MANAN:Anything For You ❤️ Chapter 20,Pg 68 - Page 13

waiting for next part
and nice update dear

Wow amazing concept...

nice

Nice update...i like Manik POV...continue soon dear...n thx for the pm..

okay I know I'm late..but kl na late hogya tha sorry!!..coming to update yes it was good and you are improving based on the length...now I want to see jealous nandu..manik should trick her na..and I love it when you mention in his p.o.v..nandu as his crush..hehe..uff!!..mtlb ab kisi ladke ko tumpe 9th grade se crush ho..isse zada kya sweet ho skta hai..rooshugulla bhi!!.. :P...

if possible don't run with seens describe them abit more..just a advise!..

continue soon!!..
Thanks for pm..!!

love kavya :)

Lovely update dea. ..

Aww...our favorite... storeroom scenes...
Excited! 😆

What are uh saying... it's not upto the mark... then my friend uh are wrong... uh know I have been waiting for their differences to finish and wished to see manan scenes and finally uh gave me that... just amazing... I loved the convo... especially manik's dialogue in which he asked that doesn't she believe him... and then promised her that he didn't do anything... and then she said sorry... and then the lights off... after that every scene was awesome... I really enjoyed reading it... it was real fun... thank uh sooo much for the pm dear... really appreciate it... please continue soon... will be waiting... keep up the great work... best wishes... :) :D

Originally posted by: star_struck

okay I know I'm late..but kl na late hogya tha sorry!!..coming to update yes it was good and you are improving based on the length...now I want to see jealous nandu..manik should trick her na..and I love it when you mention in his p.o.v..nandu as his crush..hehe..uff!!..mtlb ab kisi ladke ko tumpe 9th grade se crush ho..isse zada kya sweet ho skta hai..rooshugulla bhi!!.. :P...

if possible don't run with seens describe them abit more..just a advise!..

continue soon!!..
Thanks for pm..!!

love kavya :)

Kavya when it comes to being late na...I'm more late than you 😆 Ab Nandu ko bhi realisation hoga hi na 😛
I will try my bestt to explain them more 😊
Seriously ya...I should brand you as my FF's critic 😆.Thanks for that ya...you have helped me a lot...owe you a big time girl 😊

Originally posted by: cutypie04

Lovely update dea. ..

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

Thank u 😊