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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 67 :

MALHOTRA MANSION (1 30 PM) :

MANIK DAD : aap samaj kyu nahi rahe hain bukar badtha jara hain aur adha ganta hua hain apko inform karke lekin aap ab thak gar nahi pahunche

DOCTER : relax mr malhotra main bas thodi der main pahuntha hu

MANIK DAD : aap jaldi ki jiye

Nandini reaches there & goes inside

Ayyappaa ye gar kitna bada hain kitna sundar hain agar ye mera gar hotha na tho main shayad kabi gar se bahar nikalthi hi nahi vaise yaha koyi dikayi kyu nahi dera hain

SERVANT : jee aap kaun

NANDINI : jee main nandini hoon

SERVANT : aapko kisi se milna hain kya

NANDINI : haan mujhe apke saab se milna hain

SERVANT : aap yaha baitiye main unhe bulake latha hoon

NANDINI : jee teek hain

He goes up to manik room and
"Saab aap se milne koyi aaya hain"

MANIK DAD : mujhse???

SERVANT : jee haan unhone kaha ki unhe saab se milna hain

MANIK DAD : acha usne naam bathaya kya apna

SERVANT : jee wo uska naam wo

MANIK DAD : kair chodo use intezar karne ko kaho main atha hoon

SERVANT : jee and leaves down to nandini and informs her to wait and gets busy in his work.

She waits for 15 minutes and gets angry. She looks around and then finding no one starts walking towards upwards. She sees here and there and gets confused and goes infront of manik room but doesn't notice him. Manik dad sees her shadow and goes out searching for her thinking that it might be docter. He goes in different direction while nandini getting confused turns back and again starts walking in same direction she came. She slowly walks looking at paintings of the wall & suddenly sees manik lying on bed. She doesnt see his face completely and so peeps from door to have a look. She slowly goes inside and seeing guitar lying next to him understands that it is manik.

NANDINI : main vaha itni der se intezar karri hoon aur ye janab yaha chain ki neendh sore hain yaha isse tho main chodungi nahi

She stands a little bit far and starts calling his name. He doesn't respond so she walks little closer and again starts calling him.

NANDINI : dekho manik mujhe patha hain tum natak karre ho bahuth hogaya haa ab chelo uto manik manikkk

He doesn't say anything so she gets angry and goes and starts hitting his back. He still doesn't move so she makes him sleep straight making his face turn towards her.

NANDINI : manik ab thapad kaoge manik manik teek hain tum aise nahi manoge na and slaps slightly
On his cheek.

manik and touches his cheek and then his forehead. Ye tho kitna garam hain lagtha hain bahuth thez bukar hain and quickly runs down again and sees the same servant.

NANDINI : suniye mujhe garam pani aur ek kapda dijiye

SERVANT : par kyu apko tho maine

NANDINI : dekhiye aap ye sab baad main puchiye philal mujhe pani aur kapda dijiye please jaldi

SERVANT : jee and brings her and gives a bowl of warm water and piece of cloth.

NANDINI : thank you and moves quickly from there.

SERVANT : arrey par suniye aap upar kaha suniye suniye

MANIK DAD : suno ye ladki kaun hi aur usse upar kyu jane diya

SERVANT : jee ye vahi ladki hain jiske baare mai maine thodi der pehle aapko bathaya hain

MANIK DAD : matlab

SERVANT : aap se kaha tha na ki koyi mujhse saab se milne ke bare mani puchri thi ye vahi ladki hain

MANIK DAD POV : main tho kisi aisi ladki ko jantha nahi hoon tho phir ye hain kon

SERVANT : main unhe neche bulake latha hoon

MANIK DAD : nahi teek hain main usse upar hi miltha hoon aur suno agar docter aaye tho upar chote saab ke kamre main lekar aana

SERVANT : jee

Manik dad starts to walk towards manik room.

MANIK ROOM :

Nandini sits close to manik. She takes the cloth and dips it in water. She places it on maniks forehead and holds it for sometime. She have tears in her eyes. She sees him and her tears start rolling down. Manik dad reaches near room but seeing nandini stops at door.

Nandini removes the cloth from his forehead and again dips it in water and again places it on his forehead. She was crying badly and ye sab meri vajah se hua agar kal main tumhe sahi time par gar bej dethi tho tumhe itna bukar atha hi nahi main ne kaha tha ki tumhe rest ki zarurath hain par tum and closes her eyes tightly crying. He slowly murmers nandiniii. She opens her eyes and haan manik main yahi par hoon. He again calls her name and she assures him that she will stay with him and doesn't go anywhere. She places his forehead on her lap and continuous to wet the cloth and place it on his forehead.

Manik dad watches this and gets relieved knowing that she was nandini and feels happy too that she was taking care of him very well. He gets a call from docter and

MANIK DAD : hellooo

DOCTER : jee mr malhotra am really sorry kuch emergency agaya tha tho isliye der hogayi par main ab nikla hoon thodi der main apke gar pahunchunga

MANIK DAD : jee thnx par ab apko ane ki zarurath nahi hain

DOCTER : kyu davayi dedi aapne

MANIK DAD : jee usse davayi nahi par jo chahiye thi wo mil gaya hain tho am sure jaldi teek ho jayega

DOCTER : main kuch samja nahi par kair teek hain ap kehre hain tho main nahi atha hoon

MANIK DAD : thank you and cuts the call.

Nandini repeats the same process of weting the cloth and placing it on manik forehead for almost half an hour. Manik dad too stands beside door all the time and watches her silently.

