MANAN:Anything For You ❤️ Chapter 20,Pg 68

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: star_struck
okay..doll no pm to me..its okay..hotta hai!!..but the update was cute..yes it was..it's just like my childhood..as I'm too youngest in my group and I've to still bare the consequences..put some efforts and increase the length and than it would be perfect ^-^

love-kavya ^-^

I'm sorry...Tumhe miss kardiya...But promise...next update 1st PM tumhe hi bhejungi 😃
Nd coming to the update...I'm glad you could relate yourself to it...
Thank you for the suggestions Kavya. I'll surely work on it 😊

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Hey guys, I'm so elated reading all your wonderful comments. It made my day 😊 Thank you all..And ya I know this was small compared to the other updates but I will try my best the next time.. Also guys...I'm sorry but I will not be updating atleast till Saturday as my exams have begun 😭 ...But promise I will be back with a bang and will upload 2 chapters long ones...ek saath 😉 😊 and I'm also sorry for not replying to all your comments as I'm very busy

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: cutypie04
hpy friendship day dea...
awesome update
continue sooonnn
tnx fr d pm

Thank you dear 😊

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Dhingli44

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#104

Hey Guys,as promised I'm back.and as I said I will be uploading 2 chapters...and ya I'm uploading in installments so I will PM when I complete it.Chalo ab enough of this...Aage badhte hain 😊

Chapter 6-
At Nandini's place-
Chachi,Cabir nd Abeer team up to convince Nandu.After a lot of coaxing , Chachi hits the bull's eye.
Ch-Nandu its Chennai...your home town aur tu toh kabhi wahan gayi hi nai na..
N-(realises it and with excitement says)Aree haan Chachi maine toh ye socha hi nahi.Chalo ab jaldi se packing karte hai..kal nikalna hai na.😃
C-Kal nahi baby doll. Parson..
N-Oh,okay...par packingg karne mein kya jaa raha hai..
Ab-Right...Okay then,so lets start.
C-Lo ye bhi chalu..

Evening-At The Park

M-So guys,sab aarahe hain na.. (looking at Nandu.But she doesn't even shoot a glance at him..He became sad)
Abhi-Yup!!
Na-Bohot mazaa ane wala hain
C-Ooh madam...kripya karke aap black and white Madhubala jaise behave mat karna...mera matlab hai tum ho par karna mat.Kya hai na hamari bhi izzat hai aur tum ham log k saath aarahi ho toh...hamara bhi zara khayal karo
Na-Tum chup raho...tumse kisine kuch kaha..African Gorilla. .
N-Offo tum dono phir chalu jo gaye...kitna ladte ho tum log.
Na-Ladti toh tum bhi ho na(glancing her n Manik)
Al-Chuck all that guys..!!Tomorrow all of us will go for shopping.
N-Par main n Navya toh colony trip k pehle hi gaye the.
Na-Haan!!Hume bhi zaroorat nai hai shopping jaane ki
Anu-I need to go Alya...I'm in..
M-Guys even I don't need to.
Abhi- I'm out
C&Ab-Even me(say together n laugh)
Mu-Count me in Alya
Dh-Me too Alya..(smilingly)
Al-Cool then all of us will go..
Same time at Nandu's house
Ch-Nyo ye dono toh ab tak baat nai kar rahe
Nyo-Han hume kuch toh karna padega
Ch-Par kya!! Dono itne ziddi hai na..khas kar Nandu.Wo Manik se kabhi samne se jaakar baat nai karegi..
Nyo-Mere paas ek idea hai_________
(main aise thodi na bata doongi 😆 )and they both agree to it.
All of them retire to their respective homes.Next day as planned Alya,Mukti,Dhruv,Anu go for shopping while the rest start preparations.
Manik's POV-
Road journey to Chennai is a long one. I'll try to sought out our issues. I hope I'm able to..Nandu was the most excited of all as she was going to her home town for the first time...Last minute packings were going on.Nandu was knocking on everyone's door...and Manik's too in excitement.
Nandu-C'mon guys jaldi karo na..nikalna hai.

