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Hey misha! First of all sorry fr not commenting nt evn liking d chapter yesterday as i was hell busy!! I was only able to read d chapter...! N now i've read it again as am lovin ur ff all over again!!! B4 i read it mny more times its better to comment;)...
So here i am...u were accurate gal!! I had a 1000 volt smile plastered on my face!! Thnxx a lott fr updating so early!! Nowadays no writer does dat as all are vry busy...bt thnxx a lot fr taking time n updating d chapter early!! Love u girl...!!
Fab 4 will never go against their rules!! Haha..watchin their frnds' date..hiding behind the bushes n watchin adult films..like seriously i laughed like maniac on cabir's replies to his madhubala...!! That was awesome!!
The pics of the jars of fireflies n fire baloons were enchanting!! They were magical!! Nandini holding a jar of fireflies n lookin at it..the symbol of MaNan love..as manik was present at that place they were glowing to their fullest!! Just magical yaar!!
The song..the lyrics..manik..nandini..music..the ambience..their love..his intense eyes..her blushing cheeks...wowww i so loved this!!!
Manik walking taking measured steps...nandu trying to control her blood rushing into her cheeks...his gaze on her...wow beautiful!!
Sorry u said not to comment on the attire..bt i cant help it! I just visualized manik in that costume...gosh! He was lookin breathtaking!!!! My heart had stopped for a while!! Superb selection mish!! Loved how u described nandu's features i.e her eyes..long dark lashes..tempting lips..her beyong tomato cheeks(hehe)...love how manik notices it every time he sees her:)
manik kissing her forehead first as usual..her cheeks..tracing her rosy lips feeling his effect on her...aww i always love this!!
Back to fab 4 n navya...they are dumbfounded! Haha...which person could speak by witnessing MaNan romance!!! Yeah..even i was like a statue for sometime after reading the chapter!! Cabir praying to navya's devi maa was hilarious!! Like really he's impossible!!!
Their kiss was a bliss!! Seriously it was heaven!! Manik mentally smacked himself for losing it...haha..loverboy!
The dinner place...i was dumbstruck!! I literally could not think of anything!! My mind was blank..it had stopped working!! Seriously you chose a very much suitable word to express nandu's reaction...just three letters..WOW...it really was wow!! Girl u have a very good choice..be it songs outfits venue..anything..your just skilled at it!!
Manik cooked!!!!!!! This was a total shock n surprise too!! Aww how cutely manik said that for the first time he nearly burnt the kitchen and next time the dough was not perfect...aww he's such a cute guy!!
Fab 4 n navya's reactions to manik's hidden talent...haha..their minds are cookin something..!
Manik curious to know nandu's review on his own handmade food...awwiieee...nandu ate everything...i am full..and when manik brought her favourite dessert her stomach is empty..haha..she eating it like she was starving from ages and manik just admiring her...misha ur so skilled at writing girl!! Hats off to you!! The chapter could not be better than this!!!
Nandini wanted to kiss the chef's hand who had prepared the payasam...manik forwarding his hands to nandu..nandu confused..she got to know that manik had prepared it..and after his pleading she kissed it...awww...lovely!!
We need to talk! Hmmm will the talk come in next update???
Again almost a adult film...back to fab 4 n navya..more precisely CaVya...second adult film!! Why are they doing all this publicly!! (i was thinking they are hiding and watchin manan's date then how can it be public?? Am not lying..trust me)...cabir's reply was superb..
Where is manik taking nandini to???? One more magical place?? Noo..am gonna die then! But i would be happy to die then;)
waiting for ur surprises...girl ur very much anxious and excited...ur gonna give us a happiness filled shock!!!
Lambaa comment:)
update soon..will give more lamba comment
thnxx for the lovely romantic date which could not be more romantic than this! Thank you for the pm:)
So here i am...u were accurate gal!! I had a 1000 volt smile plastered on my face!! Thnxx a lott fr updating so early!! Nowadays no writer does dat as all are vry busy...bt thnxx a lot fr taking time n updating d chapter early!! Love u girl...!!
Fab 4 will never go against their rules!! Haha..watchin their frnds' date..hiding behind the bushes n watchin adult films..like seriously i laughed like maniac on cabir's replies to his madhubala...!! That was awesome!!
The pics of the jars of fireflies n fire baloons were enchanting!! They were magical!! Nandini holding a jar of fireflies n lookin at it..the symbol of MaNan love..as manik was present at that place they were glowing to their fullest!! Just magical yaar!!
The song..the lyrics..manik..nandini..music..the ambience..their love..his intense eyes..her blushing cheeks...wowww i so loved this!!!
Manik walking taking measured steps...nandu trying to control her blood rushing into her cheeks...his gaze on her...wow beautiful!!
Sorry u said not to comment on the attire..bt i cant help it! I just visualized manik in that costume...gosh! He was lookin breathtaking!!!! My heart had stopped for a while!! Superb selection mish!! Loved how u described nandu's features i.e her eyes..long dark lashes..tempting lips..her beyong tomato cheeks(hehe)...love how manik notices it every time he sees her:)
manik kissing her forehead first as usual..her cheeks..tracing her rosy lips feeling his effect on her...aww i always love this!!
Back to fab 4 n navya...they are dumbfounded! Haha...which person could speak by witnessing MaNan romance!!! Yeah..even i was like a statue for sometime after reading the chapter!! Cabir praying to navya's devi maa was hilarious!! Like really he's impossible!!!
Their kiss was a bliss!! Seriously it was heaven!! Manik mentally smacked himself for losing it...haha..loverboy!
The dinner place...i was dumbstruck!! I literally could not think of anything!! My mind was blank..it had stopped working!! Seriously you chose a very much suitable word to express nandu's reaction...just three letters..WOW...it really was wow!! Girl u have a very good choice..be it songs outfits venue..anything..your just skilled at it!!
Manik cooked!!!!!!! This was a total shock n surprise too!! Aww how cutely manik said that for the first time he nearly burnt the kitchen and next time the dough was not perfect...aww he's such a cute guy!!
Fab 4 n navya's reactions to manik's hidden talent...haha..their minds are cookin something..!
Manik curious to know nandu's review on his own handmade food...awwiieee...nandu ate everything...i am full..and when manik brought her favourite dessert her stomach is empty..haha..she eating it like she was starving from ages and manik just admiring her...misha ur so skilled at writing girl!! Hats off to you!! The chapter could not be better than this!!!
Nandini wanted to kiss the chef's hand who had prepared the payasam...manik forwarding his hands to nandu..nandu confused..she got to know that manik had prepared it..and after his pleading she kissed it...awww...lovely!!
We need to talk! Hmmm will the talk come in next update???
Again almost a adult film...back to fab 4 n navya..more precisely CaVya...second adult film!! Why are they doing all this publicly!! (i was thinking they are hiding and watchin manan's date then how can it be public?? Am not lying..trust me)...cabir's reply was superb..
Where is manik taking nandini to???? One more magical place?? Noo..am gonna die then! But i would be happy to die then;)
waiting for ur surprises...girl ur very much anxious and excited...ur gonna give us a happiness filled shock!!!
Lambaa comment:)
update soon..will give more lamba comment
thnxx for the lovely romantic date which could not be more romantic than this! Thank you for the pm:)
Cricket
