Hey mish!! I'll tell u how was it...bt u tell me y did u stop??? I wanted moreee...nxt time pakka lamba lamba cmnts k liye lamba chapter milega??? This ws not short...bt kya hai na...u ended d chapter ek aisi mod pe fr which i ws wanting to read more.."he saw nandini arrived" this made me crave to read more!! I dont hav much patience this time to wait!! Enough of my crap...
Comin to update...i read it twice...! I want to read it again n again..more n more...i dont want to stop reading this chapter!!! Gal..u've written it damn beautifully!! Evry emotion expression scenes..bahanas(alya's bahanas) evrythin ws penned beautifully wid perfection!! Mish u nailed it gal..!!
The song u chose...humdard...such a beautiful song it is!! Wonderful man!!! Manik sleeping beside nandu:). Nandu is fine..nice:). Nandu wants to c manik first:D. MaNan were incredibly awesome!! "Do u know how many times i died...i could not breathe...nandini..." I loved it! ...manik cried...;(..his tears really stabs my heart a million times!! I love u..i love u too...:)). Wow...manan r d best man!! Nandu clutching manik's hand n asking "you promise?"..."i promise":))...the lyrics were suitable fr d situations:). Good choice:).
Navya force feeding nandini..upar se throwing tantrums...hahah...cabir laughin at her...cabir will full confidence agreed to taste it..made a face spat d soup...hahah...now proud..hehe...
Dhruv is always nandu's saviour i guess:). Ultimate saviour is manik ofcourse;). Mukti askin nandu to stop filling dhruv wid compliments...haha...how mny times did manik roll off his eyes in this chapter...hahah..
3 days...manik didnt come to check on nandu...nandu frustrated:D. Fab 5 n navya plan...mission manan...:D. Alya gingerly answering to nandu's loads of questies...hahah..cabir panicked..took mukti wid him...dhruv hell tired..navya..d busiest person in d whole world..!! Hahah..nice bahanas:D.
Manik asking..no no ordering his frnzz to leave d place...gosh..manik kabhi nhi sudhrega! Cabir,navya,mukti,dhruv bashing/scolding/watever manik...hourly based servants..contracted frnz..donkeys...haha..manik askin dat does he look like a fool...dhruv sayin he ws born a fool..ofcourse man manik is a fool..aftrall his nandini has said it;). Dat whole manik vs his frnz ws hilarious! Manik muttering here comes madhubala wid a bang..nice line;). Another madhubala...company indeed matters. True dat..!
Nandu's saree was mindblowing!! She wud look gorgeous in dat!! Nice selection:). Manik's breath stopped...woh toh hona hi tha;). Eagerly waiting fr nxt part!! Cant wait much!! Loved it!!
Update soon...
Thnxxx fr pm:)
Shiv Shakti
