MORE THAN FRIENDS..!? - PART 12 PG 63

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

awesome update

the convo between the simple super

they really understand each other perfectly

again aliya is gng to dne which she has to regret

continue soon

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

superb update

loved manan s understanding frndship love

liked mukthi kabeer druv supporting manan

n aliya is with whom????????????

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dhrits_24

@dhrits_24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Part A

Oh Freak...how can Alya say those words...Seriously...sooo cheap...She truly deserved a slap...n Manik did the honors...Cabir n Dhruv also supported MaNan...😊...Pt Usha n Usian Bolt ...like seriously a moment ago I felt like crying n here u cracked me 😆😆 bt awesome 👏 for this portrayal so brilliantly...

Part B

Awesome...u hv very nicely portrayed their state of mind...their understanding...their bond...pure...n serene...U hv portrayed Nandu really strong...Like it...entire MaNan convo was bliss...Bt wth is this Alya upto...wn u ended the Muklya convo I felt she is regretting...bt nooo she is on a bigger game wid sum1 else's involvement...I hope d person is not Harshad, n she is not being manipulated by him...n Awww their feeding each other, with teasing, mischief n all...so cute...I know now evn after dey realize their feelings they wont go away frm each other...coz they know they cant stay widout each other...so beautiful...so nicely u hv written...plzzz cont soon...waiting for this Alya's mysterious frnd to come in light...n the mystery to unfold...also waiting for Cupid Mukti, Dhruv n Cabir to get into action...

Plzzz cont sooner...tc 😉

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Alo Manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

~ Big Massive Sigh ~

What a cute, beautiful, adorable and heart warming story. You simply melted my heart away. love the relationship and chemistry that they share - innocent and without boundaries. Just cant get enough of it. Well, but Manik seems to be losing his control and crossing over the not so innocent threshold😆 And believe me, that would be a real treat to watch. Do continue both the FFs soon. ⭐️