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flo205

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Amazing update.
Thanks for updating regularly
really appreciate your work.

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vaishnavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

superb update
cont soon
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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Fabulous update

Loved it

Can't wait to see how is fab gonna react if they saw nandini or how will manik hide nandini from fab4

Plz update the next part soon

Edited by mairaallauddin - 10 years ago

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Wat hpnd dear pls update soon... Waiting

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anumanan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PART 70 :

Fab 4 starts shouting loudly maniks name.

RAMU : arrey aap log chilla kyu rahe hoo

MUKTHI : thaki hamara awaz sunkar wo baag ke ajaye

RAMU : arrey par

They again shout "manikkk"

Mohan listens this sound and comes down.

NANDINI : manik tumne suna koyi tumhe bulara hain

MANIK : haan tho bulane do na

NANDINI : manik jao na

MANIK : haan haan tumhara reward tumhe deke uske baad chela jaonga

NANDINI : nahi manik dekho

MANIK : dekho nandini tum kuch bi karlo tumhe aaj main nahi chodne vala hoon tho just stop running and

NANDINI : tho main bi dekhthi hoon ki tum mujhe pakadthe kaise ho

MANIK : challenge karri ho

NANDINI : kyu dar lagra haan

MANIK : challenge accepted miss moorthy

NANDINI : all the very best mr malhotra harne ke liye

Manik smiles and they both run in entire room throwing pillows at each other

MOHAN : arrey kabir tum log yaha iss vakth

KABIR : haan uncle wo

ALIA : hum manik se milne aaye wo aaj school bi nahi aya tho hum pareshan ho gaye the

MOHAN : haaa wo actually kal rath

Kabir makes his eyes widened & signals no

MOHAN POV : lagtha hain nandini ke bare main ye log kuch nahi janthe hain

MUKTHI : kyaa hua uncle

MOHAN : kal rath usse bukar agaya tha aur tablets ki vajah se suba ut nahi paya tho bas isliye school nahi aaya

Kabir and dhruv gets relaxed hearing this.

ALIA : hoo ab wo kaisa hain uncle

MOHAN : haan teek hain

MUKTHI : sab teek hain na uncle matlab usne kaha ki wo busy hain tho kayi phirse aapke aur uske bech koyi

MOHAN : nahi nahi beta aisa kuch nahi hain sab teek hain

MUKTHI : sorry uncle wo kabi hame milne se mana nahi kartha hain na tho isliye maine socha

MOHAN : teek hain mukthi vaise usse main ne and stops for some time and then kaafi der pehle dekha

RAMU : par saab

MOHAN : ramu tum jao inhe kuch Kane ko lao

RAMU : jee saab and leaves

MOHAN : aao hum baitke bath karthe hain

ALIA : uncle main ek baar upar jake dekhu ki manik kya karra hain

MOHAN : tum jaa tho sakthi ho beta par wo apne kamre main nahi hain

DHRUV : matlab

MOHAN : maine thodi der pehle hi check kiya par wo apne kamre main nahi tha

DHRUV : agar kamre main nahi hai tho phir kaha ho saktha hain

ALIA : uncle aap zara apna phone de sakthe hain main ek baar usse cal karna chahthi hoon

MOHAN : haan haan lona

MOHAN POV : Maine tho uska cell silent pe raka tha tho I guess kuch problem nahi hogi

MUKTHI : kya hua alia

ALIA : its ringing but he is not anserwing

DHRUV : guys I think wo sach main busy hoga tho hame usse disturb nahi karna chahiye

MOHAN : haan beta vaise bi tum log school se direct aare ho tho bahuth thak gaye honge tum log ek kaam karo abi apne gar jao aur main manik se milthe hi usse batha dunga ki wo tumse bath karle

ALIA : nahi uncle mujhe usse mile bina teek nahi lagega

KABIR : par alia hum kab thak aise baite rahenge

MUKTHI : haan alia agar tu chathi hain tho hum phirse rath main ayenge usse milne ke liye

ALIA : main yahi rukungi agar tum logon ko jana hain tho

DHRUV : acha acha teek hain hum thodi der rukthe hain par agar thab bi buddy na mile tho hum vapas chelenge

ALIA : haan teek hain thnx dhruv

Mohan looks upside and gets worried thinking what if they see manan together and as usual our great kabir eyes notice him.

