manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 37

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Wah ji wah. Mst updt h.. Awsm h ji awsm.. Thnk u shnk u ji mjhe pm rkhne k lye.. Tussi chha gye ji:-D ;-)
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Originally posted by: pritivirman

Wah ji wah. Mst updt h.. Awsm h ji awsm.. Thnk u shnk u ji mjhe pm rkhne k lye.. Tussi chha gye ji:-D ;-)




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Part 9B

Manic was leaving from clg when saw nandini waiting for the auto...she is again back to her anger mode...aftr crying session...manik run towards her

m-hey...

nandu turn n look at him but ignore him still wait for the empty auto..

m-maine kaha hey...

n-maine shayad tune koi jawab nhi dia iska mtlb hai..m not intrsted in ur hi...

m-cant just keep r angr or hatred for me aside for few days...

n(angrily look at him with smerk)-what did u say...now u will tell me..ki mujhe kya karna hai...

m-mera mtlb vo nhi tha...mi bs ye kahne aya hai..we r going at my place place ryt...to u can come with me...

n-ur place y?? Kis khushi mein??(she totally forget she told manic they will reheas as manik's place)

m-if u r forgotten ..hum reheas mere place p krne wale hai..instaed of urs...coz navya and cabir waha...

nandini then remember she bit her tongue and close her eyes in frustration tat how can she forget..to cover up .-ha to maine kab kaha...mi auto se wahi ari ti...

m-really(surprised tone)-tumhe mera address pta hai..tum to james bond nikli yr...

n-what(confused..and angry)

m-i mean..mi ghr hi jara tha..sath chle...

n-qu..duniya k sare auto wale mar gaye hai..ya sare auto khrab ho gaye hai(smerk with angr)

m-tum bat bat p gussa q ho jati ho yr..mi ek simple si cheej kahi hai..ki hm dono ek hi jaga jare hai to sath chlte hai...

n-fine...lgta hai kismat hi khrb hai meri...(slowly)

m-what(confused)

n-nthig..chlo...

m-okk mein car leke ata h ...

nandini nodded aftr manic went she look at sky-god chahte kya ho mujhse...jis din se Mumbai ai hu..ye ladka urgghhh...bht maza hai na mujhe torture krne mi...waise hi sab kuch bht difficult hai...thnx to u...

meanwhile manic come in his bmwand stop in front of her...he got down..and open the door for her like a gentleman...indicated her to sit with a smile..but she ignore him and sit in car...manik to sit and and start their journey..but someone was watching them from somewhere

voice-manik...vo b ..itna seedha ban rha h ..chakkar kya hai...or ye ladki kaun h...pta lagana pdega...

navya and cabir went to murthy house..they kept their instruments which dey collect from clg liberary..t

na-aa.hmare room mein chle...waha aram se practice ho jaegi...

c-listen mein koi practice krne nhi aya hu...music tumhe banana hai..tum bnao..mein bs time pas krna hai..as per rules...so jo krna h kro...

na-or tum b sunlo hme is competition mein jeetna hai..or tumne koi gadbad kin a..to hm raghav sir or nyonika mam ko bol denge..smjhe...

c move towards na-tum mujhe blackmail kr ri ho...

na move backward-nhi hm bta rhe hai..meaning while her leg twisted and she was about to fall when cabr hold her by her waist...

c-careful...both lost in each other..when bell rings...they come our of their trance...and navya went to open the door...cabir shok his head n sit on sofa...

here abhi and mukti was at abhi's place they settle down and was trying to play some fushion when abhi said

a-see mukti..i don't have any hatered or don't want any revenge from u..but stay away from nandu...

mukti confuse-what do u mean...maine kya hai..n who r u to say this to me...

a-maine aj canteen mein dekha tha u poke ur leg in between her way jb vo gir rahi ti...

mu-vo waise hi bht giri hui h (slowly)

a-what ??

mu-mera mtlb h ...bacha sako to bacha lo use..usne manic ko thappad mara hai..n she have to pay for what she did...

a(consufed)-kaun manic...

mu-forget it..music banana hai ya mein jau...

a-ya...

thye started playing...

manan side

manic while driving -nandini tumhe beaches pasnd h ??

nandini-lost in her thought..

g-plss lets go na mujhe psnd hai...

b-yr itni humidity hai..nhi ..rehndo plss na baby...

g-u don't love me anymore...i hate u...huh

she went from there...

m-nandini...nandini come out of her thoughts...

n-tum car chalao...m not intrsted in talking to u...she take out her fon from her bag plug in earfons and started listening to music and close her eeys..resting her head on seat...

m(thought)-ye chahti kya hai mujhse...maine kya kar dia yr...kya mere naam mein koi kami hai...nhi nhi manic ...naam p to ladkia marti hai...or face...started checking his face..his eyes..nose..cheeks. ..thoda beared face ho gaya hai..shayad isliy..but yr I look more sexy in beared face...but yr ye b to soch she is different he look at her...and smile shok his face..aftr few mintues...they reach malhotra mansion...manik apply rogh breaks...so that nandini will come out from her sleep.nandu woke up with jerk...taking out earfons from her eyes

n-have u gone nuts..aise koi gadi rokta hai...