Manik's place-

He again heard a knock on the door .
M-Aaraha hoon Nandu.
He again hears a knock.
Anu-Manik its me.
M-Hey,Wo I thought it was Nandini.Come in.
Anu-Need some help.??.
M-No actually I'm done with my packing...let's go down..
Anu-Ek minute Manik..mujhe tumse baat karni hai..
M-Haan bolo

Manik's POV-
Oh Godd!!Kahan phas gaya
End

Anu-Actually... I...I wanted to...ummm...tell you that...(and she pauses)
M-What's wrong why are you stammering!! Installments mein kyu bol rahi ho?!?
Anu- Woh..I wanted to tell you k...okay!! (sighs) It's that I like you Manik..
Manik's POV-
Oh godd!! not mee again...Meri kya galti hai.
End.
M- Look Ananya I know that you like me..but our friendship would be ruined na..don't you think it's a bad idea.!!
Anu- Why do you think so Manik!! Let's try na atleast.
M-But I'm not interested in you like that..I mean the way you like me,I can never like you like that..I look upon you as a friend Ananya,.!!(in an understanding way)
Anu-Ya I know that Manik..but let's give it a try na..maybe you start liking me..!!
Manik's POV-
That's never gonna happen. Why don't you understand. How to tell her I like Nandini...Godd!! Plzz go Ananya. End. M-I don't know ya...(holds his head)
End
Anu-Okay at least for the trip...let's see..I promise if my heart breaks I won't blame you.
M-Fine...But I still think its a bad idea. For db now...let's go...warna Nandu naam ka volcano burst hoga..(Anunya didn't like Manik giving importance to Nandu.But she didn't say anything)

Done guys...next update will be posted soonPlzz like and comment guys.It really means a lot to us writers...Nd if u guys don't like it...at least help us to improve na...Anyways, I will be updating the next chapter today itself...hope you guys like this

Edited by Dhingli44 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

hahaha title update krne ke phele hi padh liya meine..hehe waiting for next than..donno ka comment kar dungi!!..hehe..

PS-I'm missing my friends after reading this re!!

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Dhingli44

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Originally posted by: star_struck
hahaha title update krne ke phele hi padh liya meine..hehe waiting for next than..donno ka comment kar dungi!!..hehe..

PS-I'm missing my friends after reading this re!!

Hehe...okay yaar...I'll upload next one soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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It was amazing finally nandu man gai per anayas track is littke horifieng if she does amything to seprate manan then

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Chapter 7⭐️-

With this both of them leave..Ananya to get her luggage and Manik towards the bus.All of them were already there except Alya and Ananya.All had planned earlier to make Manan sit together so that they can talk and end their fight.., and they put their plan to action.
Manik was happy as he kinda wanted to talk to her. But our Nandu was very annoyed by this. After a while Alya and Ananya too joined the rest.. As usual Anu didn't like Manik sitting with Nandu.So she went there and..

Anu-Nandu do you mind shifting..!? I need to talk to Manik.
N-Not at all. I'd be happy to(anger clearly visible in her tone)

Manik's POV-
God!!What the hell is her problem... How do I talk to Nandu now.
End
C-No Nandu mujhe Anu se kaam hai toh woh yahan baithegi...
N- Toh wo open corner pe baith jaayegi and I don't think Manik will have a problem taking the window seat...problem solved(gritting her teeth)

Anu was happy...Manik was sad and the rest of the gang accepted their defeat having no option. But the rest of the journey was quite enjoyable and peaceful.The sang,they played,they talked, they discussed what all they were gonna do at the camp. But for Manik the journey seemed to be a long one with Ananya beside him... She talked to him about various things and held his hand. Poor Manik couldn't do anything but bear her for the journey.And with all this they reached next day evening.
After reaching, the camp incharge greeted them and took them to their rooms.Ther rooms were such Alya n Ananya,Mukti n Nandu n Navya, Cabir n Abeer, Manik n Abhi n Dhruv. They met for dinner where they discussed what field they would take.Nandu n Navya took up classical(both dance and singing), Alya and Ananya-crafts, Dhruv and Mukti-guitar and electric guitar, Ab-mechanix and science based models(like batteries and circuits),Manik and Cabir sports and Abhi would go on with some group gatherings in the evenings and kids ka play time was under him. Like this age group wise they would do it..

Next Day Morning-
All kids gathered in the hall for introduction and to know who's teaching what.All had a gala time..by then it was lunch time en they had food and after thodi der...they all started playing...Nandu and Ananya were already frustrated. Nandu ka phone broke and Anu was having a headache.Both were going towards the room when Cabir told Nandu to go to the storeroom that was a bit away from the camp site...once she entered he locked the door from outside..She enters and "Tumm...!! she yells at the top of her voice...(after a pause) Ohh now I understand tumne hi Cabir ko bola hoga na mujhe yahan bhejne k liye...Par mujhe tumse koi baat nai karni Mr.Malhotra".
M-Ho gaya tumhara chillana..!? And shows her the msg he got.
N-Toh phir tumne nai bulaya toh kisne.?
M-Maybe ye hamare friends ka plan ho...to make us end this useless,baseless fight...
N-Baseless nai Manik tumne meri diary li thi...isiliye main tumse baat nai kar rahi
M-(sighs!! and after calming down) Nandini I didn't take it...wo mere table pe tha nd just when maine haath mein liya...u came...
Nandu is in a deep thinking mode...
M-I swear yaar...infact I should be angry with you coz tumne mujhpe trust nai kiya...