KABIR : girls tum log yahi pe ruko hum bas athe hain

MUKTHI : kaha jare hoo

KABIR : arey bas abi aye kuch kaam hain chel dhruv

DHRUV : par kabir

KABIR : chelna main samjatha hon and they both go out of house

NANDINI : manikkk please ab aur nahi

MANIK : kha hua kuch badi badi bathe karri thi na challenge and all that ab kya hua

NANDINI : dekho manik please mera pet dukhra hain mujhse aur nahi hoga and leans to wall holding her stomach

Manan were standing on either side of bed. Manik suddenly jumps from the bed and reaches nandu's side. Before nandu could react he goes near her and pulls her close holding her waist.

MANIK : miss moorthy I won the challenge

She was panting heavily so couldn't say anything & just tries to free herself.

MANIK : what itni mehnath maine tumhe chodne ke liye nahi ki

NANDINI : manik tum bi thak gaye ho we will sit for few minutes and will again talk about this.

Manik doesn't say anything and drags her on bed. They both fall on bed and close their eyes. They both lay like that for some time and after that manik get ups and takes water bottle. He drinks some water and asks her to drink too. She lazzily gets up and drinks some water.

MANIK : better????

NANDINI : yaaa

MANIK : apne aapko dekha hain kabi matlab tum ho hi itni choti tho phir itna bagne ki kya zarurath hai

NANDINI : ooo hello ye konsi bath huyi ki agar main choti hoon tho mujhe zyada bagni nahi chahiye

MANIK : arrey choti matlab you don't have more strength na ab dekho thodi der main kya halath banali thi apni

NANDINI : stands up and acha tho wait I'll show you how much strength I have and starts hitting him.

MANIK : arrey tum phirse shuru hogayi

Nandini hits him hard and dekho na patha chela ya aur dikao haaa

MANIK : listen just stop

NANDINI : nahi tho what haaa

MANIK : nandiniii

She doesn't stop hitting him and he holds her hands tightly and pulls her strongly that she directly falls on him making him lay on bed. Now manik was lying on bed and nandu was on top of him.

They both have a eye lock and he slowly moves his hands on her arms up to her shoulder. She turns her face and starts breathing heavily. He turns her face to his side placing his index finger on her chin. She looks him and he takes her hand into his and starts kissing it. She closes her eyes and moans his name. He leaves her hand and starts caresesing her face. He slowly rubs his thumb on her lips. She jerks his hand and tries to get up but manik pulls her and this time nandini falls on bed and manik lies on top of her. He entangles his fingers with hers and kisses her neck. She loosens her hands and places them on his neck. He kisses her eyes and then her nose. He slows leans towards her lips and were just inches apart.

Nandini hears some voice and then
"Manikkk"

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : I guess some one is hear

MANIK : door locked hain relax

NANDINI : par manik

MANIK : shhh don't spoil it

NANDINI : manik please

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : kabirrr dhruvvv

MANIK : what

NANDINI : manik kabir and dhruv are here

MANIK : you always want to play smart na but am sorry this time I won't let you win

NANDINI : manik please am not lying

MANIK : I don't want to listen anything and leans forward

KABIR & DHRUV : cough cough

Manik widens his eyes and looks nandu.

Manik nods his head asking with his eyes "kya sach main" and nandu nods his head replying with her eyes as "yesss"

Manik closes his eyes tightly & shit

Kabir and dhruv lie beside them on either side keeping their hands on manik not letting him to get up

KABIR : arrey dhruv yaha tho future planning ki thayari chelri hain yar

DHRUV : haan kabir agar abi se ye sab thayari karenge tho acha hi hain na sab ke le

Nandu feels shy and hides her face bending down on manik's shoulder. manik too couldn't say anything & simply hides his face bending his head beside nandu.