Nandini touches his forehead and bukar tho kam ho gaya hain. She places the cloth aside and holds his hand. She kisses his forehead and closes her eyes placing her head on his shoulder. Manik dad smiles looking them and he too closes his eyes leaning back to the wall.

Manik slowly opens his eyes and sees nandini. He smiles and just continues to look her for sometime. A servant comes near the room and sees manik dad standing outside room.

SERVANT : Saab

Manik dad opens his eyes and says him to stay silent. Servant tries to come forward and while walking makes sound due to which nandini opens her eyes. Manik dad simply pulls the server and says him to leave silently. He slowly looks inside room.

Nandini looks manik and he looks her back smiling. She touches his forehead,cheeks and neck.

MANIK : main teek hoon

Nandini doesn't say anything and simply moves his head from her lap and keep it on bed.

MANIK : kya hua

She doesn't say anything & gets up.

MANIK : nandini

She pours water in glass and take out a tablet and gives it to manik.

MANIK : pehle tum mujhse bath karo aur agar tum nahi karogi na main ye nahi lunga

She simply keeps it aside on table and starts walking taking her bag. He holds her hand and

MANIK : acha achaa wait main letha hoon

She stops and looks down

MANIK : arrey baito tho sahi

She doesnt reply and he pulls her and makes her sit beside him. He takes the tablet & drinks the water.

MANIK : happy

Nandini still doesn't say anything and looks down

MANIK : ye neche kya dekhri ho look at me

She doesn't look him and still continues to look down

MANIK : nandiniii and makes her look him placing his index finger on her chin. Her eyes were red with tears and as soon as he lifted her head tears rolled down.

MANIK : nandu and wipes her tears. He cups her face and please stop crying. She doesn't say anything & continues to cry. He again wipes her tears and arrey baba mujhe kuch nahi hua hain main teek hoon and pulls her close into a hug. She too hugs him back tightly and closes her eyes. His shirt becomes wet due to her tears.

MANIK : arrey itna kya rori ho yar
Mar nahi gaya hoon zinda hoon aur teek bi hoon

She breaks the hug and starts hitting him hard how dare you say that haa how dare you.

MANIK : arrey stop na lagri hain aur maine galath kya kaha hain maine tho bas ye bola ki main mara nahi hoon aur

Nandini gets angry and hits him even more harder saying phirse phirse wohi bolre hoo samaj nahi aata kya tumhe aise nahi bolte hai and hits him continuously

MANIK : ouch ouch lagri yar sach main zor se stop na arrey nandini please teek hain am sorry phirse nahi kahunga

She stops hitting him and sits silently turning her face.

MANIK : listen ek bar mujhe dekho na

Nandini doesn't look him and he goes on pleeding so she slowly turns her face and looks him.

MANIK : pareshan thi na mere liye

NANDINI : nahi nahi main tho nachri thi tumhe dekhe

Manik holds his ears & chorry naa

NANDINI : nahi chahiye tumhara sry

MANIK : arrey baba sry bolra hoon na aur vaise bi jo hoga so hogaya ab uske bare main jagadke kya phaida

NANDINI : kya hogaya so hogaya haa patha bi hain tumhe kitna bukar tha aur tumhari halath kya thi kuch der pehle

MANIK : haan tho agar mujhe bukar athi hain tho us main meri kya galthi hai main ne khud thodi usse invitation dekar bulaya hain ki aao meri halath karab karo ha

NANDINI : it's not all funny and turns her head again

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : maine kaha tha ki tumhe rest ki zarurath hain par nahi gar nahi jana tha tumhe gumna tha sari rath aur teek bi hain na tumne meri bath suni hi kab hain

MANIK : dekho ye galath bath hain mai hamesha tumhare bath suntha hoon aur uska proof bi hain

Nandini looks him seriously and he continuous main ab bi chup chap tumhari bath sunra hoon tho isse badi proof aur kya hosakthi hain

NANDINI : tum zyada smart bano math aur ek bath batao kal rath gar aane ke baad tumne davayi kyu nahi li maine kaha tha na tumhe davayi lene ko

MANIK : tumhe kisne bathaya ki maine davayi nahi li hain

NANDINI : kisiko bathane ki zarurath nahi hain tumhare halath dekh kar koyi bi batha saktha hai ki tumne davayi nahi li hain

MANIK : ooo

NANDINI : maine pucha tumne davayi kyu nahi li hain

MANIK : bhul gaya yar teek hain na

NANDINI : manik kuch teek nahi hain tum janthe nahi hoon main kitna dar gayi thi tum mera call nahi utare the message ka reply nahi dere the patha nahi mere dimag main kya kya chelra tha aur jab main yaha ake tumhe dekha tho tum tho tum tho & closes her eyes

Manik gets down and sits on his knees before nandini. He holds her hands and she opens her eyes and looks him. He looks her and baby am sorry main sach main nahi jantha tha ki mujhe itni tez bukar ho jayegi kyuki kal rath bi main bilkul teek tha aur ache se so bi gaya tha par patha nahi ye bukar kab ched gaya and am really sorry ki maine tumhare messages aur call ki reply nahi di par tum bi janthi ho agar main teek ho tha tho aisa bilkul nahi kartha

NANDINI : manik promise me ki tum age se apna pura dyan rakhoge

MANIK : arrey kitne promises karvaogi

NANDINI : manik please tumhe bilkul nahi patha main kaise feel kari thi tumhe uss halath main dekhe mujhe tho sochke hi dar lagra hain ki agar tumhe kuch ho jatha tho tho nahi manik mai mai

MANIK : okkk okkk hold on I promise ki main age se apna pura dyan rakhunga hmmm

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : vaise bi tum bi tho hamesha mere sath hi hogi na mere kayal rakhne ke liye hmm hogi na??