Nandini's POV-
Kya wo sahi keh raha hai...!?I think maine hi overreact kar liya...coz he knows wo diary mere liye kya hai...
End

N-Promise says she forwarding her hand...
M-(smiles) Promise...keeping his hand on hers
N- Woh...umm...maine...I think...
M- It's okay...maaf kiya (like a royal...raising one hand...with a smile)
N-Okayy..!! Thank you
M-Aree I mean...apni sentence toh compleye karo...
N-I was just kiddingI'm sorry...I think I over reacted(with a genuine smile)

Outside The Storeroom-

C-Wah Chachi aapka plan toh kaam kar gaya...
Ch-Ye idea purana hai par kaam zaroor karta hai...Nyonika ne kya idea diya..
C-Ya...you guys are quite quick haan...in such things Chachi...
Ch-Hamare Sharukh k fan hone ka koi toh faayda hua na

(My note-Wondering Chachi kahan se aaye)

Let me take you to a Flashback-

Nyo-Kya kehti ho...!?Dono k paas aur koi raasta hi nai hoga..baat karne k siway..
Ch-Badhiya hai...aur kuch der baad light bhi band kar denge..kyuki Nandu ko bada darr lagt hai andhere se aur jab saath mein Manik hoga na toh ye kuch dino mein jo grudges ho gaye honge na..wo bhi mit jaayenge..!!
Nyo-Yess...toh tair raha...tum wahan agli flight se chale jaana...aur kaam ho jaane k baad wapas aajana...aur kyuki weekend hai...koi problem bhi nai hogi..!!
Ch-Okay done..!!

End

Inside The Room-
M- It's okay..!!
N-Ab chalein..?!?
M- Yup

But to their dismay when they tried to open the door it was locked.They were so engrossed in their conversation that they didn't notice it at all...And outside,Cabir n Chachi enforced their plan and switched off the lights...
As expected Nandini freaked out and gaped the wall for a hold while shouting a sudden yell "Manik"
M-Nandu,I'm here...he found her hand nd held it.Nandu tightened the grip..
N-Manik!! Hum lock ho gaye hain n lights bhi chali gayi...Ab..!!Kuch hogaya toh..Mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai (she said in one breath and held Manik's arm)
M-Relax Nandu...I'm here na!! Wait a minute saying this he switches on his phone's light..
(she calmed a bit and both sat down.Nandu still not leaving his hand)
M- You okay..!!
She nodded in a Hmm.

Manik's POV-
I need to distract her otherwise last time k jaisa she'd go all dizzy n weak..
End

M-Acha Nandini...ab ye toh batao k jiski wajeh se hamne itni ladai ki wo diary mein aisa kya hai...?! (and he was successful)
N-Kyu batau main tumhe..wo meri personal diary hai na..!!
M-Ohh toh nxt time I would read it...u know I'm curious ki what's in it.. (in a naughty tone said Manik and received a slap on his arm)
N-Dare you Mr. MANU Malhotra...
Manik gives her an angry glare and she giggles...
N-Acha waise...How's it going with Ananya haan...?!! (in a teasing tone)
M-(This was it for him to get the shock of his life...)You heard..!!
N-Ya wo main tumhe bulaane aarahi thi na and when you both were talking
M-Ooh..!!
N- What ooh..?
M-Woh...I donno how to make her understand ya...I don't like her that way...!! I don't wanna ruin this beautiful friendship.. But she just doesn't seem to understand...
N-It's ok...she asked you to try for this trip na...so try...after that you see what you want yo do..!!

Manik's POV-
Great...your crush knows about your trial relationship. What could go more worse..
End

Nandu's POV-
Ye Ananya ko samajhna chahiye na...jab Manik ne mana kiya toh.Par wo toh zidd lagaa k baithi hai.Humphh...Silly girl..!!
End.

Just then Manik's phone dies as the battery finished and the light goes off...
N-Manikk...!! And again holds his arm..
M-Nandu the battery died...but don't worry. I'm here na.
She rests her head on his arm and he feels her silently weeping...
M-Nandu don't cry ...main hoon na kii nai aayega.Shh..!! (In the most sweetest voice by cupping her face with the other hand)
N-She just Hmmed...

Manik kept patting her cheeck to calm her and she slowly drifted into sleep...

Lo hogaya..!!I know it's not upto the mark and that's why I'm ready for a poor response too...But trust me this was my best at this point of time...I'm really busy with my college and stuff and my lappy is spoilt...I have updated this from my Tab and it is not at all an easy job...!!
Enough of my blah blah...!!I still hope you like this..Next update as soon as possible..
#okaythanksbye

Edited by Dhingli44 - 10 years ago