait mat karwana.
Ab toh I guess i have commented enough big.Happy..?

Great job.
Keep it up.
All the best of luck.
Keep smiling and be happy and blessed.

Love-
Lakshita :)

Nice update

Oh my my

Hehehehe nandu slapped alya in return!
Aiyoo she kissed him infront of everyone!
Forest moment was cute
hot update coming up ummm waiting
update soon

Originally posted by: princypriya

nyc update yar

jst love it

morgnging talks of manan n romance

manik was to taking care of nandu

turth n dare

cabir n his rules

nandu kiss all r shock to see tht

nandu gt slap bt our nandu nt less then her

gve nice famous nandu slap tit for tat

mukiti dance

and hw nandu get convinced to come wth him out by famous manik idea

forest romance

mukti hug abhi was too cute

mukiti was on cloud on hereing abhi was bro for nandu

cabir never live chance to tease manan by unkowingly also

early waiting for manan parts

continue soon

tk care

thnks for pm

keep smiling

Super hit yaaar loved the update...

Its amazing always love ur update to the core and the romance va re wah its sooo cute and poor nandu got slap from aliya and y aliya is chipku always and feeling awkard regarding harshad noticing nandu