NANDINI : haan hamesha

Manik smiles and hugs her saying hamesha.

Manik dad have tears seeing all this he looks up and says thank you to god. He once again quickly have a glance of manan & leaves smiling.
Edited by anu22sweety - 10 years ago
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PART 68 :

Manan break the hug and look each other.

MANIK : maine bahuth rulaya na tumhe

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : but you know what I can make it up for you

NANDINI : achaaa

MANIK : haan and pulls her close

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : shhh

They both were inches apart and manik closes his eyes leaning more forward. She pushes him & gets up

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : chup yahi par rehna aur kahi hilna math

MANIK : par kyu

NANDINI : jitna kaha hain sirf utna karo and turns back and starts walking

MANIK : arrey kaha jari hoon

NANDINI : panch minute bas abhi ayi

MANIK : ruko main bi ara hoon

NANDINI : no way just stay in the room

MANIK : arrey par nandini

NANDINI : mujhe kuch sunayi nahi dera

He smiles and she runs down.

She sees a servant and asks him where the kitchen was.

SERVANT : jee par kyu

NANDINI : mujhe apke saab ke liye kuch banana hain

SERVANT : aap mujhe keh dijiye main bana dunga

NANDINI : nahi nahi bayya aap mujhe kitchen thak lejayiye main khud bana lungi

MANIK : bilkul nahi

She turns back and looks manik

NANDINI : tum neeche kaise aye

MANIK : main neche aise aaya and walks towards her and smiles

Servant laughs seeing this but immediately stops seeing nandu in angry mode.

NANDINI : mera matlab wo nahi tha maine tumhe kamre main hi rehne ko bola tha na

MANIK : haan tho maine bi bola na ki main bi neche ara hoon

NANDINI : tum abhi ke abhi upar jao

MANIK : nahi

NANDINI : manik leave to your room right now

MANIK : maine kaha na nahi

NANDINI : phirse maar kani hain??

Servant gets shocked and opens his mouth.

Manik comes closer and whispers in nandu ear "suno vo mera noukar hain tum ye sab bathe uske samne math karo"

NANDINI : bayya aap janthe hain aapke sab ne kitni baar mere hath se thapad kaya hain

Servants nods his head as no still being in shock.

MANIK : listen just stop it

NANDINI : main bathathi hoon na bayya pehli bar jab

MANIK : what do you want

Nandini turns to him and gives a naughty smile.

MANIK : tum yaha kade hoke hamari bathe kya sunre ho kaam nahi hain kya jao yaha se aur apna kaam karo

NANDINI : hoo hello tum unse aise bath nahi karsakthe aur ye tum kya hain

MANIK : what

NANDINI : bayya aap ka naam kya hain

SERVANT : jee ramu

NANDINI : manik tum unhe ramu bulaoge

MANIK : seriously

NANDINI : haan seriously agar koyi tumse bada ho tho unhe kaka bulana aur tumhare age ke ho ya usse chote tho unhe naam se bulana

MANIK : lekin iski kya zarurath hain

NANDINI : tum bulaoge ya nahi

MANIK : arrey par

NANDINI : haan ya nahi

MANIK : ramu tum jao

Nandini and ramu both smile.

NANDINI : nahi bayya rukiye

MANIK : ab kya problem hain

NANDINI : problem kuch bi nahi hain tum jao upar main abi aayi

MANIK : arrey par tum bathado na tumhe kya chahiye

NANDINI : bathaya tho hain ki mujhe kitchen main Jana hain

MANIK : tum kitchen main jake kya karogi itne sare log hain yaha unhe bathao na

NANDINI : nahi main karlungi tum jao na

MANIK : nahi chelo mere sath upar nahi tho main yahi kada rahunga

Ramu will be confused seeing both of them and at the same time manik dad too stands in front of his room & enjoys a lot watching them.

NANDINI : bayya main kehri thi na ki apke saab ne pehli baar wo

MANIK : fine am going

Nandini smiles and points towards stairs. Manik gives her a serious look and leaves saying her to come soon. She goes to kitchen and quickly prepares soup. She serves it in bowl and leaves to manik room along with it.

Manik was sitting in balcony and staring outside simply.

NANDINI : cough cough

MANIK : hoo so finally time mil gaya vapas ane ka

NANDINI : arrey I just took 20 min naa

MANIK : haan kitna kam hain na ek kaam karo tum dubara kitchen jao aur ek gante ke baad vapas aana

NANDINI : very bad idea acha wo sab chodo chelo I made a soup so have it fast

MANIK : soup???

NANDINI : hmm chelo cehlo get up

They both sit on bed and nandini gives the bowl to manik.

MANIK : tumne isse pehle bi banaya na

NANDINI : haan kyu

MANIK : nahi jo log sab tumhare iss soup ko piya hain wo zinda tho hain na

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : arey chilla kyu rahi ho bas jana chahtha hoon I don't want to take any chance that's it

NANDINI : tum piyo hi math do mujhe and tries to take the bowl.

MANIK : acha acha sorry wait I'll taste and say you.

NANDINI : hmmm

He takes one spoon and makes his eyes big. Nandini watches him and gets nervous.

NANDINI : Kya hua teek nahi bana

Manik gulps looking her and then looks down.

NANDINI : kuch bolo na kaise bana

MANIK : unfortunately bahuth acha bana yaa and looks her and then starts laughing holding his stomach

NANDINI : you idiot and hits him.

MANIK : ok ok phirse shuru math hojana let me finish it first after that I'll come back to you.

