manan ff: holds the key to my heart?? part 12 page 70 (19th march 2016 - Page 27

Originally posted by: crazydreamer

Yaar parts me aise shock naa diya kro ek din padhte padhte marr jaaungi...
sorry but this part is good as only emotions are there which always reacted me 😔
but i love the precape as u say Manan will be partners then i surely wait for that update as soon as possible 😉 😊
tc ty for pm

Originally posted by: lovlytuli

hi,i'm a new reader of ur story...

bt i like it as soon as i read its 1st part...

its a interesting story...n unique too...

majnu manik is very cute...

ty fr pm,,n cont soon with next part...

Originally posted by: Danny92

Nice update

Manik is tryng to impress nandu

But y is she behavng like that wat happend in her past hope u reveal her past soonnn

Manik again gotva slap

Continue sooonn

Originally posted by: apps33

awesome update...

now we can somewhat makeout the reason behind her harsh behaviour...

i really wanna know how manik handles her now

cont soon

Originally posted by: cutypie04

Fab update dea. ...

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Such a

Nice update

Continue soon

And thanks for pm

Love

Diya😛

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

wow!!! LOVELY update... i jus loved it...tnqu sooo muchh for such a wonderful story...u penned it soo nicely...must say that u blessed with ur writing skill..hats off dea
again nandu ne manik ko thappad maara...hahahaha..but nandu ka past kya hai? aise kya hua hai past jo itni nafrat karthi hai mumbai se...m curious to know the past...plss i don want to read rape scene...plsss dont write rape scene..n update soon...waiting for ur update
keep writing..TC

LOADS OF LOVE