KABIR : haye haye mere pyare love birds ko sharam aari hain

DHRUV : sharam tho ari hogi par uske sath sath gussa bi aara hoga

KABIR : kyuuu

DHRUV : arrey ab agar hum dono aise hi unke baju rahenge tho unhe kitna disturb hoga

KABIR : hooo acha acha

DHRUV : kyaaa kabir sab bathe samjaye nahi jathe samja kar na

Manan were silently listening all this blushing and smiling

KABIR : acha nandini

She doesn't say anything.

DHRUV : buddy

He too doesn't reply.

Kabir and dhruv smile seeing them.

KABIR : vaise manik mana padega ha apne hi gar main apne hi kamre main apne papa ke gar pe hothe hue tu ye sab apne kamre main matlab seriously main aur kya kaho kaise tumhari tharef karu ki u know

Manik turns into total red and not being able to look kabir and dhruv he slowly moves his hands down and taking a blanket covers it on him and nandu.

Kabir and dhruv smile seeing this.

Manik feels relaxed after hiding his face but as soon as he sees nandu again turns naughty.

He slowly bites her ear lobe and she immediately opens her eyes & sees manik. He smiles and then soon she notices blanket on them. She opens her mouth in shock.

KABIR : arrey saaf saaf bolo na chele Jane ko hum chele jayenge

DHRUV : haan hame tum logon ko disturb karne main koyi interest nahi hain

Nandini listens this & slowly slaps manik. She tries to remove blanket from them but manik doesn't allow her.

KABIR : manthe hain ki hamare life main aisa interesting karne ko kuch nahi hain

DHRUV : par iska matlab ye nahi hain ki hum dusro ke life main

Manik takes out the blanket from them & enough guys bahuth hogaya

KABIR : arrey nahi hum log janthe hain ki tum logon ne bas abi abi shuru kiya tho its fine you carry on

MANIK : kabirrr

KABIR : arrey ye chehra itna laal iski vajah hain pyar ya kuch aur

Nandini blushes listening this and manik too smiles little bit

DHRUV : awww meri pyari nandu sharmari hain

NANDINI : guys please

KABIR : haan haan nandu don't worry hum jare hain

DHRUV : and we are extremely sorry haaa

KABIR : haan sach main dil se sorry

MANIK : abey tum dono ki tho and places his hands on both neck

Kabir & dhruv shout to leave

MANIK : kyaa hua thab se dekhra Hoon bole jare ho bole jare ho phir ab kya hua haan bolo na

KABIR : abey chod

DHRUV : chod buddy chod

MANIK : nahi itni asani se nahi

KABIR : arrey mar jayenge

MANIK : wo bi chelega

DHRUV : chod buddy

KABIR : ye aise nahi manega

DHRUV : chel kabir

They both say 1 2 3 in unison and punch manik from either sides hardly. He jumps a little bit shouting aaa and leaves his hands.

NANDINI : ouch manikkk

Manik realises that he was still on top of her and she got little hurt due to his move.

MANIK : sorry soryy sorry tum teek tho ho na

NANDINI : haan

KABIR : zara sambalke manik

Manik gives an angry look to kabir while nandu didn't understood anything.

Kabir & dhruv starts laughing like hell.

MANIK : hasi aari hain na haso haso and starts tickling them both.

All three boys go mad tickling each other and meanwhile nandini frees herself and try to go but manik holds her and starts tickling her too

NANDINI : arey manik

KABIR : chee manik koyi aise tickle kartha hain kya

DHRUV : chelo hum tujhe sikathe hain ki akhir tickle karthe kaise Hai

NANDINI : nahi dekho nahi

They three start tickling here and she laughs like mad rolling from one side of the bed to another.

NANDINI : guysss please please stop it

They all have tears because of their laughter and finally after a long session of tickling they get tired and except nandu all fall on bed. Nandu smiles seeing three of them and while looking them suddenly gets pulled by her love. She lands on his chest and he places his hands around her neck. She smiles and doesn't say anything. Kabir and dhruv too side hug them placing their hands on nandini.

They all smile and close their eyes.