NANDINI : haan

He enjoys a lot and saying yum yum he finishes half bowl with in seconds. She smiles seeing him and gets lost in him. He suddenly stops having it and offers nandu to have it.

NANDINI : you finish it na

MANIK : I know ki tumne bi kuch nahi kaya hoga so now common have it.

She smiles looking him and he brings the spoon close to her lips and makes her eat it. She just simply sits looking him & admiring him while he was feeding her soup.
Soon the bowl becomes empty and nandini puts some more soup in it.

MANIK : tumhe aur leni hain???

NANDINI : nahi tumhare liye

MANIK : maine tho nahi manga na

NANDINI : haan par main janthi hoon ki tumhe aur leni hain

MANIK : achaa aise kaise

She takes the spoon and placing it inside his mouth saying kyuki kal ke badh mujhe patha chel gaya hain ki tum bahuth kam kathe ho tho bas isliye I thought ki you know tumhe thoda aur zyada kilana chahiye

Manik smiles and taking spoon from her hands makes her eat with his hands saying vaise mujhe bi patha chel gaya hain ki khane ke vakth tum apna sara dyan apne upar se zyada mere upar lagathi hoon

Nandini smiles and in the same way they feed soup to each other talking and laughing.

NANDINI : chelo you go and fresh up I'll be back

MANIK : arrey phirse kaha jari ho

NANDINI : kayi nahi bas ye neche rake athi hoon

MANIK : arrey chill main kisiko bula lunga vo lekar jayega tumhe kayi Jane ki zarurath nahi hain

NANDINI : acha teek hain par tum jake pehle fresh ho jao

MANIK : nahi thodi der baad

NANDINI : its already 3 30 na so jao you will feel relaxed

MANIK : teek hain you just stay here

NANDINI : haan

Manik goes to washroom and nandu quickly runs down into kitchen once again.

NANDINI : isse pehle wo bahar nikle mujhe jaldi se isse banana hoga

She quickly finishes her work and goes back to manik room. She stands in the balcony and enjoys seeing the view outside.

Manik comes out and looks her. He smiles and slowly goes near her and places his arms around her waist. He nuzzles his nose on her neck and bites her earlobe.

NANDINI : manikkk

He makes her turn around and pulls her close to him. She directly lands on his chest closing her eyes due to his strong pull. Water droplets fall on her face due to which she slowly opens her eyes. She finds water droplets all around his chest. She slowly moves back and looks him from top to bottom.

He was just wrapped in towel around his waist. His hairs were fully wet and water droplets were falling from his hairs which were passing from his neck to chest and from chest to down till his bare stamoch.

She opens her mouth in perfect "o" looking him and couldn't dare to take off her eyes from him. She was just looking him forgetting everything. He smiles seeing her expression and continues to look her with out saying anything. They both stand like that for some time staring each other.

MANIK : ehem ehem I know ki main hot hoon par khud par thoda control rako nandini

She come out of her senses and looks down blushing.

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : tum aise kyu matlab

MANIK : arrey you only said me to fresh up na tho bas and shakes his head close to her making water droplets fall on her.

NANDINI : manikkk kya kare hoon

MANIK : arrey maine tho kuch karna shuru bi nahi kiya aur tum abi se ye sawal puchre hoon

NANDINI : manik chodo na

MANIK : nahi na and brushes his nose on her cheek

NANDINI : manikkk!!!!!!!

He places a soft petal like kiss on her cheek and hugs her tightly. She gets shivers since he was wet and he smiles knowing what expression she might have on her face. He hugs her more tightly and this time she too responds by hugging him back tightly. She smiles and slowly standing on her tips places a kiss on his neck. He blushes and caresses her back. She nuzzels her nose on his neck and then brushes her lips on his ear. He smiles and pulls back himself. He turns totally red and nandini was just loving that colour on him. She smiles and to make him more blush slowly places her hands on his waist and kisses his heart.

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : kyaa hua manik

Manik smiles and understands that she was wantedly torturing him. He looks her and giving a naughty smile places his hands on hers and slowly moves them from his chest down to his stomach. She makes her eyes widened and gulps.

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : kya hua nandini and winks

She smiles and nodding her neck as no pushes him and runs out. He too follows her and stops her from going out.

NANDINI : dekho manik mujhe jane do

MANIK : haan tho jao na maine kaha pakda hain tumhe

NANDINI : tum agar mere raste se hatoge tho main cheli jaongi

MANIK : wo tho nahi hoga mujhse

NANDINI : manik please

He slowly starts walking towards her and she slowly starts moving back.

NANDINI : manik ham tumhare gar pe hain aur ye tumhara kamra hain tho isliye dekho

MANIK : haan actually you are right

NANDINI : hain na

MANIK : sach main jab gar bi mera aur kamra bi mera tho phir der kis bath ki ha

NANDINI : manikkk

He quickly runs towards her and pulls her close. She closes her eyes tightly placing her hands on his chest.

MANIK : kyaa hua thodi der pehle masthi sujri thi na tho phir ab kya hogaye

She slowly opens her eyes and looks him. He raises his eyebrows and ask as what. She turns her face and bites her lower lip. He smiles and pecks on her lips.

MANIK : next time don't try to do that to me kyuki uske baad ke consequences kya honge woo tho tumhe hmmm and smiles

Nandini smiles looking down and then pushes him away.

NANDINI : I'll wait out

MANIK : nahi iski zarurath nahi hain

She looks him again making her eyes widened thinking that he might change in front of her.

MANIK : nahi madam jo tum sochri ho na usse mujhe koyi problem nahi hain par main jantha hoon ki tum comfortable nahi hogi isliye you stay here I will change in washroom and come.

