#2 !!MANAN ff!! Selfish and Selfless[ LINK TO THRD 3& index/pg140] - Page 7

Lovely...update thanx..alot😊

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

Hey mish!! I'll tell u how was it...bt u tell me y did u stop??? I wanted moreee...nxt time pakka lamba lamba cmnts k liye lamba chapter milega??? This ws not short...bt kya hai na...u ended d chapter ek aisi mod pe fr which i ws wanting to read more.."he saw nandini arrived" this made me crave to read more!! I dont hav much patience this time to wait!! Enough of my crap...
Comin to update...i read it twice...! I want to read it again n again..more n more...i dont want to stop reading this chapter!!! Gal..u've written it damn beautifully!! Evry emotion expression scenes..bahanas(alya's bahanas) evrythin ws penned beautifully wid perfection!! Mish u nailed it gal..!!
The song u chose...humdard...such a beautiful song it is!! Wonderful man!!! Manik sleeping beside nandu:). Nandu is fine..nice:). Nandu wants to c manik first:D. MaNan were incredibly awesome!! "Do u know how many times i died...i could not breathe...nandini..." I loved it! ...manik cried...;(..his tears really stabs my heart a million times!! I love u..i love u too...:)). Wow...manan r d best man!! Nandu clutching manik's hand n asking "you promise?"..."i promise":))...the lyrics were suitable fr d situations:). Good choice:).
Navya force feeding nandini..upar se throwing tantrums...hahah...cabir laughin at her...cabir will full confidence agreed to taste it..made a face spat d soup...hahah...now proud..hehe...
Dhruv is always nandu's saviour i guess:). Ultimate saviour is manik ofcourse;). Mukti askin nandu to stop filling dhruv wid compliments...haha...how mny times did manik roll off his eyes in this chapter...hahah..
3 days...manik didnt come to check on nandu...nandu frustrated:D. Fab 5 n navya plan...mission manan...:D. Alya gingerly answering to nandu's loads of questies...hahah..cabir panicked..took mukti wid him...dhruv hell tired..navya..d busiest person in d whole world..!! Hahah..nice bahanas:D.
Manik asking..no no ordering his frnzz to leave d place...gosh..manik kabhi nhi sudhrega! Cabir,navya,mukti,dhruv bashing/scolding/watever manik...hourly based servants..contracted frnz..donkeys...haha..manik askin dat does he look like a fool...dhruv sayin he ws born a fool..ofcourse man manik is a fool..aftrall his nandini has said it;). Dat whole manik vs his frnz ws hilarious! Manik muttering here comes madhubala wid a bang..nice line;). Another madhubala...company indeed matters. True dat..!
Nandu's saree was mindblowing!! She wud look gorgeous in dat!! Nice selection:). Manik's breath stopped...woh toh hona hi tha;). Eagerly waiting fr nxt part!! Cant wait much!! Loved it!!
Update soon...
Thnxxx fr pm:)

Originally posted by: prayer_manan

Tht was nyc...But no manan moments...

but I really liked the update as u finally updated...

and ya one more thing...nxt tym dont make us wait

for long...

continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

This is sumthing more dn emotional yaar..uff!! I suffered for breath when..firstly with the song which is my forever fav song.. Nd dn..when..manik said.,''nandini..go to sleep...I will be right here when you wake up'', 'nandini squeezed his hand' nd said, ''you promise?''nd the line.. Lautunga yahaan tere paas mein haan Vaada hai mera, mar bhi jaaun kahin oh god! I really sobbed hard dat time..if u were infront of me dn i would have killed u..ufff...

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Congooo fr the new thread ...

Finally u updated
Nice update
Eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Sm0405

Congooo fr the new thread ...

And it was a very very nyc update ... Now manik knows everything bt Nandini and also both confused to each other ... Wohooo ...

Bechari Nandini ... Hospital ka bekar soup khana pad rha hai ...

And cabir ... He he he ... He was speechless after having the soup ... Yuckkk

So manik has planned something fr Nandini n all the melodramatic frnds of his ...😆😆 he made everybody run fr the prep of his surprise ...

Now waiting to see what u have in store fr USS ...

It was really a gud update ...

And as I say always u r amazing writer ... Always

Plz update soonnniiissshhh ...

like finally a peace maker part after all the rona shona... nandini gained consciousness and the way manik behaved so good of him and all the other characters too did a great job awesome it was and the last part uff a date srsly? okay am wondering what will happen okay no more heart attacks okay?... Vaise u've been updating quite early now-a-days thats good😆,... All in all it was a great update

u describe their every situatins with the perfect songs yr...