MORE THAN FRIENDS..!? - PART 12 PG 63 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting from so long for an update..
Finally gotcha..seripusly amazing..
Aliya seriously deserve this..even one more..
But still that idiot girl didnt got her brain back..
Hope so she will soon realise her mistake..
Poor nandini..and manik too..
Omg in that stage also he was thinking funny..pt usha...hehe.
Loved it..
Update soon..waiting.
Love...mini
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg!! what an amazing update...jus loved it yr...
alya apne aapko kya samjthi hai..poor nandu..i feel so bad...
n wow manik ne slap ki...yippee m soo happy...she deserve that slap
if i ll get chance na then m sure i ll kill her...ufff
btw superb fantastic mundblowing update..
plss update soon ..
desperately waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yay! Awesome update waiting for more! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
well soo sorry for delaying the update which i said would be up within a few hours but m so sorry that i couldn't
i had actually planned to complete the update after the episode but the epic ness that the cv's did left me hell pissed... and then after that i was so not it mood to write anything
and so i had to sacrifice my morning sleep even after having a holiday for the classes so i better get more comments and likes...😉

well and 1 more thing... i didn't want to make it a super emotional update. all that i want to show it their trust on each other, on their relation. how much they mean to each other and how well they can understand each other so if someone didn't like what i tried to show then please let me know.
and sorry for the errors i haven't proof read it yet...

enjoy reading😊

CHAPTER 7 B

-do read the above note-

He went closer to her and tried turning her to face him. And she didn't try to protest. He made her turn around and gently cupped her face. But she still refused to look at him, she was staring at the floor below and this was making him even more restless. He placed his index finger below her chin and lovingly lifted her face to meet her eyes. But once their eyes met, it was as if the world stopped for him. her eyes were swollen and in a dark shade of red due to continuous crying. The amount of anger he was feeling for alya now was increasing with each passing second. He swore to himself that he is never going to forgive her for this deed.

"Jaan...Whatever aly..." He started off but was immediately cut due to a force which almost swiped him off his feet. And it took time for him to realize that it was his nandu who hand pounced on him taking him in a ever so tight comforting hug. He had almost lost his balance but managed it somehow and the only thing that he could think after that was

Manik pov: I was shocked when she suddenly pounced on me, but then I realized whom was I even trying to fool? Myself? Everyone knows how good we are at reading each others mind. And the same happened again. My jaan understood my words before I could even get a chance to form them. I know she understood my need for having some peace before having some serious talk to deal with. I really wonder sometimes what good have I done to receive such an angel in form of a best friend. Best friend?' are we really just best friends? Or maybe...

But his thoughts were broken along with the hug.

Man : Are you fine jaan ? ?( he asked with utmost love cupping her cheeks once again.)

Nan: I'm fine Mani. And you don't need to worry about me. I know whatever Alya said, is not right but it isn't wrong too. I know I was I little hurt when she said all that but now, I'm absolutely fine. She can't decide the purity of our relation mani... And only we know that. And I don't care whatever people think about me or us cause I know no matter what, we will always be together. You will never leave me naa??

Hearing this manic was totally blank not know what and how to react. He was expecting a lamba chauda manaofying session but here this petite girl again proved him wrong. How does she always manages to surprise me' his inner mind was thinking but when he heard her wakeup call asking him to answer her question he smilingly shook his head and pulled her in his embrace once again and replied.

Man : JAAANNN.. tumne toh meri JAAN hi nikaldi thi. You know how scared I was by thinking ki ab tumhare nakhre uthane padenge, your rona dhona and all, gosh its so tiring but thank god you made my job easy... ( he said in a sarcastic tone only to receive a play full punch on his stomach by her but then he continued not wanting to make her more angry...)And about leaving you? Do you think I call you Jaan only for the sake of calling it? I mean it you dumbo! You really are my life, my world, my soul, my everything and leaving you is equal to dying for me. Cause after all how can someone live without their Jaan huh? And about being best friends and more than that then even I don't know what we are but the only thing I know is I can't lose you. I just can't afford it. (and he kissed her forehead lightly while she just closed her eyes trying to understand their relation the feelings and everything ...)

~Alya's house ~

Muk : What the hell are you up to now alya? Are you again trying to plan your stupid silly games? When are you going to understand that nothing and no one can manage to mess their relation. Its too pure and strong to be broken. You will never get manik by playing these sick games.

Alya: No Mukti I understand now. Or rather I'm trying to understand. But trust me no more games from my side anymore. I can't lose his friendship too.

Muk :Last time I somehow managed to save you, that to only for the sake of our friendship but this time trust me I will be the first person to show you your right place do you get that??

(saying this she marched away from the house just when alya received a call...)

Person on the call: So how was it? any progress?

Alya: huh! No... instead things messed up even more. I thought he'll be worried he'll come running to me but here? He was busy romancing that nandini. And I lost my cool.

Person : What the hell how can you do that alya! You spoilt all the plan . I'm sure now he won't even want to see your face. Huh! You're just good for nothing.

( and with this the person cut the call and alya threw the phone across the room.)

~While in MALHOTRA MANSION ~



Manan were still on the terrace gazing the stars. It was midnight now, but who cared. They were peacefully settled on the, mattress specially arranged by manik along with all the other necessities, duvet, cushions, food, water etc. He knew she'll be hungry as they both hadn't eaten anything even at alya's place. He quietly picked up the food from the table beside and brought it in front of her asking her to have it with eyes. But what she did after that just made him adore her even more. She just opened her mouth wide like a child asking his mother to feed him. She was looking soo cute that he just wanted to pull her cheeks and kiss them. But for now her eating something was more important. So even he like a good boy obeyed her and fed her a spoonful of noodles that he had asked the servants to make specially according to her likes. And she happily started munching over it. Seeing her soo happy filled his heart with content but then wanting to have some more fun even he then opened his mouth wide wanting to be fed by her but he was again disappointed and left shocked when his mouth was stuffed with her handkerchief instead of the noodles. Acting to be all furious he pounced on her directly and started tickling her of course after removing that thing from his mouth. And then their mischief continued for some more time. After finishing the food fed by each other they finally retired on the mattress under the duvet having a deep slumber in each others embrace.



END...


soo guys did you like it... well even if not then leave in your suggestions and if you did like it then you definitely need to leave in your comments as that's the only thing which motivates me.

and who do you think this new person is huh? what is alya planning??

how is it going to be? well you'll need to find out on your own 😉😛

till then enjoy the suspense...haha

and ya dont forget to give me likes and comments...


Thank You..😆😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
ITs perfect normally people show.that they hav a crack in their frndship.. nd all.. bt u showed the true trust ... ty.. for it.. his is unique. Nd..plz its just an..suggestion.. as.. alya is planning something.. bt one thing plz never make manan break.. may be some fights r ohk.. bt dont break dem.. just a heartly... suggestion.. bt its ur stry.. u write it ur way.. nd abt ur writing.. u r perfect.. plz .. do post asap .. waiting..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc update👏
cont. soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
fab update dea...
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
you described their pure relationship so beautifully
hope aliya isn't unto any games now...
can't wait for more manan scenes
keep up the good work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg !!Such a cute update
its jus WOW...
I JUS LOved it yr
u pendown very nicely
ur the best writer...n i want to see more manan scene...
manan friendship is pure bliss...m totally in love with ur story...
n alye wht she up to? she got mad o wot ?
i really hate her...n who is this new entry?
ohhh god m soo excited
so plss update ASAP
desperately waiting for ur next update...
keep writing...tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update...loved it...👍🏼...continue soon

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