Nandini smiles looking him & he too smile at her and goes to change
He come out and stands before mirror combing his hair.

NANDINI : ye lo

MANIK : kyaa

NANDINI : arrey look here na phir patha chelega kya hain

Manik turns back and sees a glass in her hand. He makes a disgusted face and nodding his head as no moves back.

MANIK : no way nandini nahi bilkul nahi ye main nahi pene vala

NANDINI : manik ye kya bacho jaise behave kare ho ye tho sirf

MANIK : agar tumhe ye bacho vali behaviour lagthi hain tho teek hain main bacha hi hoon aur main phirse bolra hoon ye main nahi pene vala hoon

NANDINI : hooo tho manik malhotra bacha hain wowww sach main matlab mujhe tho ab bahuth kush ho jana chahiye patha hain mujhe bache na bahuth pasand hain tho main tumhare sath bahuth enjoy kar sakthi hoon vaise tumhe konse kilone ache lagthe hai

MANIK : dekho main jantha hoon tum meri tang kenchri ho par dekho tum kuch bi karlo main ye nahi pene vala hoon

NANDINI : manik ye sirf kaada hain tum aise kyu behave kare ho

MANIK : dekho pehle tho tum ye glass mere samne se hatao uske baad hum bath karenge

NANDINI : chelo ek kaam karthe hai main na tumhe ek offer dethi hoon aur

MANIK : kaisa offer

NANDINI : yaa tho tum ye kaada peke mujhe gar jane se roklo ya phir apni zid pe aise hi ade rehkar mujhe mere gar jathe hue dekhlo

MANIK : listen this is not done and walks towards her but nandini shows him the glass and says to drink it fast.

MANIK : you know what

NANDINI : what

MANIK : tumhe patha bi hain mai kya karne vala hoon

NANDINI : kyaaa

MANIK : 1 2 3 and

NANDINI : and

MANIK : and

NANDINI : and what

MANIK : and run and saying this runs out from the room

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : help help help

NANDINI : manik just stop

MANIK : bachao mujhe bachao

Manik dad hears his voice and runs out of his room panicking.

Manan will be running around whole hall from here to there and there to here.

NANDINI : manik tum chilla kyu rahe ho

MANIK : khud ko bachane ke liye

NANDINI : manikkk

Manik dad see this from up and starts laughing loud holding his stomach

MANIK : dekho tum time waste karri ho

NANDINI : exactly main bi tumhe vahi kehna chahthi hu stop running and drink this

MANIK : no way miss moorthy

NANDINI : where there is a will there is a way Mr malhotra

MANIK : listen stop trying and just throw it aside

NANDINI : this one will be throwed into your stomach samje

MANIK : ramu ramesh kaka sab kaha hain please mujhe bachao

NANDINI : are you mad ye kya kara hoon

All the servants reach hall and get shocked seeing manan running like mad people.

Manik goes behind servants and hides himself.

NANDINI : manik bahar niklo

MANIK : nahi tum pehle uss glass ko pek do

NANDINI : manik please ye health ke liye acha hain

MANIK : mera health bilkul teek hai

NANDINI : manik please isse pene se tumhe bukar nahi hoga

MANIK : nandini mujhe usse koyi farak nahi padtha

Nandini gets tired and leans to couch and dekho bahuth ho gaya ab bas ha

Manik too bends down holding his knees and haan ab mujhse bi aur nahi hoga

NANDINI : chelo ab isliye jaldi se peelo

MANIK : abi bi mera jawab wohi hai nahi nahi nahi

Manan will be facing opposite to each other and manik back was facing to his dad who was standing up and enjoying watching all this.

Manik dad comes down and slowly signals nandini that he will hold manik from back so that she can make him drink kaada.

Nandini smiles and keeps manik busy in talking and suddenly manik dad holds him from back tightly & nandu quickly runs towards him holding glass in hands.

Manik see his dad and before he could say anything nandu calls him.

NANDINI : ab kya karoge manik

MANIK : nandini nahi dekho nooo

NANDINI : manik ye tumhare health ke liye hain iss liye tumhe ye peena hi hoga

MANIK : nahi nandini dekho tum meri bath suno

NANDINI : shhh pehle isse peelo uske baad tumhe jo bolna hai wo bolo

MANIK : tum ye nahi kar sakthi

NANDINI : tumhare sehath ke liye main kuch bi kar sakthi hoon and brings glass near to him

MANIK : nanduuu nahi and moves his face left and right and left and right

NANDINI : manik sur hilana bandh karo main tumhe kaise pilaungi

MANIK : tum mujhe ye na pilasako isi liye tho main apna sur hilara hoon

Manik dad was just laughing seeing this and then "chodo beta ye nahi manega"

Manik turns his head back to say something but nandu holds his nose tightly and pulls him towards her and without giving him a second places the glass inside his mouth. Manik dad slowly loosens his grip and soon leaves him.He tries to move but knowing that nandu will again catch him accepts defeat and closing his eyes tightly and empties the glass. Except nandu all present there try hard to control their laugh by closing their mouths.

Nandu takes back glass from his mouth and manik opens his eyes shouting yukkk

NANDINI : sorryyy

Manik gives angry look to her and at same time manik dad bursts out laughing.

MANIK DAD : maza agaya sach main beta shekal dekhne ki layak thi iski

Nandini too starts laughing like mad remembering everything.

MANIK DAD : tum ne sach main bahuth bada kaam karke dikaya beta aur maine tho bahuth enjoy kiya aur iske liye ek high five tho bantha hain

NANDINI : jee bilkul and they both have an high five and fall on couch laughing loud holding their stomachs. All the people around them too loose their control and burst out laughing.