m-tumne kaha tha..tumse bt na kro..tumhe neend se jagana tha to...

n-u r impossible...both get out of the car..nandini shoked to see the mansion...look at the hpuse...manik smile seeing her shoked

m-ye mera ghr hai...

n(come out of her trance)-to mein kya kru...chle practice p concentrate kre...

m-ya...

they both entred the house..nandini was looking here nad there when bumped into nyonika

ny-what the hell is this..ye ladki yaha kya kr ri h ...

m-mi leke ayah u...

n-mam ap yaha...ye to

ny-ab tum mujhe btaogi mujhe kya krna hai...

n-no mam I mean.

Ny-u cheap middle class girl..u just get out from my house..mere clg mein ho..iska mtlb ye nhi mere ghr aogi...

m-nyonika..behave urself...hm yaha practice k liy h ..fushion concert...

nandini was confused how formally manic is talking to nyonika

n-manik..ye...

m-she is ...she is..my ..mom...

nandini was shoked beyond..space academy belongs to nyonika and manic is his son...she started relating things with each other...till then nyoonika left stomping her foot...

m-chle...

n-ek mint...

manic look at her confusingly-what?

n-tum space academy k owner k bte ho...

m-haa to...

n-now I get it..evrything...oh my god..i can I not see this...

m-what(confused) what r u talking about...

n-manglore mein jo hua jo tumne kia..uska bad tum satisfy nhi hui mujhe hurt krne mein..tumne apni mom se kaha ki..mujhe yaha admission de...isliy mere pas space letter aya tha...

manic was confused nodding no..about to speak but nandini didn't let him

n-fr jb tumhe laga prank kaise kro..to tumne ye fushion concert rkha...or mujhe pna partner bnwaya...shit...how can I be so stupid...maine kaise nhi dekha ye..or tumhare sath yaha agai tumhare ghr/...tumne cabir k stah plan kia hoga na...ki vo mere ghr jae..or mi yaha au...bolo...

pushing manic back-bolo mr. Malhotra...kya krna h bolo..koi hoga nahi nag hr mein.stil pushing him back

m -listen nandini/...

n-what listen h...what listen...kya prank krna h ab..or hurt krna baki hai kya...

m-shout on her hold her her on her back-listen to me...haa u r stupid..u r very stupid...

n-leav my hand(angrily)

m-no aj tumhe meri bat sunni pdegi...yes u said it ryt u r stupid..jo hmesha cheejo ko glt nazar se dekhti hoo...manglore mein maine kuch intenstionally nhi kia...na hi tumhe yaha bulaya...na ye fushion concert rkha hai...

n-achha n u think I will belive u...chhodo mere hath

m-no not this time...pehle listen to me...

nandini was struggling when manic leav her hand pick her on his sholder and take her to his room.

n-manik chhodo mujhe...achha nhi hoga..chhodo..she was beating struggling ...

manic in his roomput her down n lock the room..

n-manik ye kya battamezi hai jane do mujhe...

m-no(standing in fron of door)-pehle suno...or btao..q mujhe hmesha glt smjhti hoo...q aisa kya kr dia maine..us din manglore mi jo hua..mujhe nhi pta tha...maine aisa q bola..mi bs un bacho ko...

n-dont u dare to say their name...(anrily)

m-okk..but nandini mein kuch glt nhi kia..tumne mujhe thappad mara okk I again didn't said anything coz I desrv it..maine us din maglore mien glt kia tha...but Mumbai mi ane k bad..maine bad chaha tumhe thoda smile krwau..qki tumhara udass chahra nhi dekh skta mi...

n-mujhe kuch nhi sunna tumhe..na hi koi music bana ahai mujeh jane do...

m-nhi...tumhe smile krwana tumse frndship krna chahta hu..tum jo angr face dikhati ho vo tum nhi ho nandini...plsss..u can share it with me..i cant see u like this...

nadnini get more angry hold his collar-q..q btau mi tumhe kuchh..lagte kya ho tum mere...kuch nhi mere manic malhotra..kuch nhi lagte tum mere...or tum chahte ho tumse sab kuch share kro jisse ki vo tum mere against use kro...

m-andini...mein tumhara frnd banna chahta hu bs...

n-q...nhi banna mujhe kisi ka dost...(leaving his collar..move backwad)..pehle dost banoge fr...jo har ladka krta hai vo kroge hai na..kya chahte ho tum ..btao..kya chaiy mujhe...

m-nandini..

n-ek mint I no what u want..

nandini come close to him...hold his collar...move towards his lips...to kiss him-tumhe ye hi chaiy na..har ladke kit rah...u can have it..n leav my way..manik push her back a little

m-nandini r u out of ur mind..tum frse mjhse glt smjh ri ho...ha mi tumse frndship krna chahta hu..but ye sab..nhi nandini...

