manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 5

Originally posted by: yashu_varshney

If u find it nice to give u feedbacks..than they will always be given by me..:) :)

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Hey

Great start

And part 1 and 2 were awesome as well

The story is really interesting

And Manik attracted towards Nandini at very 1st sight... Hmm...

But why does she sneak out in the night??

Cont soon and thanks for the pm

Wow...
Manik is so mesmerised by nandu whenever he meets her...
I loved how nandu's character is shaping up...
Its so different...
Awesome update...
Thnkz 4 the pm

awesome part...loved it a lot...manik 's curiosity to see nandu's face...awww so sweet...u penned it so beautifully...and the terrace scene was magical...keep up the good work
continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Wow...
Manik is so mesmerised by nandu whenever he meets her...
I loved how nandu's character is shaping up...
Its so different...
Awesome update...
Thnkz 4 the pm

😊😊😊

Originally posted by: aavani

awesome part...loved it a lot...manik 's curiosity to see nandu's face...awww so sweet...u penned it so beautifully...and the terrace scene was magical...keep up the good work
continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

Originally posted by: neeharika__

nyccc

update son :)

Nice awesome superb update

Manik is so lost in that girl and eager to find her but to his bad luck he couldn't but now he get to see her face and he was totally mesmerized by her and cant seems to take his eyes off her

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: HTA111

Nice awesome superb update

Manik is so lost in that girl and eager to find her but to his bad luck he couldn't but now he get to see her face and he was totally mesmerized by her and cant seems to take his eyes off her

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Aawww...such a cute update it was... 😳
I was literally smiling on seeing manik's condition 😊
Nandu is very chul uli, naughty types 😆
It was awesome yrr..
Update soon dear 😊
Thanx for pm