manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 26

Amazing.
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p
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mesmerizing.

hilarious I read it in one go Thnk for the pm..

love it to core..
starting was amazing ...
bichara manik ki thi lagaie 3 slaps but no reaction ...
pyaar me insan anda bhera hojata hai .
seriously manik ur stars r not with u ...
cabir mukthi is superb manik kisi ke love story me itne problem kaise hosakte hai tu kya khake paida hua tha it was really funny .
I hope mujhe mata hota ..
while reading I was like 🤣

some part was so heart touching I love it I must say u r a brilliant writer ...

waiting
cont soon

Amazing.
s
u
p
e
r
b
mesmerizing.

hilarious I read it in one go Thnk for the pm..

love it to core..
starting was amazing ...
bichara manik ki thi lagaie 3 slaps but no reaction ...
pyaar me insan anda bhera hojata hai .
seriously manik ur stars r not with u ...
cabir mukthi is superb manik kisi ke love story me itne problem kaise hosakte hai tu kya khake paida hua tha it was really funny .
I hope mujhe mata hota ..
while reading I was like

Nice story...read all d prts in 1 go although I hv xm 2mro..
Wht is d mystry behind nandu..?? N gtng vry -ve vibes.. I think smthng vry bad hpnd wth hr in mumbi...don't kno why but I think c ws assaultd...
If nt dat dn smthng vry mjr hpnd dat chngd hr soo much...

Nandu slapd manik thrice n he said nthng... wow...
I jst hope manik bcms sucsful in slvng d mystry n brings d bubbly n hpy nandu bck...

Precap seems intrstng...
Plz uplod d nxt prt soon...

N ya.. thnx fr d buddy req...othrwis I would hv misses rdng such n awsm ff..
Gud job done...carry on...
N plz gv usalamba wala updt nxt tim...
Wl b waitng fr d nxt prt...
Continue soon...

Nice...

Wow that was awesome chapter
N MANIK n cabir convo was hilarious
I can't wait to read more
Continue soon

awesome update...

Oh god...
Manik ko ek aur thappad...
He got everything for her bt she burnt them... Why
Who is her past and what happ??
Amms ne bheja nandu ki mumbai...
Update soon...
I wanna see manik n nandu binding together...
Thnkz 4 the pm