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anumanan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

PART 71 :

Manan eyes were still closed.Manik slowly starts pinching nandu's neck and she hits him back on his hands. He again and again irritates her and she again and again beats him. They both keep smiling but continue to play with each other. Kabir and dhruv see them and feel very happy seeing manik. They were dying to see that smile on his face which was real and was exhibiting his happiness. While they were looking those love birds an unknown tear escaped from their eye which brought a smile on their faces because it was tear of their happiness that finally their best friend got something which he deserved. They both simply wiped their tears and hugged them both even more tighter.

KABIR : saale vaise yehi hain na tera kaam jiski vajah se thu bahuth busy hain

Manik smiles and doesn't say anything.

DHRUV : kabir I guess hame na ab adath dal leni chahiye roj roj ganto ke liye iske liye wait karna aur phir lambi der ke baad usse milne ki jagah kisi aur se ye suna ki wo busy hain isliye shayad hame mil nahi payega and all you know

MANIK : arrey nahi main tum logon ke liye kabhi bi busy nahi rehtha hoon

KABIR : haan haan janthe hain isliye tho hamse milne ke liye mana kiya na

MANIK : wo tho

DHRUV : kabir teek hain na tu ne dekha na ki sach main buddy kitna busy tha

MANIK : dhruvvv

Manan had their eyes still closed and nandu was silently listening this conversation wearing a constant smile.

KABIR : vaise dhruv ham tho phir bi samaj jayenge ki ye busy hain lekin neche jo do mathaye baiti hain na unhe kon samjayega ki

Manan say in unison "kon do"

DHRUV : aur kon mukthi aur alia

Manan open their eyes and shout "what"

KABIR : kyu laga na jatka

They both sit straight on bed and kabir and dhruv too sit straight.

MANIK : tum log ye bath ab kyu bolre ho wo do upar hamare samne aneke baad bolthe ne

KABIR : wooo na darvaza bandh lagtha hain tho shayad wo log andar nahi aa sakthe hain

MANIK : shut up kabirrr

NANDINI : ab kya kare

KABIR : karna kya hain darvaza kolthe hain unhe bulathe hain aur sab sach sach batha dethe hain ki tum dono kamre main ek sath busy the isliye

Manik holds his neck with his one hand and punches his stomach with his another hand

DHRUV : buddy chod usse

MANIK : kyu bey bada phaida utara na situation ki haa and punches him again

KABIR : aaa ab kya kare baar baar aisi mouka thodi milthi hain and winks and smiles

NANDINI : guys stop it please ab main gar kaise jaongi

Manik leaves kabir and "kyu kya problem"

NANDINI : manik agar mukthi aur alia mujhe dekhenge na tho phir

MANIK : tho phir kya kuch nahi hoga

NANDINI : haan kuch nahi hoga par aur bahuth kuch hoga

MANIK : what

DHRUV : exactly buddy nandini sahi bolri hain

MANIK : arrey relax kuch nahi hoga

KABIR : yar tum dono ye kise samjare ho ye kuch nahi samajne vala hame hi kuch karna hoga

MANIK : par kabir agar wo nandu ko yaha dekhenge tho us main konsi badi bath hain

KABIR : beta neche wo log already gusse se bahuth ubal rahe hain kyuki tera gar pe hone ke bavajud tu hamse milne ke liye neche nahi aya hai aur tho aur kisi aur ko ye bolke bijaya hain ki tu busy hai

DHRUV : aur isliye tujhe dekhthe hi wo dono tujhpe vaar karke tera khun peena shuru kar denge

KABIR : uske baad jab wo nandu ko tere sath dekenge jo ki thab se tere sath hi upar hain aur unhe patha chelega ki thu asal main busy iske sath tho

DHRUV : tho tujhe koyi nahi bacha saktha hain

KABIR : ham bi nahi

MANIK : ufff

NANDINI : ayyooo ayyappaaa

MANIK : haan haan bulao bas uniki kami hain abi

NANDINI : tum apna muh bandh karo ye sab tumhari vajah se hora hain

MANIK : ab is main meri kya galthi hain

NANDINI : maine kaha tha na tumse ki koyi bulara hain agar tum thab hi neche jathe tho kam se kam mukthi aur alia itne gusse main tho nahi hothe na

