FOREVER AND LONGER - MaNan FF ch1 pg2 updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HERE I AM WITH A NEW IDEA, DO TELL ME YOUR THOUGHTS!!😊😃😳




PREFACE

He was the frost that burnt her, he was the gravity that made her fly. He was her death, but nothing made her feel more alive.

Whenever someone asked her about what she saw in him, she would smile and look away. She knew, if she told them, they would fall in love with him too.

She not only fell in love with him, she fell and shattered. Her love was fierce and invincible. She gave every fibre of her being and the unseen soul to him, open raw.

She drowned in his ocean, and breathed his love alone.

But now, he's gone, long gone.

She waits thinking she could see his reflection in her mirror again. She waits thinking she could wake up in the morning feeling his warm breath gently tickling her face again. She waits thinking she could hear his car's honk before her front door as desperate as her heartbeats.

He was the sadness that made her smile, a pleasure that tortured. And She was the scream that never was heard.

Her scars were now only blemishes,

Her blood which ran stale, now was juvenile,

But it still had the taste of her tears.

There is a place in her where his fingerprints still rest, his kisses still linger, where his whispers still echo. There is a place where a part of him will forever be a part of her.

He was still the reason she placed a semi colon instead of a full stop.

I don't really know what love is.

But all I know is that there are some smiles you never get tired of seeing, some hands you never want to let go of, some memories you never get bored recalling , some presences you can never get enough of, and some absences that hurt too much to ignore.

Believe in everything he feels,

His love is like the wind, breathe him in,

Let it take you away,

And give you life.

There are many kinds of love in this world, but never the same love twice. There are some infinities that are longer than forever.

So was her love.

Their love could never be defined, because to define, is to limit.


INDEX

CHAPTER 1- PAGE 2



Edited by vihaa - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
vihuuu...baby...u started a new story. WOW!!!
i SO WAS WAITING FR DIS MAN...d magician is back!!
waiting fr dis...cause i knw by know d whole forum is aware of ur brilliance n u dnt need our opinions on any of ur stories cause we wait fr it like crazy...udate soon. loved it to d core!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
WOW...awesome plzzz continue...and pm me when you do so otherwise I'll start crying ; ( and Manik???? Is he????well we'll find that out i shouldn't be making stupid assumptions.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Wow new stry...
Awesome vihara...
Pls don't soon.. Manik shouldn't b dead.. Is he😭
Continue soon..
N ha pls continue a long yr too😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yepiees you started a new story
I just loved the preface
You really know how to play with words
Cont soon
Plz pm me ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice preface...looking forward to first chap...pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
welcome back dear...
nyc concept...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You write such brilliant stories, pasand na ane ki to gunjaaish hi nai hai 🤣
The prologue is way too beautiful 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful !!!!!!!😊
Really Love your stories a lot😛😛
I am happy that u came up it another story
You are awesome writer👏
Cont soon
Edited by NAVYA64 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Don't know if I mentioned before.. I am a big fan of ur writing! Love the magic that you create with words..👏

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