Manik looks every one angrily and sits beside manik dad. He starts hitting him shouting daddd just stop it.

Nandini gets shocked listening this and gets up with a jerk. She looks at them and dad?????
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PART 69 :

(Mohan is father of manik)

MANIK : kyaaa

NANDINI : yee matlab ye tumhare

MANIK : bina jane hi ki ye kaun hain thab se tum inke samne ye pura thamasha karri thi???

NANDINI : wooo mujhe laga ki

MANIK : kyaa laga tumhe haa jantha hoon ki mujh main bachpana hain par tumhe tumhe tho kayal rakhna chahiye na

MOHAN : manik

MANIK : ek minute dad main bath karra hoon aur tum jawab kyu nahi deri hoon haa

NANDINI : main ne socha

MANIK : kya socha ha koyi aise behave kartha kya bado ke samne main tho dad ko nahi dekh paya par tumne tho unhe pehle hi dekha na lekin phir bi apna thamasha bandh nahi kiya kyu kyu ki tumhe masti sujri thi ha

NANDINI : main tho bas

MANIK : main tho bas kya tumne sab bigad diya nandini kaha main dad ko surprise dekhar tumhe milvana chahtha tha aur kaha tum unke samne ye sab thamasha khada karke mere liye koyi mouka hi nahi choda tumhe unse milane ka and wow dad ko kya introduction diya hain tumne apne aapka sach main

Nandini have teary eyes and looks down.

MOHAN : bahuth hogaya manik bas kar

MANIK : nahi dad hamare samne ye sab kiya teek hain lekin agar iss vakth koyi aur gar main hotha tho kya sochtha

Nandini looks manik with sad face and sorry.

MANIK : what sorry ek sorry bolne se kya hoga ye jo sab tumne kiya wo teek ho saktha hain kyaa ek bar gar ka halath tho dekho muhje tho aise lagra hain ki main apne gar pe nahi balki kisi kachre ke dukan pe baita hoon

NANDINI : manik main sach mai
and stops

MANIK : nandiniii

MOHAN : shaitan kyu pareshan kartha hain isse

Nandini looks down silently without saying anything

MOHAN : beta tumhe udas hone ki bilkul zarurath nahi hain ye tho bas tumhari tang kinchra hain

MANIK : daddd

NANDINI : matlab

MOHAN : matlab ki ye pagal tumse badla lera haan tumne isse kaada pilaya na tho bas uske liye ye apna hisab barabar karra hain

Nandini looks manik and he bursts out laughing.

MANIK : tumhe kya laga ki mai sach main gussa hoon haa

Nandini looks him in anger and then turns her face towards mohan. "Uncle am sorry meri vajah se gar ka ye haal hua"

MOHAN : nahi beta iss main tumhari kya galthi ye sab tho iski vajah se hua hain agar ye chup chap kaada piletha tho tumhe uske peche baagne ki zarurath hi nahi padthi aur sorry to mujhe bolni chahiye kyu ki tumhe iss pagal ki vajah se patha nahi kya kya jelna padtha hain

NANDINI : uncle please aap aisa math boliye

MANIK : o hello ye ho kya raha hain haa seriously dad aap meri side leni ki vajah uski side lere hain

MOHAN : haan kyuki ye sahi hain aur tum galath

MANIK : I can't believe this seriously

MOHAN : ab jo sach hain wo sach hain vaise beta bahuth dino ke baad tumhari vajah se khusi ka mahol bana gar pe tho iske liye thank u aur aise hi gar par athe rehna

NANDINI : smiles and jee uncle aur

MOHAN : aaa ye uncle na mujhe kuch teek nahi lagra ek kaam karthe hain tum na mujhe uncle ki jagah papa kaho hmmm

Manik smiles and nandini looks him and then mohan and have tears in her eyes.

MOHAN : arrey nahi bulana chahthi ho tho teek hain na is main rone vali kya bath hain

Nandini smiles and hugs him and "Thank you so much papa". He smiles and "thank you to you too". Manik too hugs mohan from back keeping his head on his shoulder and placing his hands around nandu and "thank you to you two". Mohan kisses manik forehead and then nandus.They stay like that for some time closing their eyes and smiling.

All servants too smile seeing this beautiful scenery.

MANIK : ab kya sara din aise hi rehne ka irada hain ya aur bi kuch karna hain

They break the hug and nandini says that she will clean the hall.

MOHAN : nahi beta iski koyi zarurath nahi hain ramu ye sab teek kardena

RAMU : jee saab

NANDINI : papa main nikalthi hoon der hori hain

MANIK : nooo way tum kahi nahi jari ho

MOHAN : beta thodi der aur ruk jana please

NANDINI : nahi papa maine mom se kaha tha ki main jaldi aongi

MANIK : haan tho its just 4 30 na tum thodi der baad cheli jana

MOHAN : teek hain na manik ab se tho roj aana jana hoga iska kyu nandu

NANDINI : haan bilkul bayya upar kamre main mera bag hain aap zara usse neche layenge please

MANIK : bilkul nahi ramu tum kahi nahi jare ho aur dad ye kya bath huyi agar roj ana jana hoga tho teek hain na uske liye ab jaldi jane ki kya
Zarurath hain

MOHAN : vaise ye bath bi sahi hai

NANDINI : bayya aap please upar jayiye

MANIK : main yaha tumse hi bath karra hoon aur ye thab se tum mujhe jawab kyu nahi deri ho