MANIK : arrey mujhe kya patha tha ki ye log honge

NANDINI : haan haan tumhe kaha kuch patha hotha hain

MANIK : listen

NANDINI : ek minute jab wo bayya aye the ye kehne ki koyi tumse milne aye hain tho unka matlab tha

DHRUV : ki wo ham the

MANIK : ohhh shit

NANDINI : aur karo apni marzi ki yehi sab hoga

MANIK : tum mujhe kya bolri ho tumhari vajah se ye sab hua hai agar tum meri bath manthi tho main chela jatha na

NANDINI : arrey tumhe reward dene ka booth cheda hua tha tho main aur kya karthi

DHRUV : reward????

KABIR : kyaa reward

MANIK : haan wooo and stops tumhi bolo ab and looks nandu

NANDINI : wo sab chodo jab isne ye kehke bijaya hain ki ye busy hain tum log yaha iske room main kya karre ho kya bayya ne kuch bathaya ki ye apne room main hi hain yaa

KABIR : haan isne keheke tho bijaya hain ki ye busy hain par alia isse mile bina gar nahi jana chahthi thi tho isliye hame rukna pada aur kisine hame kuch nahi bathaya ki ye akhir hai kaha hamare sath neche uncle bi the jinhone hamse ye kaha ki unhone ise apne kamre main bi nahi dekha hai. Wo baar baar upar bi dekhre the in fact unhone hame bagane ki bi koshish ki par aisa kuch hua nahi tho bas mujhe shak hua ki kuch gadbad hain

DHRUV : aur isliye kabir ne mujhe vaha se keench ke bahar laya sabse ye kehke ki hame kuch kaam hain aur hum balcony se as usual chedke andar kamre main pahunch gaye

KABIR : uske baad jo hua wo sab

MANIK : haan teek hai bahuth boliya ab bas

NANDINI : tho phir ab

DHRUV : ek kaam karthe hain nandini tum na ham dono ke sath chelo hum balcony se neche chelthe hai aur tum vaha se apne gar chele jana kisiko kuch patha nahi chelega

MANIK : what????

KABIR : haan actually idea bura nahi hain hum dono honge na sath tho hum manage kar lenge tumhe darne ki zarurath nahi hain

MANIK : arrey

NANDINI : kuch nahi hoga na matlab tum log mujhe pakadoge na

MANIK : par

KABIR : arrey haan haan tension math le hame bahuth adat hain ye sab cheze karne main

NANDINI : tho teek hain

MANIK : just shut up guys

All three look him and he continues thab se bolne ki koshish karra hoo par kisiko meri bath hi nahi sunni hain aur tum dono kaise matlab kaise aise ideas nikalke lathe hain haan

NANDINI : kyu iss main

MANIK : apna muh bandh karo badi aayi balcony se khud ke jane vali

Kabir and dhruv smile while nandu pouts.

MANIK : listen tum dono neche jao aur main thodi der baad main bi neche pahunchtha hu

NANDINI : aur main

DHRUV : haan buddy nandini ka kya karenge

MANIK : wo yahi par rahegi

KABIR : yahi par matlab

MANIK : yahi par matlab yahi iss kamre main

NANDINI : par main

MANIK : chup jitna kaha hai utna karo aur vaise bi guys ham sab neche sath hi honge na tho kisiko upar nahi ane denge

KABIR : hmmm

MANIK : kuch na kuch karke tum log gar jaldi chele jana bas problem solve ho jayegi

DHRUV : haan tee hain

MANIK : tho chelo you guys start ill join you soon

KABIR : haan haan jayenge byy nandu

DHRUV : byy nandini

NANDINI : byyy

KABIR : vaise kal school are ho na nahi agar aaj ke jaisa kuch plan hai tho

MANIK : tu jara hai ya main

KABIR : jara hoon bey and they start walking towards balcony

Manan will be looking them and suddenly kabir comes and hugs nandu tightly. She gets surprised but hugs him back. Manik too gets surprised but then smiles seeing them. Dhruv too comes and hugs them by side. Manik slowly goes near them and hugs them from another side.

