manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 4

Originally posted by: manali9796

Awesome story. Egarly waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: gagan1deep

Oh my god.. Nice awsm... Plz update next part fast...

Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Lovely Update dear😊
Wait to see manan romantic scene😳
Thanks for the PM
Update soon
Take care dear😊

Originally posted by: asangel

Haha..lost mnk is awsmmm...supeb yr... plzz updt nxt prt fast

Originally posted by: yashu_varshney

Hey..

Interesting story..

Liked the idea..

Looking forward for the story..

I just wanna say a thing..plz don't mind haan..

I don't want to be rude or criticize u..

But write thoda carefully..

Jaise first u wrote they were having their brkfast then u said after finishing their dinner..

I hope u won't feel bad..

If u find me rude u can tell that..

Thanks for the pm..

Continue soon..

Keep writing..

Stay blessed..

Originally posted by: gagan1deep

Very swtt update..
I thnk nandu going to see firflies...
Thanx for the pm...
Keep shining nd smiling...
Lots of love...

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

That was awsome dear. Update soon

Originally posted by: parthnitiholics

ekksss...m really sory..it just slipped ...i will make sure

thnx for the feedback it really means alot...