NANDINI : papa please aap bayya ko boliyena mera bag lane ko

MANIK : tumhe sunayi nahi dera kya main kuch puchra hoon tumse

MOHAN : manik tuje dikh nahi raha hain wo gussa hain tujhpe is liye tujhse bath nahi karri hain

MANIK : kyu gussa tho mujhe hona chahiye us par ek tho itna doudaya aur upar se wo kada pilaya aur ab itni der se main usse bath karra hoon par madam meri shakal bi nahi dekhri hain

NANDINI : papa main nikalthi hoon bag baad main phir kabhi lejaungi

MOHAN : teek hain beta

MANIK : kya teek hain kuch teek nahi hain aur tum maine kaha na tum kahi nahi jari ho tho bas ab upar chelo mujhe tumse bath karni hain

NANDINI : byyy papa

MANIK : arreyy

Mohan smiles seeing manik face. Nandu starts moving but manik holds her hand and stops her.

MANIK : tum kahi nahi jari ho and tries to pulls her up but she holds couch and doesn't move

MOHAN : manik usse lag jayegi

Manik tries to remove her hands from couch but she holds it tightly. He places his hands on her waist and nandini immediately tries to removes them as all were watching them. Manik takes this as chance and simply takes her in his arms.

Everyone smiles while nandini feels damn shy and embarrassed too.

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : dad hum upar jare hain thodi der baad ake apse milenge aap thab thak thoda rest lijiye

MOHAN : teek hain

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : ramu agar koyi mujhse milne aye tho unse kehna ki main busy hoon

RAMU : jee saab

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : haan hogaya chelthe hain naaa

NANDINI : manik put me down

MANIK : jee nahi and starts climbing steps

Mohan smiles looking them and "bas aise hi rahe dono hamesha"

Manik soon enters the room and nandu will be giving him a angry look.

MANIK : what

NANDINI : tumhe sharam naam ki cheez hai bi ya nahi

MANIK : wo tho tum hi janthi ho and winks

NANDINI : manikkk neche kitne sare log the papa bi the tumhe sab ke samne mujhe utane ki kya zarurath thi sab kya sochre honge

MANIK : agar tum meri bath manthi tho mujhe tumhe utane ki zarurath nahi padthi aur vaise bi koyi bi kuch bi soche usse mujhe koyi farak nahi padtha

NANDINI : tum pagal hogaye ho

MANIK : tumhare liye

NANDINI : shut up patha nahi neche kya bath kare honge aur tumne ye kyu kaha ki koyi tumse milne aye tho unhe ye bataye ki tum busy ho

MANIK : kuch nahi bath kare honge aur maine wo sab isliye kaha kyuki main sach main busy hoon

NANDINI : busy tho ye hain tumhara kaam haa mujhe tho kitna irritating lagra hain ye sochke ki sab ke samne tumne aise mujhe

MANIK : ho tho sab sath the isliye tumhe irritatation hora hai

NANDINI : agar koyi sath na hotha tho bi mujhe irritation hi hothi

MANIK : are you sure kunki mujhe aise bilkul nahi lagtha ab tumhi dekho na room main ake itni der hogayi hain aur phir bi tum meri godh se uthar neka naam bi nahi leri hoo

Nandini realises that she was still in his arms and then looks him.

MANIK : smiles and kya hua

NANDINI : chodo mujhe

MANIK : chodunga jaldi kya hain

NANDINI : manik just put me down

MANIK : fine and puts her down

She immediately starts to move out but manik pulls her back and locks the door.

NANDINI : arrey lock kyu karre ho

MANIK : tumhe bagne nahi de saktha na

NANDINI : suno koyi dekega tho kya sochega just open the door na

MANIK : nooo

NANDINI : acha I won't go out please door kolo

MANIK : nope I can't take any chances

She gets angry and try to opens the look. He puts his hands on hers but she jerks them and tries again and again. Since she was small her hands were not reaching till up but even though she stands on her tips and tries to open it.

MANIK : bahuth hogaya chodo

NANDINI : nahi

He holds her waist to pulls her down but she goes on jumping to reach corner of door. Suddenly her top goes up and manik while trying to pull her down places his hands on her bare waist.

She makes her eyes widened and slowly moving her hands down stands straight. He doesn't remove his hands and slowly turns her to his side. She looks down not wanting to make any eye contact with him. He pulls her close and she looks him placing her hands on his chest. He slowly moves his hands upwards making her top go little more up. She closes her eyes. He places his fingers inside her top and starts caressesing her stomach. She bites her lower lip and feeling very shy removes his hands and starts to walk pushing him away. He smiles and holds her hand. He pulls her strongly and she collides with his chest facing her back to him. He leans on her shoulder and "mujhe mera reward chahiye". He turns her face towards him and brushes his nose on hers.

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : maine tumhare kehne par kaada piya na tho mujhe mera reward do

NANDINI : tumne mujhe rulaya na tho isliye reward cancel

MANIK : main tho bas mazak karra tha

NANDINI : par maine seriously liya

He nuzzels his nose on her cheek and chorryyy

NANDINI : nahi chahiye

She tries to push him away but holds her waist tightly. He pulls her closer and kisses her forehead.

NANDINI : manik chodo

MANIK : pehle reward do uske baad hi chodunga

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : reward

NANDINI : acha close your eyes

MANIK : nahi tum phirse cheating karogi

NANDINI : nahi karungi

MANIK : pakka na

NANDINI : haan haan pakka

Manik closes his eyes and nandu smiles seeing his cuteness. She goes near him and looks him smiling for some time and then quickly tries to peck his lips but manik opens his mouth and pulls her lips into his. She gets shocked and he opens his eyes and smiles at her reaction. He presses her waist tightly and she closes her eyes placing her hands around his neck. Though she gets shocked soon starts responding him back with equal force. Both were sucking each other's lips as hardly as they could with full passion. Nandini digged her fingers in Manik's hairs and started caressing them slowly.They were breathing heavily but manik didn't allowed her to break the kiss. They kissed for a while and he felt that she needed breath badly so he slowly breaks the kiss.