NANDINI : guysss

All three slowly say "hmmm"

NANDINI : you need to go

They slowly break the hug and smile looking each other

KABIR : actually nandu ham log tho jayenge par tum log continue kar sakthe ho

MANIK : kabirrr & tries to hit him but he runs towards balcony with dhruv shouting byyy

NANDINI : sambalke

KABIR : tum log bi zara sambalke

Manan smile and they both soon disappear

NANDINI : chelo tum bi jao

MANIK : haan I'll just change and come wait

NANDINI : hmmm

Manik leaves and nandini sits on bed and soon falls asleep. He comes out and looks her. He gets lost seeing her angelic face. She will be in sitting position leaning to one side of bed. He walks to her slowly and makes her sleep properly. He puts her legs straight up on bed and slowly pull her down keeping his hands on her head. He places her head safely on pillow and kisses her forehead. He tries to move but notices that his shirt was stucked in her right hand. He smiles and slowly freeing his shirt keeps her hands on her stomach. He covers her with the blanket and quickly taking a glance of her leaves from room.

Here kabir and dhruv reach inside house

MUKTHI : guys tum log kaha chele gaye the

ALIA : aur itnaa vakth kyu laga diya

KABIR : hum wo manik ko dundre the bahar garden main

DHRUV : isliye vakth lag gaya

ALIA : tho phir kya hua

MUKTHI : mila kya manik

KABIR : nahi actully

MANIK : wassup guysss

ALIA : manikkk and goes and hugs him

MUKTHI : thank god thu agaya yar and hugs him

KABIR : haan hame tho laga ki tu ayega hi nahi kyu dhruv and both smile

MANIK : shut up

MUKTHI : thu tha kaha itni der se

ALIA : aur hame milne kyu nahi aye

MUKTHI : ye patha hone ke bavajud ki ham tujhse Milne aye hain tu ne hame milne se inkar kar diya

ALIA : aisa kya important kaam tha ki tum hame milne bi nahi aye

MANIK : girls relax

MUKTHI : you know what ham tujse bath bi kyu karre hai hame tho tujhe maar na chahiye

ALIA : haan and they raise their hands

KABIR : girls kya karre ho uncle yahi par hain

They put their hands down & sorry

MOHAN : ek kaam kartha hoon main upar jatha hoon uske baad tum log Jo chaho wo kar sakthe ho

MUKTHI : thnx uncle

Mohan asks manik where nandini was with his eyes and he answers signalling to his room.

MOHAN : chelo beta you enjoy byyy

FAB 4 say byy and he leaves

Mukthi immediately punches manik and he shouts loudly since he was already hurt.

KABIR : shouts loudly mukthiii

MUKTHI : kyaa hua

DHRUV : kuch nahi chelo baitke bath karthe hain

ALIA : pehle manik ko do char laga ne do uske baad

KABIR : girls just stop it hadh hothi hain yar thab se tum log isse milna chahre the aur ab jab ki wo tumhare samne hain use petne ki bath kare hain

MUKTHI : chill kabir thu itna serious kyu hora hain

DHRUV : guys common ham baithe hain chelo and all sit

Kabir,manik,dhruv sit on one couch and alia and mukthi sit opposite to them.

DHRUV : zyada lagi tho nahi

MANIK : nahi teek hain

DHRUV : vaise ye shirt pehen ke acha kiya chot bi nahi dikayi dere hai

MANIK : haan inhe kuch patha na chele ye full shirt pehenliya

KABIR : lekin agar ye tujhe puchenge na ki thu ye shirt kyu

MUKTHi : manik tu ye shirt kyu pehna matlab you don't like this type of shirts na

Manik give a killing look to kabir and he simply turns his face

DHRUV : arrey aise hi pehna hoga

MANIK : haan

ALIA : manik hum tumhare kamre main chelthe hain na

KABIR : kyaaa

DHRUV : kyuuu

MANIk : nahi

Alia and mukthi see there faces & "what"

All three look their faces and what?