n-to q krni h frndship..dekho mr..mjhe koi frndship nhi krni tumse smjhe...mi yaha Mumbai mi apni am ski waja se ai hu verna..

m-verna nhi ati tum..pta h ..mi vo hi janna chahta h q nhi ana chahti hai..aisa kya hi jot um apne andr chupa k baiti hu...jiski waja se meri frndship or mere motives ko tum glt leri hoo...

n-mi kisi ko kuch nhi btana chahti ...or tumhe to bilkul nhi...smjhe...

nandini sit on bed tear flowing continuously from her eyes..manik went to her bend on his knees about to clear her tears when nandini hld his hand-dont u dare to touch me..mujhe tumhari sympathy...or kisi ki jarurt nhi h mere asu pochhne ki...

m-nandini mi bs tumhe dosti krna chahta hu..

n-q...q krni h tumhe dosti..jb mujhe nhi krni...

manic not gtting what to say...when something stuck in his mind close his close n see her-cabir k liy...

n got confuse-cabir k liy...kya mtlb h tumhara...

m-vo..voo cabir..navya se pyar krta hai...or cabir or navya ko milwane k liy...mujhe tumahri jarurt hai..u no..hmne pglpanti mein...navya k sath jo kia..but ab hm sab gulti hai..qki...qki cabir..ab use pyar...

n-pyar is jsut bullshit...i don't belive u...or mi apni frnds ko is daldal mein nhi jane dungi..smjhe..u bettr stay away from her...

m-but mere dost pya krt ah use..usne kabhi aisa feel nhi kia kisi k liy...plsss(made puppy face..begging in front of her)

naidni once melted but still maintain stubborn face-but mai kaise manu kit um sach kah rhe h..akhir ho to tum Mumbai se hi..

m-are to Mumbai s hu mtlb...kya pyar nhi kr skta...

nandu keep aside her thoughts...-but meri frnd nhi krti...

m-krti h..but use realise nhi h ..jbhi to cabr ko leke ghr gai h...jisse use or jaan sake...

nandu lost in her own thoughts...

m-kya hua(seeing her lost)

n-navya se bt krne se pehle mujhe cabir se is bare mein bt krni h ...

m-what(shoked)..shit..i mean..mi kah rha ho na...

n-i don't belive u..mi pehle khud dekhungi...

m-okk...(gulping his throat) beta manic tu to gaya..cabir tjhe nhi chhodega...

n-kya

m-kuch nhi...

n-mi cabir ko notice krugi...but tum use nhi btaoge..ki tumne mjhe btaya hai...mi secretly use obsrve krugi..agr mein satisfy hui to hi navya se bt krug..or agr tum glt nikle to...tum jante nhi mi kya krugi...

m-okk

n-promise...forwarding her hand...or promise todne wale mujeh psnd nhi ...

manic gulp old her hand-promise...nhi btaunga...beta manic get ready to dig ur own grave..dono traf se fas gaya...

n-mi navya se or tum fab 5 se ye bt chhupaoge ki tumne mujhe btaya hai...fr hm iske upar work krenge ek br mi satisfy ho jau..qki girls bht jaldi kisi k trap mi ajati hai..fr vo hi hurt hoti h (lost)

m(to himself)-m sory ..nandini...maine tumhe trap kia...but trust me..tumhare face p smile lane k lyi kia hai..jo tum chupa rahi ho jb tk vo apne dil or dimag se nikalogi nhi..tum ..kabhi has nhi paogi...

n-or ha(manic come out of his trance)..iska mtlb ye nhi h hm frnds hai...mi apne frnds itni jldi nhi bananti...hm ek team h...thats it...

m-okk cool...

thye started making music...

precap:

nandini and abhi was walking in space academy cooriior when nandini bump into someone

n-sory sory...nandu lok at the person she bumped into...and went numb...that person about to say a word when abhi come between them

a-dont u dare..and take nandu with him

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing
Awesome update
Eagerly waiting for the next part
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice but I think an cabir has really fallen for navya n waiting for manans love story only manik can heal her update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Who is that new entry...Awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. Superbb updates
Manan cute fights.. Haha
Loved it...cabir love navya?? It's going to be very interesting... Eagerly waiting for next update
Thank uh for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
raaz raaz aur raaz
kholdo ab toi
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing ..

wow unconditional love it penned it so good ..

when nandani will come to knw the truth bas manik ko punch na pade ..
warna bichara phele char thapad kha chuka hai..

waiting for the next update ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
god man she is sch a stubbornhead n rude girl 😡 not liking her attitude at all bt bichara manik 😊 seruxly he digged his own grave bt letting cabira in his jamela lol 😆 😆 bt really he loves her deeply n only want smile on her face which she cant c plzz update itx nxt chp soon as precap left me curious 😊

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