He moves a little back and looks her. Her eyes were still closed and her face was totally crimson red. He stood there admiring her beauty for sometime. He slowly leans on her forehead and "nandiniii". She wears a cute smile on her face but still doesnt open her eyes. He whispers her slowly "open your eyes". She nods as no. He smiles and whispers again in husky tone "do you want me to continue". She immediately opens hers eyes and looks him. He smiles seeing her expression. She hits on his stomach saying "manikkk!!!!".

MANIK : kyaa

Nandini turns her face smiling and doesn't say anything.

MANIK : vaise ab patha chelgaya na ki you can't cheat manik malhotra again and again

Nandini looks him & "cheater cock"

MANIK : achaaa tho tum kya ho

NANDINI : main cheater cock nahi hoon

MANIK : ahhaa tho tum ye batao ki akhir tum karne kya vali thi

NANDINI : main i was giving your reward na

MANIK : yes but not in that way which I asked you

NANDINI : par tumhe tho vahi mila na jo tum chahthe the and closes her eyes biting her lower lip.

Manik smiles and haan. She slowly opens her eyes and looks here and there blushing. He continues vaise mujhe tho mera reward mil gaya par ab tumhari bari hain.

NANDINI : for what

MANIK : for reward

Nandini looks him confused

MANIK : arey tumne bi koyi kam mehanath nahi kiya hain mujhe kaada pilane main tho

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : kya manik main tumhare jaisa nahi hoon ab tum reward deserve karthi ho tho tumhe wo reward zarur milega

NANDINI : I dont want anything

MANIK : aise kaise nahi chahiye main donga aur tum loge bas

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : haaa

He leans forward and she hits on his lips and runs away pushing him.

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : haan manik

She starts running in room from one corner to another and he too runs behind her to catch her.

KABIR : arreyy ruk ruk alia

ALIA : jaldi se aao tum log bi

MUKTHI : yar gar thak tho pahunch hi gaye andar bi chele jayenge bagne ki kya zarurath hain

ALIA : tum logon ko nahi bagna hain tho math bago

DHRUV : chelo guys its waste to argue with her

MUKTHI : manik ki vajah se ye ek din hamari sab ki jaan lelegi

KABIR : haan yar sach bolri thu

They all reach near door and since it was already opened they enter inside the house

ALIA : let's go up guys

KABIR : na bolu tho thu mane vali tho hain nahi tho chel

They start to walk towards upstairs

RAMU : jee ek minute

KABIR : haan boliye

RAMU : aap sab ko kya kaam hain

ALIA : manik se milna hain

RAMU : jee aap nahi mil sakthe

MUKTHI : kyu nahi mil sakthe hain

RAMU : jee saab ne kaha ki agar koyi unse milne aye tho unhe ye kahe ki wo busy hain

ALIA : what rubbish

DHRUV : buddy aur busy

MUKTHI : aisa konsa kaam hain ki wo hamse bi nahi mil saktha hain

KABIR : okkk guys wait kya aap ek bar unhe bathake ayenge ki unke dosth aye hain am sure wo samaj jayega

RAMU : teek hain aap rukiye and goes to manik.

NANDINI : manik bas haa bahuth hogaya

MANIK : haan haan ajao phir main thayar hoon tumhare reward ke sath

NANDINI : manikkk

RAMU : Saab Saab and knocks the door

NANDINI : jao jao jao kuch kaam hoga and smiles

MANIK : kya hain

RAMU : jee wo apse milne

MANIK : maine kaha na ki main busy hoon unse kehna ki wo baad main aaye

RAMU : jee saab

NANDINI : arrey nahi tum jao na

MANIK : miss moorthy aaj tumhe koyi nahi bacha sakthi koyi bi nahi

NANDINI : nahi manik nahi and they both again start running

Here ramu reaches near FAB 4

DHRUV : kya hua

KABIR : kya kaha manik ne

MUKTHI : wo neche ara hain ya

ALIA : hum hi upar jaye

RAMU : jee nahi

All say in unison Matlab

RAMU : unhone aapko baad main ane ko kaha

ALIA : what

KABIR : baad main

DHRUV : aur wo bi hame

MUKTHI : what the!!!!

They all shout together "manikkk"
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Superb updated lovely... Aab ayega Maza manik Kya karega jab fab5 upar jayenge... Can't wait to see their reactions and how he vl hide nandu... Update soon pls
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wow superb
amazing
i love everything in these chapters
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fabulous updates...
liked manan cute fight care romance ...
u penned every scene soo beautifully...
tysm for giving us updates regularly...
like 3/4 chap at one go...that too long ones...
i really appreciate ur hard work...
keep updating...
waiting for nxt chapter...
cont soon
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aweome update yar
wt to say the way u r writing was simple super
they way there fights n cute family happy maoments
the manik father was too good
nw nw manik ka kya hogo fab4 sa
continue soon
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Lovely updates..hope fab4 goes away otherwise Aliya will make a huge drama and nandini will be hurt..please continue soon :)
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Awesome updates.👏
U penned down very beautifully.👍🏼
That kaada vaala thing is very funny. 😉😆
Continue soon. Eagerly waiting for the next update. PM me plz😊

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